Karna-Vrishali OS- Farewell to you ,My Love! Completed - Page 3

Beautiful Riti! Each and every emotion was put forth effortlessly. So touching!😭Great job!👏⭐️

Ohh..I cn totally imagine karna-vrishali sitting quietly, speaking in their own language.. Lost in their own world...this is a perfect goodbye...😭😭 Edited by MBcrazyfan - 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Brahmaputra

😲.😲 Is this how you write when you find writing is difficult?
I think I am feeling a lot of emotions left unwritten in between!!!! Even the , this is so beautiful. What makes it beautifull-er is what left unwritten. I can see the scenes running before my eyes!!! You have an aesthetically different way of expressing Karna's inner turmoil. Beautifully written!!!⭐️

Originally posted by: .Vaikartana.

Speechless Riti👏👏👏Iwas teary eyed as I completed this OS.And still I feel a lump in my throat.You are the BEST in writing emotional stories Riti You make the readers feel the pain.BEAUTIFUL Riti Loved it so much.

 

Originally posted by: ramya06

Beautiful Riti! Each and every emotion was put forth effortlessly. So touching!😭Great job!👏⭐️

Thank you dear for lovely comment😊

Originally posted by: MBcrazyfan

Ohh..I cn totally imagine karna-vrishali sitting quietly, speaking in their own language.. Lost in their own world...this is a perfect goodbye...😭😭

Originally posted by: adithyan

Brilliant...

Res😳 Edited by KrishnaPriyaa - 7 years ago