MaNan FF//The Ex's At War//Link for Thread 2 on pg 150

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1121

Hey I loved your writing u write very well I like all your manan ff

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gracyparmar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1122

Awsm prologue and m already falling for manini she is soo cute and our writer we don't have any ploblem with oul manini ka language..

I read the story impulsive soulmates and it was just amazing and brilliant and what not and just couldn't help myself from reading it..

It was awsm prologue and damn interesting...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1123

That was awsm..mtlb mind blowing..

Manik and manaini ke scenes kitne zyada kitne zyada beautifully pictire kiye tumne..

And manik ka navya ko darana that was funny..

And as usual cabir k sense banane vale questions ka manik k pass jawab nhi..

And nandini woah she must definitely looking stunning..so finally a manan encounter one which we would definitely not have expected so just eager to read the nxt part..

And i guess nandini will blast on navya..

And jis trh se manini nandini ki complain kr rhi thi and asking for icecream and koket..hehe..and pleadong to go for party was damn cute...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1124

That was superb..cabir and his teasings they are just awsm..and dadi is right only she can make manik and nandini manan again..

And the party is awsm..and rewa and rose surely prefect couple..

Still they both affect eachother care for eachother and jealously is there too god knows what was the reason for their breakup

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Posted: 9 years ago

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M sad mtlb they love eachother soo mich ek dusre k upar ek kharoch bhi seh nhi skte and here they are away..hope just hope sab thik ho jaye..

The bathroom scene and rewa jealous scene was amazing and loved the way nandini answer those low lives..

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Posted: 9 years ago

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That was awsm..this rewa huh..but kehte hai na jo hota hai acche k liye hota hai na rewa aisa krti na nandini aura aati and na yeh sab hota..vaise perfect aim..and jab hall mei manik ne bola k she hit me it was damn hilarious🤣..and the cat fight too mtlb pehle water then dustin and then any think she got..sirf cabie hi khul k has skta hai gud for him dusre toh bichare kaise cntrl krte honge..

And wah manini kya plan tha cockroach vala loved it..and finally manan kiss hayee loved it thanks for it manini

And the part was hilarious...

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Amazing as always..tooth fairy my mom also used ro tell me that..and nice trick to divert manini from crying and ya kids are really angels of god..and the car scene god tnat was damn hilarious..hahahaha...couldn't stop laughing for 5 min...loved it..

And m getting curious about their breakup...

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