Originally posted by: neiralove
This was lovely! She remembers his smileys; how adorable! 😳 😆
Nachiket sipping the coffee on his old Ragini's behest was brilliant! She's still in his every thought and every action. Also, I liked how Ragini couldn't work in the presence of that note, the constant reminder of the hope that maybe, just maybe, he's back. 😳 As much as she tries to deny it, he still holds her heart.And Imagine dear, I think you picked the perfect place to stop! Your FF is like watching a show and I just felt that sudden stop and the boom at the end of an episode when I reached the end of this update. 😆 Now, that being said, I expect another update in a day's time (at most). 😉
Originally posted by: ShyNomad
Aaah...talk about suspense!
Another great update delving deeper into their feelings without each other, thanks for this Imagine.I can't wait until they dance again after so many years
Originally posted by: imagine43
Thank you so much for this beautiful feedback. I am glad you liked itI felt that the update was too long and too much in detail that would bore the reader..I had almost decided to not write again after finishing this one.But your words have completely brought back the enthu.. Thanks for reviving me!!
Lovely update but u finished at the wrong time need to know what happens next please.
You write neil and raginis emotions so well beautiful writing just loved it and how both of them instantly recgonise each others writing and the pain they are going thru and they have not forgetten their memories loved itPlease update asap
This is so beautiful, but you have stopped at a very wrong moment 😉
Sorry, I didn't comment at all for the 2nd part - was too busy.Now I will read properly and comment.As for the 3rd part, this is fantabulous. 👍🏼 I am so glad that you are writing this story. This has such a refreshing flavour to it, though the storyline is already known. Thanks a lot 🤗Loved reading about Nachiket and Ragini in this part.- how they both realised that it was the other from a single note of either's, and then the avalanche of emotions.Happiness, Love, the bitterness and the heartbreak - the entire gamut of emotions have been well played through. I am so excited about reading the next part.Now that Ragini is there on the stage, waiting for Dr Neil K to show up - the question is will Dr Neil K really make it to the stage and not get his ex-wife insulted?I think he will, but we are waiting for your magic. ❤️
wow imagine, R also recognizes his smily. This story is becoming very interesting. i like the fact that they r directly meeting on dance floor. Thanks for the update.
You did it again 👍🏼 thanks a lot! And you are really making us wait for that face off.
Good mixture of their emotions, well done.Finally Dr. Neil K is here...looking forward to how beautiful this dance will be. Knowing him he might be rude to her...unless Nachiket takes over 😉
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