SS61 Candy Cane & Abhi ke Abhi - Page 59

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Posted: 6 years ago
nisha i see your green are u updating?
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by moonwearer


Unspoken words from a heart

Indictment for an assumed transgression

The thought rankles me

Devoted to her I am totally

Even in intent mean no ill

A prank I orchestrated

Touched an unintended target

The skewed twist leaves me shattered

A feeble step I took my plea

Spurned by those that cared

Her understanding is what matters to me

I d go on my knees unasked

Plans she made to stay afield

Plans I made to restore peace

My priced asset abandoning me

Is more than I can abide

A cross I bear that Ma I let go

The pain of desertion recurs

Determined I am to salvage the situation

Ma had not voiced her hurt

None had sensed her pain

The gore that ensued had left us dissipated

Years we have taken to recoup

The vivid memory repulses me

I dread what an Alpha male can do

In nature i have found solace

Clarity emerges in forsaken places

I wish to go unnoticed and obscure

I seldom share my identity

I stand for all that I believe and value

Please them I care for in unobtrusive ways

Love and undivided attention is all I need from her

Drench and douse her in my love and care

Remorseful and distressed that my intent is in doubt

I writhe alone await her arms to hold me in a tight embrace

Acknowledging we belong to each other

 

If only he can acknowledge that loud and clear to ll
I will b at peace 
Posted: 6 years ago
Charlie he is not a guy who can wax eloquent he cannot rewrite his past mistakes even the prank but how he deals with it does show he cares ...they are fictional characters yet if we read like II  asks even in intent he will not cheat as he holds that as the reason he lost his ma..my point of viewWink
Edited by moonwearer - 6 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
Also I want to confess, I am not a therapist, not a expert on humans or relationships. I mess up my own relationships every day. I narrate this story based on how "I feel" the leads would react, I try to go into their heads when I write from their POV

I dont know what the "appropriate" feelings should be or emotions should be.

I try to make them both feel open and exposed frequently. Vulnerability brings out the best in all of us

I want both to feel equal or substantial amounts of pain as they both discover love in the other person



Posted: 6 years ago
Good morning everyone !!
Wht I can see from here
We hav not seen wht his prank was.. As II never went to meet them !!
Yup he invited his friend but " the prank" wht can we say!!

He hurted and went into a dark territory II is avoiding since she met him
Seeing him there sitting with someone in that position increased her insecurities
Which she was suppressing by now!!

And all this incident has again scratched his wound
He was trying to forget
But scandal is something which will never leave them
Either it is Ranjan or him , Sam or manny
Posted: 6 years ago
when the dude thinks that II thinks he'll cheat because it is in the family genes.
Why doesn't he think that maybe its also because of his previous affairs? why was only Ranjan scandal only considered when infact his previous way of living life is one big reason?
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by Aina91


when the dude thinks that II thinks he'll cheat because it is in the family genes.
Why doesn't he think that maybe its also because of his previous affairs? why was only Ranjan scandal only considered when infact his previous way of living life is one big reason?

Spot on! 
Yehi baat maine puchi kal... And itna direct I couldnt convey mere doubts ko. 



Behwn... Kahan rehti ho tum??? Aise kaise tum mere mann ko padh lwti ho LOL
Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by Aina91


when the dude thinks that II thinks he'll cheat because it is in the family genes.
Why doesn't he think that maybe its also because of his previous affairs? why was only Ranjan scandal only considered when infact his previous way of living life is one big reason?

She knew his past relationships and married him.. He stays in Paris most of the time where one of his ex stays, with whom he had 4 to 4.5 yrs of relationship.. So II should everyday live in fears... He has come out of his past relationships, it has been close to one year the guy is completely into her.. He knows his past cannot be erased and she also knows it... If he says sorry or promises will she come out of her insecurities? He was in relationships not cheated on anyone like Ranjan(I believe he is not)..

Looking at all these things II should not stay in Delhi.. She should go to Paris..
If he can cheat on her in Delhi so in Paris...

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