KaYa FF : Come Back My Love ( Epilogue : page 19 ) * Complete* - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
This update I would like to dedicate to manaalkhan...
@manaalkhan...I'm glad to know that u look upon me as one of the best writers of this forum...
Thanks a ton...this is for u...🤗

Chapter 6:


Kabir and Anaya reach KKN...Kabir takes her to his cabin and places her on the couch and sits beside her...

K: ( kisses her cheek) baby...Aap yahi betho aur drawing karo...ok? Daddy yahi hai...vaha uss chair par...

Anaya nodded sweetly and asked for his permission to go to her Richa didi...
K: joa na beta...jao..mujhe puch kyu rahe ho...my princess can do whatever she likes...


Anaya walks out and goes to Richa...she extends her arms upwards...meaning she wants Richa to pick her up...

R: awww! Ale aaj anu baby yaha aayi hai?
Ana: ha...Richa didi...daddy ne kaha tha ki Vo boss hai...Vo sabko aapp!  daatenge) karenge toh sabko unki baat listen karni hoga...kya tha ha...edit...Vo edit hai...


Richa gave a small laugh and said...
R: edit nahi beta editor...in...cheif...

Ana: no no! Itna big name! Edy! Daddy Edy!

Richa made an awww face and pulled her cheeks...


After sometime...

Ana: daddy mujhe bhook lagi hai...mumum ( food) chahiye!

K: Mela baby hungry hai...chalo...lunch karte hai...ok...

Kabir took her to the canteen and asked her to wait for him till he got the food...

She sat on a chair but the table was to high for her and she got angry and started hitting the table but herself Got hurt and started crying...sobbing softly but soon it turned to loud wailing and Kabir came running...


K:  ( picked her up) awwwle baby! Kya hua? Aap kyu Ro rahe ho? Batao daddy ko...

Anaya pointed to her injured hand...her skin was delicate just like her mother and so her hand had turned red...

Kabir kissed on her hand and smilled...wiping her tears...
K: abhi daddy ne kissie de di na...abhi ye theek hojaayega...ok...


Ana: lekin daddy...ye table bura hai! Isse maaro! Ye mujhse tall hai.  ...

Kabir made a fake angry face and pretended to hit the table and then said...

K: dekho abhi maine isse maara na...abhi aap bhi khaana khalo...

Saying this he made her sit in his lap and started feeding her... 

Just then the villain made her entry...
She sat in front of Kabir without permission and extended her hand towards Anaya but Kabir held her away...

K: don't u dare miss bhagat! Meri beti ko chune ki himmat bhi mat karna...

Sh: kya Kabir...Anaya meri beti jaisi hi toh hai...

K: nahi...meri Anaya sirf meri aura Ananya ki hai...samjhi...( turning to Anaya) beta aap jao...Ronnie bhaiyya ke paas...main aata hu..ok...good girl...


Anaya got down from his lap and started towards the main office room...
But she couldn't find it...instead she found herself outside another cabin...with great difficulty she pushed the door open and went inside...and behind khalid's chair...

Khalid was busy talking to KL when...

BHOOO!
Khalid almost jumped up...but all he saw was Anaya on top of his chair...giggling...


Ana: dara diya! Kalid uncle ko dara diya...

Kh: naughty girl ! Very bad! Dekho mera saara manicure bekaar...

Ana: ma..mani...manicure? Lekin Trisha didi ne toh kaha ki Vo girls karti hai...par aap toh old man ho!


Meanwhile KL to was amused...
KL: beta aap kon ho? Khalid tum jaante ho isse?

Before Khalid could utter a word...
Ana: main Anaya  Kabir  Sharma...

She said so cutely that both just laughed...


KL: achcha toh yeh hai Kabir ki princess...

Ana: ha...main apne daddy ki princess...

KL: aur aapki mamma? ( he was unaware of Ananya being in coma)

Anaya became very sad...

Ana: mamma so rahi hai...maine toh sirf unki photo dekhi hai...daddy kehte hai ki meri mamma jitni pretty utnihi main bhi hu...

Kh: yes KL Ananya is in coma...pichle 5 saalo se...

Meanwhile Kabir too came looking for Anaya...

Ana: daddy...coma kya hota hai?

K: ( uneasy) uh...b..beta...coma..matlab...ki mamma sorahi hai...beauty sleep lerahi hai...Vo jab uthengi na toh aur bhi pretty pretty lagengi...



Past:


Kabir was sitting outside Ananya 's ward...
Somehow he was feeling bad for her...not as his junior but rather something more...


He looked up when he felt someone's hand on his shoulder...
K: Ronnie...Ananya is ok...she's under sedatives...

Ronnie nodded...
R: sir aap ghar jaiyye...aap bhi thak gaye honge...
K: nahi Ronnie...isse aise chodkar main nahi jaa sakta...


R: Aap jaiyye sir...main hu yaha...

Kabir nodded hesitantly but husband heart didn't want to go from there but still he left for home...

All the while at home Kabir kept thinking about Ananya...
He couldn't understand the reason for his sudden concern for her...

Kabir had never been so lost before as today as he almost burnt vegetable he was cooking...


Next morning...
At KKN...


Khalid was talking to Kabir and both were seated in the latter's cabin...
Just when Ramu...the peon arrived with a CD...

Ra: sir...ye koi reception par chodgaya tha...aapke liye...

Khalid takes the CD amusingly and plays it in the laptop...

What they see in the CD shocks both to the core...
It is nothing but the recording of the time Kabir was giving CPR to Ananya...
One look at the scene could give one a wrong impression...


Kabir made a disgusted face and shook his head...
K: cheee! I should've known...ye aadmi hi itni ghinauni harkat karsakta hai...

Kh: what is this Kabir...ye sab...

K: Khalid I know tum kya sochte rahe ho...but it's not like that...

Kh: see Kabir...I trust u...par agar ye bahar chala gaya toh KKN ka kya hoga...

K: mujhe koi farak nahi padta ki tum mujhe trust karte ho ya nahi...mere liye inn sabke ke ab koi mayne nahi...


"But I trust u sir"
Both Khalid and Kabir turned around to find Ananya...


Ananya walked in and went towards Kabir...
A: maine aapko 8 saalo se apni inspiration mana hai...aap mere idol hai...aaphiki vajah se main journalism ki dunia mein aayi...aapne jo mere parivaar ke liye kiya tha Vo toh koi apna bhi nahi karta...


A rare smile forced its way out ogmf his lips...
He felt a weight lighten from his heart...he didn't care about the world but...somehow and somewhere in his heart he felt happy knowing that she trusted him...



                      TBC😳


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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
lovely update yaar
Shreya is just soo...

and congo aapke papers aaj khatam ho gaye na??

mere aaj saare practicals khatam ho gaye
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: RaizadaPriya

lovely update yaar

Shreya is just soo...

and congo aapke papers aaj khatam ho gaye na??

mere aaj saare practicals khatam ho gaye

Oye hoye!
I was about to pm u!😆
Thanks and Congo to u too
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: akyabiggestfan

Oye hoye!
I was about to pm u!😆
Thanks and Congo to u too


ha ha ek pm karne se bacha liya

pm se pehele hi comment haazir ho gaya 

and congo once again

btw what r u studying?

i mean kiski student ho app?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
nice update, Anaya is so cute 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: RaizadaPriya


ha ha ek pm karne se bacha liya

pm se pehele hi comment haazir ho gaya 

and congo once again

btw what r u studying?

i mean kiski student ho app?


Medicine
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
woohhooo...!! I m on cloud 9 today..😃
When i saw my name there, that you have dedicated this update to me
I was like OMG..!! Really??😳 thank you so much this really means alot to me...
ok now coming back to the update it was amazing as always... 
That khalid-anaya part was very cute... & its great to know that ananya trusts kabir
loved the update as always...update soon.. & once again thankyou very much...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
M new here
Sp don't know how to do detailed cmment
Bt it ws vrry btfl
Anaya s sooo cute
Anaya khalid nd Anaya kabir part ws soo cute
I ws realy imagining Kabir doing all dis
Plezzz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
love the update! hope you come back and finish this
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Chapter 7:
Present:

KKN...
Kabir was talking to Ronnie in his cabin...
K: kal Anaya ka 6 th birthday hai...

R: arrey ha! I think hume kuch karna chaiye na sir?

K: ha...main bhi vahi soch raha tha...u kbow beechari kitni dukhi hai...kyunki vo apne aap ko Ananya ki condition ka zimmedaar maanti hai...aur use yeh din bilkul pasand nahi...

R: tab toh kuch karna hi padega! Meri junior anu ka surprise birthday toh banta hai jiju!

K: arrey waah! badi jaldi yaad aaya saale sahab ki main aapka jija hu !

Both hugged each other...

That night...

Kabir reached home with Anaya and changed into casuals...
Then taking Anaya on his lap he asked her...

K: meri baby ne toh daddy ko bataya hi nahi ki usko gift kya chahiye? hmmm?

A: mujhe sirf mamma chahiye daddy! aur kuch nahi!
Anaya said sadly...

Next morning:

Anaya woke up to a beautiful sight...Kabir's bedroom was full of toys...teddies, bunnies, dolls, balls, and what not! 
And there stood Anita, Armaan, Richa, Ronnie, Sunny, Baby and ofcourse kabir!!!


All: HAPPY BIRTHDAY ANU!!!!!!!

Anaya was so happy that she forgot everything for a moment and jumped into kabir's arms...

A: I love u daddieee!!!!!!

K: awww! me too my chotu ananya!

A: par naani aaj mamma bhi ninni mein smile karengi na...aaj mera birthday haina...

An: ha beta aur nahi karegi na toh kaan khichungi uske! itni majaal uski ki meri anu ko tang kare!


Evening...

An: beta chalo aap ready ho jao...aapki kuch books laane jaana haina...

A: ok naani! par itne achche kapde kyu?

An: aise hi aaj aapka birthday haina isilye...

Soon they reach a beautifully decorated venue...

A: naani! par yaha toh koi stationary shop nahi hai...

An:  aap andar chalo...naani sab batayengi!

As the reach inside Anaya is amused to see the beautiful decoration. ...the pink and white ballons  and a huge HAPPY BIRTHDAY ANAYA on the wall...
and the floor strewn with balloons...


She started clapping her hands and ran towards kabir as she spotted him looking at her lovingly...

A: ( hugging his legs since she reached till there almost getting lifted) I love u daddy! aap iss world ke bestest daddy ho!


Kabir smiled brightly after 7 years now...
K: aapko achcha laga na? bas! aap jao play with your friends...


Just as she was going she banged into khalid...

Kh: happy birthday dear!
khalid said as she handed her his gift...

A: ( serious look) kalid uncle! main aapko deer dekhti hu? main girl hu...vo bhi good waali!

Khalid laughed loudly...


Next came Malvika...
A: malvika didi!

M: awww! kaisi hai meri baby? malvika didi missed u sooo much!!!!!

Soon it was time for cake cutting and Kabir picked Anaya up and helped her cut the cake...

Anaya cut the cake and fed a big peice to kabir and kissed his cheek...
A: ye mere sabse handsome aur achche daddy ke liye...

Kabir too kissed her cheek and fed her a peice...

K: aur yeh meri pari ke liye!

The crowd clapped for the adorable father-daughter duo...


Midnight...

A: ma...mamma ...ma..ma...

Kabir got up with a start hearing this and said...

K: Anu? beta are u ok?...kya hua...batao...

He checked her body temperature and found her to be burning with fever...


Kabir almost panicked and tried calling their family doctor but it was unreachable. ...

He started cold sponging for her and in between could hear her mutter...

A:mum...ma...meri...meri...vajah...se...nahi...uthti...main bad...girl...hu..da..daddy...bhi...mujhe chode ke...chale...jaayenge..sheya...shreya auntie ke pass...


Flashback:

In the party...Anaya was waiting for Kabir  when she found shreya smiling at her...

Sh: happy birthday baby! 

A: thank u!

Sh: vaise aapki mamma toh hai nahi yaha...aapne unko bohot tang kiya na isiliye...aur aapke daddy bhi mujhe pyaar karte hai...aap dono ko nahi...aur vo aapko chodke mere paas aayenge...


The party was almost over and all the guests had left...
Anaya went to kabir...who was having his dinner and sat down quietly...


Kabir found it  peculiar but then thought that she was too tired and sleepy...



Fladhback ends...


Kabir was shocked at what he had heard...
But there no time for it...he immediately called Anita and asked her cone urgently...
Anita promised to reach in 10 mins...



Kabir kept on changing the wet cloth on her forehead till Anita came running in with a doctor...


The doctor checked her and said...
D: Mr.Kabir...isse kisi baat ka sadma laga hai aur overtensed hone ki vajah se bukhaar chad gaya hai...ise kisi ne kuch kaha hai kya? kuch aisa jise iska komal man seh nahi paaya?
Filhaal main ek injection lagakar jaa rahi hu...call me if needed...


Next morning...
Kabir had taken an off whike Anita was staying over...
The first thing that Anaya saw as she opened her eyes was kabir looking at her lovingly...
Kabir bent and placed a kiss pn her cheek and said...


K: good morning! uth gaya mela baby?

A: ( weakly) daddy...aap ..mujhe chodke...chale jaoge????

K: bilkul nahi...bhala main apni iss sundar pari ko chodke kyu jau????? hmmm

A: par Shreya auntie...

K: ( whispered) Shreya auntie na PAAGAL hai!!

They both giggle. ...and kabir hugs her tighty...


K: main apni princess se bohot pyaar karta hu...phir main kisi aur ke paas lyu jau?

Kabir reassured Anaya and hugged her again...


                           TBC😃