#3 MANAN SS ~ YOU BECOME MY STORY Chap21-140 New thread Hyper link-157 - Page 63

Let start from the start...

Thanks for d pm ...
ur updates r always Awsm ...
i m in love wid ur stories...
both d stories r superb...
yr u r such a great writer..
kash ky2 ki story aap hi likh rhi hoti...
all d manan parts were fabulous...
manan's hug, manik's teasing, nandini's annoyed look, her angry pouts, Manik's songs were perfect n for d each n every situation...
n most importantly I like ur quotes ur thoughts n way of explaining each n every emotion so perfectly...
D definition of love that u have explained is so loving ..
u portrayed both d characters very well n I specially like Manik's character like he never lose hope n trust n try u get her back in his life..
Manik's plan mind blowing n all d boys helped him
n my favorite part was when manik sing that song meri samne vali khidki mei...hahaha like seriously superb..
hat's off girl u r mind blowing..
n last part DDLJ wala part super Awsm ...
u add each n every emotion or thoughts to make ur story perfect...

n waiting for nandini's reply, 😳

awww i'm in love with the update...!!

First of ol thanxx for pm...
I really love d updatee...
Nandini's truma was justified...
Manik plan and his gang helped him. ..
Really waitingg jb mukti and navya will understnd manik... .
I love d way manik tease her...
And ddlj scene was total out of box for me...
Amazing...
Keep writing... .
Continue sooon

Hey thnx for d pm...it was superb...loved d way they slept...nandini is again in angry mode...but loving it..lets see how will manik manofy her ;-)...ddlj seen was osm...update soon :-)

Thanks for pm. One thing I can say after reading your update, I just love u. How u managed to give all the emotions so correctly n beautifully. The entry of manik, their hug n then sleeping in Sam berth. You can give romance in that choutu sa birth also. I just became your fan. The whole explanation of love is so beautiful. I m speechless. Beautiful words with beautiful description. I think the best part when manik save Nandini. Then their romance after that. Oh god in last ddlj. This is what I called train romance.Wow awesome imagination. I read it three times. So I love u3. You made my weekend n brings back the smile. Lady Don r hilarious n father in law 's train. My goodness now manik is ready to face muku. If Nandini has awesome friends , so do manik. God bless u n keep smiling.

Nce update
Loved it
Manan r so cute
And what a filmy or say ddlj ending ;)
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
:)

Nice update

Awesome update as always.
I love ur style of writing n u beautifully explain one's POV.
So boys all are in one team to bring manan together.
Atlast manik blasted the bubble lol! Poor cabir!
Manik is very sweet n he loves nandu truly from bottom of his heart. This s v clear wen he replied nandu y u saved me?
Mukti n Navya lady bodyguards lol!

Thanks fr the pm.
Update soon

A very big thanks to you for updating...
N for sending pm...
I really loved this update...
Matlab dil khush kar dia...
Finally manik is manofying nandu...
N manan scenes were as always pretty much cute and lovely.
N last scenes was too filmy ...
Must say hats off to you..
You do a great job..
Keep it up..