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rimsha01

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Okay i love it

But i just hope its not another version of twilight.

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AsthaVerma92

@AsthaVerma92

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Wow wat a blissful love story it going to be ultimate out of the world lovely mind blowing...

New concept with new love

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nami169

@nami169

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

amazing update.

finally they met.

waiting for more

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

awesome update...

loved it so much...

it was so interesting...loved it...

it hurt so much when manik said forget me nandu...

they are like magnets...poles apart...they will always find their way to each other...

they are opposites and will attract always...cant wait for them to meet again...hopefully under different circumstances...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Princess90998

@Princess90998

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Wow.. That was awesome... U write so well.. I mean the way u described manik's blood list.. He wanted to drink her blood that was awesome like seriously.. U deserve lots of hugs N claps..
And the part where he told her to forget u nailed it..
I loved how he controlled himself hope they meet soon.. Keep writing stay blessed N lots of love.. And I should tell u this was ur master piece.. Jaldi se give new update.. Waiting... And thanks for sharing this amazing story with us.. Love u lots

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sahasimren

@sahasimren

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Is this inspired from "The Vampire Diaries"...

I guess it is.

Thank you for making Manik...my Damon Salvatore.

They both r equally hot.

This is so cool.

Loved it so much.

Thank you for writing this.

Post the next update soon.

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Chokypie

@Chokypie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

It's soo different story i have ever read...

Like you i also love vampiresa and horror stories...👏

Its so different you write about them...

I love both your stories but to be frank now am loving this story of yours more...😊

Update faster...

Thank you for PM...😊

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HTA111

@HTA111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Wow awesome terrific update

Manik was so lost in Nandu he dint realise what he is doing staring her holding her in his arms loving her yet he controlled himself to not hurt her as she is human who make his coldhearted soul warmth and a beat to live and he knows he is not good for her so he makes her forget him but he won't

Continue soon and thanks for pm

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

woww u updated.

first time manik controlled his thrust...

seriously amzing. .

will he be able to forget her..
but itsss a beautiful update...
itss terrific. .

keep updating. .
update soon.

waiting for next update eagerly
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thanks for this update.

thanks for pm too.

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