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sahasimren

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Posted: 9 years ago

#631

Thanks for the pm.

loved it.

Post the next update soon.

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aarohi arora

@aarohi_angel98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#632

This was one of the best update of ur ss in my opinion..
That was superb... everything was their..
Your quotes... some stupid no no strange songs in nandini's pov...
But was still amazing...
Ssly first tym no cliff hanger...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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aroy90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#633

Interesting update

No no cute update

Full-on manan scenes were there

Just loved it

N yeah thanks for the PM

😊

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Mishal

@mish052

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Posted: 9 years ago

#634

Superbb Update.. you made my day seriously... Too cute 😊
Manik's Pov about love was the best

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saman

@Samanf3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#635

Dilwale dulhania le jaayenge...Yayieee...whistle..for da last scene..👏👏 ..

How do you manage to amaze me every time by ur amazing , mindblowing update...

Thanks alot for da pm...

Dis part waz very good... Means extremely good..I just loved it to da core..

Ur words..ur description is pure bliss...I kno I hav said it many times but wat to do..uh r getting finer day by day in words and descriptions.. How do you kno so much about Love , Life and facts...sumtyms I really ponder over it...coz everything dat uh write iz so dam true...How on earth a young girl lyk uh can have such a depthness of words... Wow ...just awsum..really.. Ur words..descriptions... Thoughts... Every single thing iz alwaz a treat to me...

Thanks once again for writing and continuing dis story..Very nice it iz...

And now I want my jaans and babu too...or else I will get gussa from uh...plzzz...

Okay now enuf of my ranting... Byeee..tc

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ananya1917

@ananya1917

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Posted: 9 years ago

#636

Nice promo

Ohh so cabir is helping him

.Continue soon

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shubhshash

@shubhshash

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Posted: 9 years ago

#637

Wow wow wow...superb update...I just loved it...too good...

Ohh god...I am really in love wid yur writing...I must sae u r an awesome writer...

N abt the update I loved manan's every moment...soo adorable they are...I also loved the way nandini started hitting manik...bechara...😆

Also manik making nandini annoy...that was epic...that rastaa chhodu na...😛

N ofcourse nandini's self talk at the basin...wow...

Continue soon dear...

Take care. ...😊😊

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vaastha31

@vaastha31

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Posted: 9 years ago

#638

First of all thx for d pm...
Update was as always superb
All d quotes were soo true
N that songs...lol
Must say good choice😉
N atlast ddlj scene...haaye😃
Everything was so cute just like our manan...once again thx for pm