FF: Angel. (Request : Page: 140) - Page 74

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hey...

I'm losing my touch, reserve karke bhool gayi!

So sorry Nimmie! I was out whole day and didn't wanted to comment on phone. I want to write a long, detailed comment, leaning comfortably in my chair in front of the computer. So here I am, doing exactly that after hours from your update!

Saku.🤗.
lub ya Bas!

So another of my prediction is coming true, huh, the speed dial. She did call him... That's some brainy thinking Swara...good job! When Bonzo asked do you have god on your speed dial I cracked up completely and my sister who was sitting near by asked me what was the matter? Can you believe I had to tell her the entire story in summery just because one slipped laughter?

😆
This is sweet. i hope your sister liked the summary.
you are bang on with your predictions as usual Saku.

Now the real deal here was the part where G went to his house. The men waiting was actually waiting for their death right? I can't tell you how much I adore the way this man operates, sharp, calculated, witty and strong...a deadly combination. All the praises goes to your marvelous writing on Action...never read something that deadly described in such smooth sentences...WOW!

Thank you so very much. you really are generous with your words dearie.🤗

The chase...again awesome. But I had this nudging feeling earlier that soon the tank would be empty and the men would catch up. I know why you ended it there...but won't tell you...ha ha I don't like to irritate people, you know.

haaha.. you never irritate me. actually as i said earlier you make me pull up and tighten my writing skills to surprise ya.😳

This was action packed, fast paced and had everything I adore about Angel. There's nothing I can complain...just a request...do update soon!

Thank you so very much once again girl for this wonderful comment.
updating soon.
*Hugs*

Originally posted by: Sanavi

Tht was an exciting update. We all know Gabriel skills so the fight nd all was like a cake piece for him.
But what is that which shocked everyone in the end. Is it Gabriel? How did he find thm? Plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Oh...ho... Machi...u can't do this to me re cliff...hanger...tooo...baddd.

Gaby on fire re...started his usual job...kill...
With... Swaras knife... Wowww.
Good explanation of NRI people and their abandoned homes.
Oh Gaby bought another house. Too keep an eye on his house...

Gabriel boy back for hunt... Ooohooo.

Storm washed away the three...CLEAN KILL...
Nothing needed more...

Next is Laksh... Waiting...me

Thrilling man...chasing...sequence.. Ran out of fuel...Me corner of my seat...

U...given me ...baba ji ka thullu... Cliffhanger... Not fair...


Excellent... Tremendous... Machi


Lol...u new it ...



Kamila...

Originally posted by: dimaag

Oh ho Nimmi you finished your update there where I was biting my nails to an extent of their non existence? How could you? OK I'm being too emotional here. But yeah! That Gabriel reoccupireoccupying his own home was mind blowing. Please update soon. I can't wait. I know patience is virtue and all but you know what I'm getting crazy now.
Lots of action
N 😉

Originally posted by: Cinderella3

You can't stop it there!!! I hate cliff-hangers! Now how will I wait till you update the next chapter??! 😭.
Ashi..
🤗.

Sho Showie girl.
updating asap.

Nimmi... You're too good at writing action. All the action sequences in your story are par excellent. I can literally visualize it happening in front of me. You are one of the best action writers I've ever seen. 👍🏼 So I won't spoil what you have written by dissecting it.

this really is such a sweet thing to say dearie.
thank you so very much.

Swara is one tough nut! She did call Gaby when she felt that things were going out of control. But still she didn't give up even when she thought that he wouldn't turn up. Even when her car ran out of fuel, she decided to give it a last try. I like her spirit! 👏.

our girl is indeed a tough cookie. i like my girls strong.. not those tele-serial wale super woman but strong earthly normal girls.😳.

Loved Gabriel's reaction seeing Swara's call. So he has saved her contact by the name kitten?! I like it!

haha.. our guy is softening when it comes to this girl. innit?

So Gabriel kept his promise. He is here to save her. And yeah, at last Bozo is going to meet his favorite person! 😆.

Bozo's dream is gonna come true.😆.

How could you stop it there Nimmi?! How???! Please update the next chapter forthwith! Can't wait to read it! Thanks for the pm! 😃.

showie. showie.. updating choon.

Thank you so very much Ashi..🤗.
Lots of love. Jhappis.

Lots of love,

Ashi 🤗

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Yaar how could you stop at this point

So guardian angel in action

N lovely update

Originally posted by: simsen23

Nimmi...
Exciting update...ah but hw could u stop... 😕
mmm...plz update d next part soon ...plz plz
N dis chapter...our gaby is back into the action...
O man...he z so attracting.. 😆 ...
M falling for this angel 😳 ...
...The action scenes are quite good..as if m watching a hollywood movie
fantastic.. 😉
n the words

"Kitten!"
His lips twitched in involuntary smile looking at the caller name flashing in his phone when his brows frowned suddenly.

Wow...his lips twisted into involuntary smile...n he saved her no as kittennn...so cute...n chooo sweet.i mean at one time we r talking about a rough n tough guy who has just killed 3 goons..n suddenly...he is so adorable...it was like a combo..
of ice n fire... 😃
...n swara..wat a girl...gaby is her angle..yes he is..n BOZO damn funny...haha
n agn m gonna irritate u...plz update
love
simi 😆

Originally posted by: M_Annu

As always awesome..