HUMSAAYA # 5 Updated Pt-72 / Pg 129

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Posted: 2015-11-17T21:32:06Z




 Prologue


She started driving the car with high speed even the road is not clear enough because of her tears...She wanted to reach farm house as soon as possible...She never thought that Maan would do this to her...She wanted to see what Maan, her husband is doing there...with whom he is spending his time rather than with her...



In the Farm house...



Both are cuddling in the Bed...She kept her head on his chest and sleeping...Maan again started teasing her...Maan plz sone do...main bohut thak gayi hoon...aap na bohut tang karte hain mujhe...



Nahi jaan...kya karooon Tum aise mere saamne ho toh kuch aur soojhta hi nahi...jitna bhi samay tumhare saath bitaoon...kam lagta hain...I love you Jaan...Ab mujhe se nahi hoga jaan...



Mujhe bhi acha nahi lagta hai maan...aap se iss tarah milna...lekin ..Hum kya kar sakte hain ...



Maan didn't respond...he started thinking how to come out the situation...She felt bad...Chaliye Maan... bhook lagi hain...kuch banate hain...



Aap ka fav pasta mere haath ka she said with a huge smile...



Maan nodded and smiled at her effort to change his Mood...She picked her clothes and wore them...she left her dupatta there itself...and waited for him...he wore his tracks  and both went towards kitchen...



She started cooking and he helped her in assembling all the required things. Kitchen is filled with her musical voice...and the sweet smell of her cooking...Maan came and hugged her from behind, took the spoon and tasted the sauce...Perfect jaan...just the way i like it...



Her face beamed with happiness and she turned to face him...He smiled and kissed her hand and then her temple...and said...love you jaan...


And then...They heard Claps of someone...Maan left her and turned around to see Meera standing there...Both felt uncomfortable in front of Meera..but Maan didn't leave her Hand...


Meera - Wah Maan Wah...Mujhe nahi pata tha ki Mere peeche aap yeh karr rahe hain...sharm nahi aati...shaadi shuda hoke aap yeh sab karr rahe hain...aur GEET tum...maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki tum aisi harkat karogi...sharm nahi aati tumhe...kaisi ladki ho tum jo kisi aur ke pati se aisa rishta jod rahi ho...


Maan - Bas Meera... Geet ke khilaf ek aur shabd nahi sununga main...Geet tugged his hand lightly telling him to stop...she shook her head in a no...


Meera - Oh baat yaha tak pohunch gayi...Ab tum bataogi Maan ko ki woh mujse kaise baat kare...Shame on you geet...kaisi ladki ho tum...kaisi parvarish di hai tumhare parents ne... 



Plz ignore the spell mistakes and Hindi grammer mistakes...




Edited by -indu- - 2017-01-17T06:14:38Z
Posted: 2015-11-17T21:33:19Z



Thank you bhabhijiiiHug
Edited by -indu- - 2015-11-17T21:33:47Z
Posted: 2015-11-17T21:34:13Z






THREAD # 4

Part 57 - below

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Edited by -indu- - 2016-06-28T03:12:26Z
Posted: 2015-11-17T21:45:48Z








Part # 57




SD - hum kisi ke side nahi lerahe hain meera... humne  sirf ek taraf ki baat suni... geet ko bhi apni baat kehne dijiye... tab pata chalega ki kaun sahi hain aur kahu galat...

 


Naina's Mom left from there annoyed...

 

She took few steps towards her room , she stopped a few steps ahead and said... Galati toh aapse bhi hui hain... aapn logo ne meera ko toh pooch liya... par kisi ne bhi geet ko phone karna zaroori nahi samjha.,.. agar phone karliya hota toh itna drama nahi hota... aur nahi usse itni baatein sunni padti... Khair hum thak gaye hain.. humne dinner bhi karliya... toh hamara GN...


 

Meera - Aap mane na maane Dadi... Galati toh geet ki hi hain...


 

Maan left to his room... He changed and left to gym.. to went out his anger and frustration... He practiced for hrs... and slept there itself with no energy left.. as they didn't eat anything since angel's missing...


 

Around  Midnight... Anu and Rb retured from B'lore... Rb resigned and left b'lore forever...


Next Day 


Anu got up early... She wanted to meet her family... she is away for a week and she wants to see them as early as possible...


 

She Saw Dadi sitting in the lawn having her moring tea... she took slow and quiet steps and closed her eyes from behind... Dadi was startled .. she touched Anu's hand and recognised her...  Anu.. Aap ... Lagta hai Rohan ki aadat aap ko bhi lag gayi...

 


Anu smiled and went infront of SD and sat beside her... Naa... Rohan ki aadat nahi lagi.. bad aise hi kiya Dadi...  Maine aapko bohut miss kiya... Aur aap kab aayi.. aapn toh Amritsar gayi thi na...

 


SD - Humne bhi aapko miss kiya... hum kal raat ko aaye... aur aap kab aaye...


 

Anu - raat ko hi aageye Dadi... bohut der hoagyi thi.. isliye ksis se bhi nahi mili...



SD - toh batayiye.. aapne kya kiya b'lore mein...


 

Anu - bohut maza aaya Dadi... bohut shopping ki... sab ke liye saree's laayi... bohut ghoome... mast ki...

 


SD - shopping...  matlab Rohan ki account khali kardi aapne... Dadi pulled her leg...


 

Anu - ji nahi... is baar sab ke liye shopping apne paison se kiya...she said with a little attitude... thode bohut toh maine bhi kamaya hai Dadi... Aap ke liye... Maa ke liye... Geet ke liye.. naina bhabhi ke liye... aur Angel ke liye south ki lehenga choli li...woh bhi 5... bohut cute hain.. samajh mein nahi aaya kaun sa le toh 5 ke 5 lake aagaye... bohut achi hand work karte haina Dadi waha...

 


SD - hume sunke acha laga Anu... Aur batayiye...

 


Anu -  Areey haa... main waha ek shaadi mein gayi...


 

SD - Shaadi ... kiski shaadi... waha kise jaante hain aap...


 

Anu - hum Jay kis shaadi mein gaye...bas family aur friends ke beech simple marriage thi... kuch emergany ki wajah se jaldi jaldi kiya shhadi... hum shopping ke liye gaye waha hume woh milgaya... woh bhi last minute shoping ke liye aaya...  typical south ki shaadi... bohut different hai... mujhe bohut acaha laga... jay ki sister ne mujhe hare k riwaz ka matlab samjhaya... unhone bohut ache se receive kiya... aur khana bhi... bohut se south ke dishes taste kiya... Anu was going on and on...

 


Rb came there in his t-shirt and shorts... smacked her head lightly and said - Subah subah shuru hogayi tu..  waha bhi bas kahan khana aur sirf khana... Itna khana khayegi toh moti hojayegi aur Rohan bhag jayega tujhe dekh ke...

 


Anu - tu apni soch... Rohan ki tumko fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi hain...

 


Rb sat opposite to them and took a news paper.. he started reading it...

 


Anu and Dadi continued their talks...


 

Naina came down with angel... she came to garden where Anu, Rb and Sd are sitting...

 


Anu saw Angel with naina .. She said Hi bhabhi and naina smiled in return.. Anu  took Angel into her arms.. placed her on her lap and kissed her... angel said... Bua... I missed you so much... koi mujse nahi kehl raha tha... aap..plzz... mat jao...



Naina flinched at her remark... she felt bad that angel is feeling neglected...

 

Anu - Jhooti... tumne mujhe bilkul miss nahi kiya...

 

Angel - nahi.. maine aap ko miss kiya.. sachhi


 

Anu - toh phir mere bina hi chali gayi apne pari ke saath... kal... tumne bohut enjoy kiya


 

Angel - arrey.. aap yaha nahi thina... isliye nahi leke gaye... Pari ne kaha ki hum agli baar sab ko leke challenge... Mamma .. Papa... Aap.. Rb chachu... Badepapa... sab ko...


 

Dadi - Anu .. aap jaante hain ki Geet  aur angel kal bahar gaye...

 


Anu -  Haa Dadi... Geet ...


 

Ranbir who was reading news paper at once asked... Kaha gaye the GB aur Angel...

 


Anu  told him the place...


 

RB - My god... Kal waha pe firing hui... sham ko... issiliye 7 baje tak poora park khali karadiya... He showed the news item to them... there were few pics also...


 

Angel - haa... kal kisi ne gun chalayi... Pari ko toh chot bhi lagi...


 

Anu , RB & Dadi - Kya... Kaha pe lagi chot...tumhe bhi chot lagi kya..


 

Angel -mujhe nahi pari ko lagi ... Haath pe.. aur back pe bhi... Doctor ne injection bhi diya...


 

Dadi  panicked...stood up and said - RB aap jaldi jaayiye Geet ko dekhiye... aur naina aap angel ko check kijiye.,...


 

RB - but...


 

Dadi - abhi jaayiye .. .. jaldi dekhiye.. hum peeche aarahe hain...


 

RB couldn't understand but hearing the urgency in Dadi's voice he ran inside...


 

Naina was mute spectator to everything...


 

Anu along with Dadi went inside...in quick steps... Dadi - Kya hua Dadi... App itne pareshaan kyun hai.. geet ne kal raat kuch nahi bataya kya...


 

Dadi - nahi...


 

Anu - but kyun...


 

Dadi - abhi nahi anu... and when they reached till the steps..  RB was shouting for his brother... but Maan was no where near .. Anu ran up hearing RB...


 

When she reached Geet's room she saw RB trying to wake up geet but she is not responding... Anu Ran inside and checked geet... Geet... utho... my god isse toh bukhra hai.. RB utho jalsi.. hospital le chalete hain...


 

RB scooped Geet and Anu saw blood on the bed... My God... Rb she is bleeding... jaldi chalo...


 

RB - Anu.. tu jaldi jaa aur Gaadi nikal ne ke liye bolo...


 

Anu ran down shouting for driver...


 

Dadi - Kya hogaya Geet ko...


 

Anu - Dadi .. jaldi chaliye hospital jana hai...


 

SD sat in front .. Anu with Geet in her lap and they rushed to Hospital... Rb followed them in another car...


 

Veer came down hearing the commotion...


 

Veer - kya hua naina... itna shor kyun hai...


 

Naina - pata nahi veer... geet ko chot lagi hai woh behosh hai.. RB,  Anu aur Dadi usse hospital leke gaye...


 

Veer - kya.. chot kaise lagi... aur bhai kaha hai...


 

Naina -  Pata nahi... Angel kehrahi thi ki Geet ko kal chot lagi... aur RB ne kaha ki koi firing ki news aayi hai paper mein... jaha pe Geet aur angel gaye the kal...


 

Veer looked for the paper and read the news... He called Angel and talked to her...


 

Veer - Angel.. beta.. Geet ko chot kaise lagi...


 

Angel - Haa papa... chot lagi.. kal blood bhi aaya... doc ne injection bhi diya.. aur bandage bhi kiya...


 

Veer -  haa beta.. par chot kaise lagi...


 

Angel - hum icecream lene gaye... aur bahar aakar icecream kharahe the... aur waha ka glass wall tha .. bada wala... woh toot gaya... angel ne mujhe pakad ke neeche baith gayi... aur glass pieces lag gaye angel ko...


 

Naina -Glass pieces...


 

Veer - God... hum kal uski halat nahi dekh paaye... ab kya kare... bhai kaha hai.. unhone kyun nahi dekha...


 

Naina - pata nahi.. veerji itni der kabhi nahi sote...


 

Veer placed angel on the couch - main dekhta hoon... hume bhi hospital jana hai... Veer supported his hand to get up and he felt something.. he looked for it... it was a phone...tucked between the handrest and the seating place.. he took it and looked at it... Its naina's...


Precap - Geet again in hospital.. Now what?




Edited by -indu- - 2015-11-17T21:56:25Z
Posted: 2015-11-17T22:06:46Z
Congo indu for the new thread


And am first


Priya dekh:))
Posted: 2015-11-17T22:20:07Z
Congrats for new thread
Awesome update
waiting for next update
Posted: 2015-11-17T22:25:16Z

hi indu 
congrats for the new thread...




Edited by tabby999 - 2015-11-17T22:26:53Z
Posted: 2015-11-17T22:25:38Z

hi indu
nice update .
ghar mein kissi ka bhi dhayan geet ki taraf nahi gaya ..
anu ko pata tha ki geet aur angel ghoome gaye hai ..
geet is hurt and not is un concious ...rb took her to hospital ..
ab maan kahan gaya hai ..
hope heget to know abt geet soon 

thanks for update 
waiting for next ..
plz post a little soon as now i want to see maan's reaction ..
Edited by tabby999 - 2015-11-17T22:29:00Z

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