AarYa SS: Where You Belong. Part 8 pg 13, Epilogue pg 14

Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hi Tessa. First of all warm welcome to you in the world of writting with AarYa.

really glad to get another piece of tallent here. And it is honour to read new stories with AarYa.

big clap for you such a beautiful starting. It was awesome. I always wanted a perfect ending if mumbai track, i myself wanted to bring out but somehow didnt happen. And thank you so much for this.

the kissing scene was 🤢
if starting like this then can expect more and more. I am eagarly waiting for the next. Pleade continue soon. Edited by jhillyarya - 8 years ago

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roserosey

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Posted: 8 years ago

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firstly Tessa ...A warm welcome into this wonderful place i know u r already here since long time as i didnt welcome u so welcoming u here ... i followed ur comments on various aarya fictions here which were as wonderful as u ...👏

wonderful plot i must say ... mumbai track was almost everyones fav but i was personally disappointed with the way they executed the track along with u even i felt that they dragged arpitha name so long into the scenario ...the way u r executing now is so refreshing and i must say its wonderful👏

oh oh oh so yash is regretting for his newly developed passion in aarti 😲 which he has hidden well so far...now after the passionate moment between the both ...i was wondering how will aarthi take this ...and i suspect something with the way aarthi fainted in amans arms...

oh god u already knew how to excite us and also make us wait so desperately with the climax u have given to this part ⭐️

i m waiting for the next part ...hope u will do that soon ...😃

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caller123

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Thank you for joining us.🤗 Wow wonderful start I must say.👏

You are indeed a great writer.

I cannot wait for the next installment dear.

Please continue soon dear.

Please contribute your lovely stories to this forum dear.

Like you I too loved PV a lot.

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annirogc

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Posted: 8 years ago

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welcome to punar vivah forum dear.. nice start with mumbai track.. pls continue soon..

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Welcome my dear to the forum 🤗
I enjoyed your version of the post Mumbai track like some fans I did not like the shows versions and also thought the Arpitha track dragged too long. Continue soon.

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ksen

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Posted: 8 years ago

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interesting start

loved it

beautifully written

excited for the next part

please continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Tessa: It is pleasure to have you as an active member and not silent one any longer. Secondly as it has been pointed what a talent, the description of their encounter is great. You get a very vivid picture of their multi level emotions. It looks like it will be great ss. Thank you and welcome.

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: jhillyarya
Hi Tessa. First of all warm welcome to you in the world of writting with AarYa.

really glad to get another piece of tallent here. And it is honour to read new stories with AarYa.

big clap for you such a beautiful starting. It was awesome. I always wanted a perfect ending if mumbai track, i myself wanted to bring out but somehow didnt happen. And thank you so much for this.

the kissing scene was 🤢
if starting like this then can expect more and more. I am eagarly waiting for the next. Pleade continue soon.

Hi Jhill,

thank you so much for reading my piece and for the warm welcome.

Coming from a story-teller of your caliber it is high praise indeed! I appreciate the kind words of encouragement; they have put a big smile on my face and released a few tears so thank you!

As for the kissing scene... 😳 I was looking for a way to communicate their desires and frustrations and also wanted to make it a little hot!

I will update soon!

Tessa

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: roserosey
firstly Tessa ...A warm welcome into this wonderful place i know u r already here since long time as i didnt welcome u so welcoming u here ... i followed ur comments on various aarya fictions here which were as wonderful as u ...👏
wonderful plot i must say ... mumbai track was almost everyones fav but i was personally disappointed with the way they executed the track along with u even i felt that they dragged arpitha name so long into the scenario ...the way u r executing now is so refreshing and i must say its wonderful👏

oh oh oh so yash is regretting for his newly developed passion in aarti 😲 which he has hidden well so far...now after the passionate moment between the both ...i was wondering how will aarthi take this ...and i suspect something with the way aarthi fainted in amans arms...

oh god u already knew how to excite us and also make us wait so desperately with the climax u have given to this part ⭐️

i m waiting for the next part ...hope u will do that soon ...😃

aww you are so sweet Rosey!

Thank you for such an open and warm welcome! It takes one to know one so if I am wonderful as are you! I have read your comments too and it shows your love for AarYa fiction and your appreciation for the writers.

I am glad that you find the plot wonderful and are eager to read more as it encourages me to continue with it.

I have hinted at why Yash was hiding his passion for Aarti but it will be revealed as the plot unfolds so stay tuned! as for your suspicion as to why Aarti fainted.. lets wait and see huh😉

I will update part 2 as soon as I am done editing it.

thank you once again!

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