Wow... What a beautiful OS...
Splendidly written...Missing Raya magic which you solved with your OS..Please do write more
Wow... What a beautiful OS...
Splendidly written...Missing Raya magic which you solved with your OS..Please do write more
Originally posted by: Ramsakshi
This was amazing OS
Beautifully written I love your writing
Plz do write more
Originally posted by: Sakshiashu
I absolutely love your stories and this is another brilliant one.
The ghazal's lyrics perfectly complement the feelings of the characters in the OS but I felt the story is incomplete.
Please do write more often.
Originally posted by: Janilover
"Tumhe Dil lagi Bhul jaane Padegi"
Mohabbat Ki Raho me Aakar to dekho"This is the Qualli By legend Rahat Fateh ali khan and i am writingraya scene on this since month but every time i deleted bcoz the scene is not fitting with the lyrics and when i read Your Os i was dumbstruck.😲The exact scene exact moment and excat word i wanted in my Os and you updated wow just amazing The scene suited to the lyrics No word can describe the awesomeness of this OSWas thinking about Your story(Dil to hai dil if i m not wrong in which she fallen in love with her fiance's friend Ram) Do continue this and please write more Os on ghazals you are AwesomeAman
Originally posted by: shonuz_mom
Very nice OS.
awww deear what a awesome cobination of love & music... in simple sobar way I just loved it too good Flashback momnts were master strock so as ppresent one... but why did Priya left Ram or it was based on after 5 years sepration or what? but what ever was it it was too good awesome to read I must say I enjoyed it a lot & missed it too...waiting for more ffrom u but this time extra romentic one...
Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal
Diehard fan!! ur story :-/ jaldi update it plzzz
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