HUMSAAYA # 5 Updated Pt-72 / Pg 129 - Page 68

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -indu-




Hello Guys...


Glad to see me...๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†...


I know i just disappeared... ab kya karen... first bachi ke exams.. then holidays and then again school... was triple busy...


and added to that... my laptop is completely dead which had the update...and now i had ti type everything again...๐Ÿ˜ญ...  i had to wait for something... then i got my ipad... thank to my bro... and started typing... so i will be updating very soon... may be tonight... ๐Ÿ˜‰


so how many of you are waiting...


kya kare... maaneet ka ek kiss hojaye๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†




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ab jaldi se type kar aur post kar..





Edited by Rashmi... - 7 years ago
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Maaneet Kiss?
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Waitingg...
Update soon...
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hi thanks da note! Of cos waiting!!!
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Lovely story

Maan and Geet are married while Meera thinks she is married to Maan now she has been having some kind of flashes and she is confused she also dislikes the fact that Maan seem to always care for Geet and not her
Maan and Geet having some issues and slowly with time it will be sorted
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Waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting 
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hey eagerly waiting...thanks so much for updating...!!!
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Part -70



 

Anu... DEkha.. maine kaha tha na... koi na koi reson zaroor hoga... Wow... TOKEN OF LOVE ... how thoughtful...


Geet kept on looking at the gold coin...


Anu continued - Geet tu uss baat ko chodo na.. Maan bhai kitna try karr rahe hain... woh sach mein...

 

Geet ... tumhe kya lagta haia Anu.. main try nahi karr rahi hoon... par mujhse naho horaha hai... koi aur yeh baat kehta toh shayad itna bura nahi lagta... lekin Maan... Maan ne kaha toh ...

 

Anu - tumne dekha na.. Naina bhabhi ki maa kaisi baatein karr rahi thi...unhe pehle se hi bhabhi joint family mein rehna pasand nahi tha.. aur unki shaadi bhi kam umar mein hui... unhone oppose bhi kiya.. lekin Naina bhabhi ke dad ne haa kehdiya... unhe veer bhai bohut pasand aaye aur toh aur Maan bhai ne khud jaake baat ki... toh woh na nahi kehpaaye.. lekin Naina bhabhi ki maa ko pasand nahi tha...

 

Geet listenes calmly... and Anu continued...

 

Anu - dadi kehrahi thi... jab Naina Bhabhi aur veer bhai ke  shaadi ke baad ghar mein aayi toh suddenly unpe zimmedaarian aagayi...bhabhi choti thi aur poori ghar ki zimmedari... shaadi ke kuch din baad dadi ki tabiyat kharab hogayi aur doc ne unhe bed rest lene keliye kaha... Naina bhabhi ne ache se sab sambhala... dadi ka khayal rakha.. hum sab ka bhi... aur phir woh pregnant hogayi... veer bahi aur Naina bahabhi tayyar nahi the...bache ke liye... Naina's Mom ki gussa hogayi... unhe toh shaadi pehle se hi pasand nahi tha... aur phir ghar ki zimmedaari... phir pregnancy... aur Naina bhabhi bohut weak hogayi thi... unhone yeh tak kehdiya... ki hum sab Naina bhabhi ki jaan ke peeche pade hain... Naina bhabhi ko na chahte hue bhi maayka jana pada... kyun ki yaha unke dekhbaal karne wala koi nahi tha... dadi toh bimar thi... and she was still recovering... Maan bhai aur veer bhai office mein busy... main aur rb toh chote the aur just college jana shuru kiya...aur delivery ke baad bhabhi yehi aagayi... ek mahine ke andar... tabhi dadi ne lachi ko kaam pe lagaya... sirf Naina bhabhi aur angel ki dekhbaal ke liye...Naina bhabhi ki maa aisi hi hain... unko sirf bhabhi , veer bhai aur angel hi pasand hain...  aur who galat bi nahi hain... dadi ne bataya Naina's Mom uss din bhi aise hi baatein karr rahi thi... pata nahi unki baatein Maan bhai pe kitna asar kiya... lekin unhone kuch nahi kaha... lekin shayad jab angel ko tumhare saath dekha toh unke muh se woh sab nikal gaya...

 

Geet listened to what Anu said... till now nobody said anything about that day... she is feeling bad coz of her they went through that much...

 

Anu - ek baat kahoon... veer bhai aur Naina bhabhi ko bhi tumpe gussa hona chahiye tha ... lekin unhone kuch nahi kaha... aur tum apne hi pati pe naraz hoke baithi ho... bechara kab tak bhooka rahega... unke ka bhi zara khayal rakho...

 

Geet - Anu... chi chi babaji dono bhai behen besharm hai... tujhse yeh sab main bhi poochongi jab rohan se teri shaadi hogi...

 

Anu - chill Geet... main teri tarah nahi hoon... i am open you know... and she winked at her...

 

Geet - haan aaj pata chala tum besharm ho...

 

Anu - ab serious baat hojaye... bol Maan bhai ka kya karegi...

 

Geet - kya karna hai unka... woh toh ache hi haina...

 

Anu - mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaraha hai... ek taraf kehti hain ki Maan bhai ache hain... aur doosri taraf unse hi naraz hai...

Geet - haa... mujhe bhi samajh nahi aaraha hai kya karoon... ek taraf dard hota hai .. aur unko dekh ke doosri taraf...

 

Anu - door raha nah jaata... haina... bolo... Maan bhai ke sapne bhi aane lage hain kya...

 

Geet blushed... and Anu caught her... oho... blushing... matlab sapne dekhne lagi hai tu...

 

Geet - theek hai... main sochungi... ab toh chup hoja...

 

Anu - thanks Geet...

 

Geet - thanks mat bol... lekin ek baat boloon... mujhe yeh acha lagraha hai... Maan ke gifts.. aur unka mujhe manana...

 

Anu - ohh.. toh yeh baat hai... umm... mujhe bhi bhai ke ideas ache lag rahe hain... aaj ka gift hogaya... aur mujhe abhi se next gift ka intezar hai... abhi se... Anu laughed... tumse zyaada mujhe main interested hoon...

 

Geet - haa.. woh toh hai... har gift alag hai...ajeeb bhi... aur saath mein unka message ...

 

Anu - Geet... suno... abhi kuch mat kaho bhai se... mujhe pata hai tum utni naraz nahi ho jitni ki uss din... kam hogaya teri narazgi... par abhi bhai ko kuch mat bolo... bas naraz rehne ka natak karr... dekhte hain aur kya kya gifts dete hain...

 

Geet - matlab tum gifts ke liye apne bhai ko tadpana chahti hai...

Anu - arrey Geet... yeh har baar thode na hoga... mujhe pata hai ... Maan bhai ek hi baar galti karte hain... unhe dohrate nahi... tumhe aage aisa mauka nahi milega... bhai ka manane ka... toh abhi uska poori tarah faayda utha...

 

Geet - lekin Anu... yeh toh...

 

Anu - arrey kych nahi hoga... tu itni jaldi Maan jayegi toh kaise chalega... biwi ho unki... you are his wife and its your right to get mad at him.. some times...

 

Before Anu could say anything more they reached KC... they got down and they heard someone saying good morning...they turned and  it was Sasha...

 

As per Maan's punishment Sasha stood at the entrance waiting for Geet...

 

Sasha - Good morning Geet Maan... and she was about to take Geet's bag...

 

Geet moved back as she was frightened by Sasha's sudden action...

 

Geet - what are you doing... stay away from me...

 

Anu - what is all this Sasha... stay in ur limits and stay away from Geet... if Maan bhai sees this...

 

Sasha - I am sorry to interrupt man... but this is my punishment... yesterday Maan sir ... said... I have to be ps to Geet ... Geet mam... I have to do her every work... I have to carry her bag... serve her everything she wishes to drink or eat.. carry her files... I have to do everything... Sasha said keeping her head down...

 

Geet - punishment... what punishment...

 

Sasha just dipped her head... Geet again said...koi zaroorat nahi hai... main Maan se baat karungi...

 

Geet entered KC and Anu followed her... and Sasha too followed her

 

Geet asked pinky for Maan ... but Maan was in a meeting ... so she has to wait...

 

Geet turned and saw Sasha standing behind her...

 

Geet is startled... Sasha mam.. plz... give me some space... you are... leave it...

 

She was about to follow her...

 

Geet saw it and said... plz.. mama... stay away... and I mean it...

 

Geet and Anu went to their work places and started doing work...

 

Geet - Anu.. yeh kya hai... yeh Sasha mama mere peeche kyun padi hai

 

Anu - pata nahi... bhai se hi poocho... Sasha ne kaha ki kuch punishment haina...

 

Sasha entered Geets cabin after a knock...

 

Sasha - mam... its your medicine time... and here is ur juice...

 

Geet - Sasha mam... you don't have to do it... plz... you are ...

 

Sasha didn't say a word and left from there...

 

Geet saw Sasha walking to her new place... a cubicle... near Geet's cabin... Sasha at on her chair defeated... she didn't dare to look around... but Geet saw... everyone is seeing her... some are laughing... and some felt pity... and some concerned...

 

Geet thought... no... this is not the way to punish anyone.. she saw the time... still time left for Maan to finish his meeting...

 

She sat and started to do her work...

 

Everyone was busy till lunch and Geet didn't get a chance to ask Maan.. she tried to ask adi... but he gently told her to ask Maan sir... Geet didnt want to ask anyone other than adi.. she kept quiet... she decided to ask Maan only...

 

It was lunch time and as usual... lunch came from km ... veer, Maan , Anu and Geet has their lunch ... Maan and veer discussed their work and both the girls ate quietly...

Maan finished his lunch and was about to leave... Geet said... Maan .. I want to talk to you...

 

Maan - bolo...

 

Geet - Sasha mam...

 

Maans mood changed instantly... Geet could read it in his face...

 

Maan - I don't want to talk about it... and he left the cabin...

 

Geet followed him... Maan entered his cabin and sat on his chair...

 

Geet followed him and siad... tell me the reason you have got Sasha mam on my back...

 

Maan - she is not on your back... she has got punishment for what she did to you...

 

Geet - to me... Geet is confused... what did she do...

 

Maan - yesterday... evening ... coffee... your arm...

 

Geet - but it was accident...

 

Maan - no.. Sasha did it deliberately... I was watching ... she waited for you with hot coffee.. I thought she was just waiting there... when she saw you.. she made a move... she want to hurt you... and now she will bear the burnt...

 

Geet - what... she wanted to hurt me...even though Geet knew that Sasha doesn't like her.. she never thought that Sasha will steep low to hurt her physically...

 

Geet sat for few minutes...

 

Geet - I never thought Sasha mam would do something like this... I mean I knew she doesn't like me... and she like you...but...

 

Maan - even I have no idea about sasha's intensions... She was so good in her work... Wait.. what did you say... she likes me...

 

Geet - Maan... you are the dumbest man I have ever seen... everyone in the staff knows...

 

Maan got angry hearing the word dumb... but he controlled... He didn't want another mu between them... he turned away to contrl his anger...

 

Geet knew she went overboard... you should not call you husband dun on his face even he is... she looked at maan... he didn't say anything but she could say he is angry... but she is not going to apologise... Atleast not now...

 

Geet - Everyone knows other than you...she always dreamt of you.,..what do you think... What might happened to the beautiful girls who joined in this office... sasha mama would found a way and make them leave the office... and sometimes you yourself had fired them coz of their in competency...

 

This was quite a revelation to maan... coz he never involved himself to such things other than work... He has a responsibility and also he had no feelings for sasha or any one else... He knew what he want and waited till he met the right girl...  ...

 

When maan didn't say anything.. Geet continued...Maan .. say something...

 

Maan - I didn't knew... never gave attentions to these type of things...

 

Geet - I know maan... that is the reason I am saying this to you now... you should know what is happening in the office.. sasha did many things behind ur back.. for u attention and love... But u never gave a chance... I knew that... and I trust you... She said in a flow.. but she didn't pay attention ... her mind was occupied some where else... she wants to get rid of sasha... and this is the main thing on her mind now...

 

Maan caught her word trust on him... He once again felt bad for yelling at her the other day... He knew Geet trusts him and he is very bad at trusting people... she is his wife and should have trusted her and should have given a chance to explain her stand... but he behaved like a ... and geets words disturbed him...

 

Geet - Maan... Listen to me now... get that shasha off from my back... I want peace .. if she is behind me every minute .. then I will be made pieces... I don't want that...sasha mama is already angry on me...

Maan - what... but Why...

 

Geet - nothing... geet was embaressed... But she had to clear the maater only then Maan may agree to her demand...

Maan - Geet ... say it... what did you do...

 

Geet - nothing... I just told her that we are seeing each other...

 

Maan - God Geet... what do you do such type of things...what if the news has gone out... Wait did she spread the news... is she behind the mishap at the park that day...

 

Geet - no... I don't think its her... and that day I was irked at her for her and answered back,,,, not my fault.. when your fav is like that...

 

Maan.. is its not her that it is good for her... and after yesterdays warning she will not mess with you...

 

Geet - warning... what did you say to her...

 

Maan -  nothing I told her that ... I love you and should stay away from you... Or else.. she will have to face MSK...

 

Geet - what... You were saying that I shouldn't have said anything about our relation to her and now you said everything to her...

 

Maan - that's because she tried to harm  you...

 

Geet - she will do it more now... she will try to... And you are giving a chance to her... she will be with me all the time and she can do what ever she want... no I don't want her to be on my back...

 

Maan - she will not dare Geet.. it is her punishment... she had to obey...

 

Geet - I said NO... she said emphasizing the words...

 

Maan - and I say YES...

 

Geeet - if ou really want o punish her... then make her do all your work.. that is the real punishment... Geet murmured..

 

Maan - what did you say...

 

Geet - yes.. I am not afraid of you mr. khurana.. I don't want Sasha mam to tag me every where... By going your words.. she will even follow me to washroom also... No I cant stand her one more sec... you have to take your punishment back...

 

Maan - Geet.. I said no... and I am not going to change my decision... this is her punishment...  

 

Geet - no.. its not... it looks more like you are punishing me... You cant do this to me... whay me.. you could have made her to work for yash... or even Anu... Why me... No... Maan.. in don't want sasha mam to follow me every where... Maan... listen to me... maan... maan...

 

Maan couldn't not hear more from her... she kept on arguing with him and Maan pulled her and shut her mouth with his...

 

 


OVer to you guys... hope this satisfies you all... xtra long update 2400 words๐Ÿ˜ฒ ad i am very very late


now the good news is that I have got my iPad back so updates will be more regular...hopefully๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ



over to you guys...


Plz ignore mistakes .. as I haven't check the update after typing

Edited by -indu- - 7 years ago
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chhutku se update ko extra long bol rahi hai...haan pichhle udates se bada hai bas..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Aur ye kya..puraane jhagde suljhe nahin ye sasha ke naam ka jhagda aur add ho gaya... 
ab jaldi se khatam kar na yaar ye Geet ka natak... usne bola na ki wo naraaz nahin ha Maan se...
to ab jaldi se dono ko saath le aa...
 Maan ko aur bhookha mat rakh aur Geet bechaari ko raat me khud ko torture karne se bacha le..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by Rashmi... - 7 years ago