new fan-fic by me (being continued) - Page 21

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Posted: 20 years ago
awww.. thank you .. :)

I am continuing soon .. but i have writers block.. i don't know how to continue.. hehehehehe

well you better continue yours.. its hecka CUTE... just love it ..

smile,
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Posted: 20 years ago

Awesome, loving ur story..

plz continue...

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Posted: 20 years ago

awwwww...that was so romantic...plz continue fast...i cant wait till the next part!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
Plzz continue... I'm waiting for the next part.. U r doing an excellent job on ur fanfics!!!😊 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
awww thans angadlover,
I'll try to write it today. Hopefully I'll have it by tonight but tomorrow for sure.
So sorry hun.
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Posted: 20 years ago
np.. U do a great job thats y u get these cute comments..Just keep u the good work and thanx for ur reply..😊 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
awww thanx hun. I really love writing the story too. I am glad you all read it.
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Posted: 20 years ago

Angad and Kripa's engagement is about in a week and after their engagement Mishti and Kartik plan to go to their honeymoon.
A week passed with the preparation of Kripa-Angad's engagement party. Kripa's family is still living with Khanna's. They are shifting to their new house after Kripa and angad's engagement party.

Kripa and Angad's engagement Party
Kripa isin her room getting ready. She is wearing a red saree and lot of jewelry. She is looking gorgeous. angad is wearing a black suit with red dress shirt. He is looking handsome as always. Angad knows that everyone is downstairs so he decides to go meet Kripa before the engagement. Kripa is in her room, brushing her hair when Angad comes from the door. Kripa turns to see how is it and to her surprise, it's Angad.
Kripa: tum jahan kya kar rahe ho
Angad: tumse milne aaya hoon
Kripa: agar kisi ne dekh liya toh
Anagd: toh kya hua, after all we're getting engaged today.
Kripa: acha baba ab batao ke tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Angad: mujhe tume kush dena tha es liye.
Kripa: a gift
Angad: yes, a gift. Angad hands Kripa a small box, very nicely wrapped. Kripa slowly opens the wrapper and see a box and opens it. There was a locket and a golden chain. Kripa slowly takes the locket She opens the locket and finds Kripa and Angad's name carved in (not pictures lol)
Kripa softly touches the locket and continue to look at it. Few minutes later she looks at Angad.
Kripa: It's beautiful Angad. Thank you
Angad: jaan, you never need to say thank you to me
Kripa: kya tum mujhe pehnao ge.
Anagd: of course jaan
Kripa stands in front of mirror, Angad stands behind her and puts it around her neck while Kripa looks thru the mirror. After Angad was done, he kisses Kripa's neck. Kripa turns around and hugs him. They both go downstairs where the party was going on.
Naina, Dilip, and Kripa's parents go to the center. Dilip takes the microphone and announces Angad and Krips' engagement. Kripa and Angad are called to the center. They both go there and slide rings on each other's finger. They take their parents blessings. Everyone goes to the dance floor to dance. Angad and Kripa dance as well. All the guests are coming over to Kripa and Angad to congratulate them as well as Mishti and Kartik for their wedding.
The party is over, and everyone leaves to their rooms. Kripa goes to her room. Angad goes to his. He changed into his night suit and comes out of his room. he slowly looks around to see if everyone is asleep. He goes to Kripa's room. He opens her door and sees her sitting on her bed, still in her saree.
Angad (whispering): Kripa
Kripa: tum yahan
Angad slowly closes the door and comes near Kripa. Before Kripa could ask him anything, he lies on the bed and places his head in her lap.
Kripa: Angad tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Angad: pehle tum batao ke tumne abhi tak change kyon nahin kia, aur tum aise kyon bethi ho?
Kripa: main kush soch rahi thi.
Angad: kya?
Kripa: hamare baare main, hamari shaadi ke baare main, hamare future ke baare main, aur...
Angad: aur...
Kripa: aur hamare bacho ke baare main
Angad: wow, aacha batao ke hamare kitne baache honge
Kripa: ek
Angad: sirf ek
Kripa: tume kitne chahaye
Angad: mujhe char (4) baache chahaye
Kripa: char
Angad: haan, 4 are not that many. aur tume pata hai ke mujhe char baache kyon chahaye
Kripa: kyon?
Angad: main nahin chahata ke hamare bache kabhi bhi akele pare, agar hamare char bache hue toh alteast ek ke pas toh waqt hoga na doosre ke baat sun ne ka
Kripa: aww how sweet
Kripa: but still Angad 4 are too many
Angad: theek hai, but I want three then
Kripa: nahin do (2)
Angad: accha theek hain then we'll have two kids
Kripa and Angad both laugh at their conversation.

I'll continue later.

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Posted: 20 years ago

Wow...that was realli sweet...its so romantic...i luved it...especially the locket scene...plz continue fast...i cant wait till the next part!!

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Posted: 20 years ago

awesume cont fast!!! never heard those names Evee!! 1 gurl and 1 boy or twins!!!

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