MANAN TS 'ishq haazir hai' chapter 1 pg 2

Hey guys...
I know many of u doen't know me...
I m a regular reader and commenter of many of ur stories... but till now never written any...
Coming to story if i say that I have written this then i m absoulutely wrong because it is a short punjabi story of my fav actor, singer, music director Diljit dosanjh...
I will be updating story till next week i guess... busy with family functions.. but thought to share the concept...

CONCEPT AND CHARACTER SKETCH...

MANIK MALHOTRA- yuvraj of a raj mahal in punjab... Handome, dashing, a person whose one look is enough for any girl to die for... loves his parents... would be king of his palace... returning from UK after 12 long years...

RAJ MALHOTRA- father of manik.. very sweet in nature... love his wife, manik and nandini alot...
Can do anything for them...

NYONIKA MALHOTRA- mother of manik... rani maa for nandini... loves her like her daughter... a perfect example of a loving mother, wife and rani...

SHIV MOORTHY- general manger in short GM of raj mahal... a very loyal officer... love his daughter very much... a very sweet and caring father...

NANDINI MOORTHY- a sweet bubbly girl... childhood friend of manik both were best friend before manik's departure... would be docter... loves her family... respect elders... a perfect girl without any fault...

Others characters will be introduced in the story if will needed any...

CONCEPT..

Manik is returning after 12 years... nandini is impateintly waiting for him.. lets see how they meet again... what happens when manik return... will he be the same manik... her mani or will be changed... what will be their reactions... and how at the end manik will say ISHQ HAAZIR HAI...

P.S- guys i m writing for the first tym dont know how it will gonna be...
P.P.S -NO PROOF READING... IGNORE ERRORS...

Will be posting part one in weekend i guess...
till then show ur response...
Like and comment if u like the concept...
For PM's buddy me...

LOVE, AAROHI...

Loved the concept... Sounds interesting..

Hey,

hey aarohi...

Awesome concept would love to read more Updt soon

Hey guys i m here with the first chapter before weekend so plz shower ur love through likes and comment...

One more thing they are basically from punjab so some words can be punjabi so if u cannot understand feel free to ask

CHAPTER-1


Finally everyones wait in the palace was going to over... whole palace was decorated like a bride.. why not after all their yuvraj was coming after 12 long long years... but there were two persons who were beyond happy... guess who were those two...
Ofcourse nyonika and nandini...
For nyonika her only son was coming after a long tym and as a mother explaining her feelings is very difficult...
And for nandini her childhood best buddy her mani was coming back... she took charge of all the responsibility of manik's welcome to his needs... she was very excited to meet her best friend...

Everyone was standing at the entrance of the palace and were waiting for manik's arival... their were girls standing in line with a plate of rose petals in their hands... all were very happy...

GM- Raja sahab yuvraj ab bas 5 min mein pahutchte hi honge...

Raj-woh toh thik hai par shiv yeh nandu kahan hai nazar hi nhi aa rahi...

Nyo-haan dikheye na bachi ne kitna acha kaam kiya hai...

GM-ji rani sahiba bas aati hi hogi subah se toh yahi thi...

Just then nandu came panting heavily with a bouquet in her hand...

Nyo-are nandu beta kahan reh gayi thi tum

Nandini-voh ranimaa manik aa rahe hai na toh socha unke liye apne haathon se bouquet bana kar lau...

And here enter 5 big cars in the main entrance of the palace...

GM-lijiye yuvraj bhi aa gaye...

from the middle car comes their yuvraj, geeting down from the car buttoning his blazer with his famous smirk on his lips... and starting walking towards his family and all the girls starting showering rose petals on him...
He first comes to his dad.. touch his feet and hug him...

Manik- hey dad...

Raj-howz my son..

Manik-perfect as always...
Then turns to his mom who had happy tears in her eyes... after watching his son... he comes and took her in a bone crushing hug...

Nyo-mera bacha (emotionally cupping his cheeks)
Manik felt irritated from the constant showering of flowers so turns towards the girls he said sternly...

manik-stop it... (turning towards nyo) maa itna vela (free) kaun tha jisne yeh sab kiya??
nandu hears thia and was feeling sad and her face fell down..

Nyo-beta 12 saal baad tum ghar aaye ho inti khusiyaan toh banti hai na...

Manik-maa jab tak aapka aashirwad mere sath hai khushiyaan humesha bani rahengi...

Nyo-jeete raho (cupping his cheeks and placing a kiss on his forehead)

Then nandu offer the bouquet to him...
Manik-ab yeh phool todne ki kya zaroorat thi??

Nandu-(stammering) pa...r me..i..ne toh tu..m..haarein

Manik-(cutting her off) itne sunder phool tod diye... strange...

Raj-(changing the topic) chalo sab ander chalo...

Nandini stands their alone and feels very bad...

Nandu-(self talk) sach kaha hai kisi ne patharo par phool nhi chadane chahiye...


AT NIGHT...
LOCATION: RAJ MAHAL LIVING ROOM...

Manik-aapke hath ke khane ke chakar mein zyada kha gaya mom...
(Just then nandu enter with kheer tray)

Nyo-maa ka pyaar tha zyada toh hona hi tha... (turning towards nandini )beta ji yeh hai nandini apne GM sahab ki beti... yeh 2 mahine baad doctor ban jayegi...

Manik-haan maa pehchana... 12 saal ho gaye par nakhra same ka same (mocked her)

Nandini-12 saal mein jab akad change nhi hui toh nakhra kaise change ho jayega?? (Offering kheer to him and replied taunting)

Nyo-beta ji aap dono hi change nhi hue...

Manik-mein chai pee raha hu (showing her the cup).. pausing in between... aur vaise bhi mujhe kheer pasand nhi...

Nyo-par beta kheer toh tumhari fav hai

Manik-fav thi maa ab nhi...

Nyi-kyun??

Manik-meine chod di...

Nandu feel bad but gave the bowl to raj...

Raj-wah bhai wah kheer toh badi swad hai

Manik-maa 12 saal mein yahaan par kitna kuch badal gaya... ghar badal gaya... sheher badal gaya.. mujhe koi aisa chaiye jisko sara pata ho aur vo mujhe sara seher ghuma sake...

Nandu was serving kheer to nyo...

Nyo-nanfini beta GM sahab bata rahe the tumhare exams khatam ho gaye hai aur tum free ho tih tum manik ko

Manik- (cutting her off) maa mujhe help chahiye doctor nhi chahiye...

Nyo-beta tum bhi na...

Manik-anyways dad mein bahut thak gaya hu toh mein sone ja raha hu... good night dad.. good night mom..

Manik left givinga last glare to nandu...

While nandu turning towards nyo- ranimaa aap bilkul chinta mat karo yeh ghar bhi apna hai aur sheher bhi mein sab sambhal lungi...

So here end the 1st part...
Lets see what happens next...
how things are going to turn...

Waiting for ur comments and like... next part only when i will get comment warna i will not continue...

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LOVE,
AAROHI...

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Good Going aarohi, hhmmm so you were scared how it will be like???

Manik ka gussa 😛
Love this nok-jhok of MaNan..

Really looking forward to it.. Update fasterr!! 😉