KaYa FF : Come Back My Love ( Epilogue : page 19 ) * Complete*

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello folks...
I'm back with a new story...don't worry puraane waale nahi bhoolungi...

In this story Kabir will be a father to a 6 yes old daughter...and Ananya will be in coma due to an accident...caused by Shreya...

The story will revolve around kabir and his wait for his love to return...how he handles his daughter single handedly giving her the love of both parents..answering her inocent queries...


Hope u like it...
Will post soon after my exams starting day after ending on 30 September...


Thank u!
Riya
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved the concept
please continue πŸ˜Š
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Hi ppl...have just returned after giving the first paper...
Found time to update...hope it's up to the mark...


Chapter 1:


Kabir threw his blazer on the couch of his cabin and sat down in his plush leather orange rotating chair...  


He stared the desktop wallpaper of his laptop screen...it was a picture of a laughing Ananya..her million dollar smile...her hazel brown eyes that had always attracted him...her pouty pink lips ever inviting!


Kabir smiled sadly looking at the picture...
K: ab bas bhi karo na Ananya...bohot tang karliya mujhe...ab uth bhi jao...kitna sogi...please come back! I need u...we need u!


His phone beeped indicating the arrival of a new notification...
He smiiled as he read the message he had received from his mother-in-law's no.

" Daddy! "
He smiled at the message That his little angel had sent him...


He collected his car keys and grabbed his blazer and walked out and drove to the Kashyap house...


An: aao beta pata hai hum kabse intezaar kar rahe hai...


K: sorry ma...aap toh jaanti haina...kaam ka pressure...


An: ha beta...par u should give her time too...dekho toh kone mein mooh phulaaakar baithi hai...


Kabir shook his head and walked up to the little figure sitting on the couch...with puffed cheeks...


Kabir kneeled down and made a puppy face...

K: sorry...Vo...

A: office mein kuch zaruri kaam tha...next time pakka!...daddy! Ye bohot puraana hai...aap roz hi toh bolte hai...


Kabir put his daughter on his lap and kissed her cheek...

K: haawww! Itna gussa...ma main toh darrr gaya!  Bachao mujhe!

His daughter looked angrily at him...he joined his nose with hers and whispered...


K: vaise.. aaj chocolate icecream toh daddy akele khaayenge...haina Anaya?


A: aap bohot gande ho daddy aap hamesha aisa hi karte ho...chalo...


K: achcha chalo kaan pakadke sorry...

He holds his ears and Anaya beams...

A: Anaya promise?

K: ha meri ma...Anaya promise!

Anaya pulled his cheeks and said...

A: good boy! Par punishment ke taur pe mujhe gulab jaamun chahiye...

K: achcha beta...apna kaam nikaalna aata hai aapko...naughty girl! Pata hai mamma bhi aisi hi thi...ha Vo alag baat hai Aur bhi naughty girl thi...( winking at Anita and Armaan)...


K: ok done!


Anaya at once hugged him tight and kissed his cheek...


K: I love u daddy! Aap world ke bestest daddy ho!


Kabir too hugged her...


K: awwwle mela baby! Aap bhi best baby ho !


Kabir  picked her up in his arms and left after wishing goodnight to Anita and Armaan...


Later that night...
In a beautiful apartment...
K: Aur phir prince Aur princess bohot happily rehne lage...

A: hmmm...achchi story thi daddy! Daddy sabke paas unki mamma hoti haina jo unse itna saara pyaar karti hai phir mere paas kyu nahi hai? Kya main bad girl hu...isiliye Vo mujhe chodkar chali gayi?


K: ( trying his best not to break down) n..nahi beta...meri Anaya toh sabse good girl hai...daddy ki princess hai na Vo? Phir...aapki mamma na sorahi hai...Vo bohot jaldi uthengi Aur aapke liye gifts bhi laayegi...


Anaya nodded her head and smiled...


A: daddy jab mamma ayengi toh Vo baki mammas ki tarah mere liye shopping karengi? Cake banayengi...dark chocolate wala!!!!


K: ( kissed her forehead) of course my shona! Karengi na! Tabtak aapke daddy haina...hmmm?


Anaya smiled and huddled close to her father...Kabir gently patted her to sleep and dosed off himself...


Next morning...
Kabir reached KKN at about 8:30



It was the day Shreya had returned after 5 years after an important expansion related process naturally she didn't know about Anaya and that's what Kabir wanted...but unknown to him Shreya already knew this...



Meanwhile in a hospital...
Ananya lay on a bed...with life support system...her eyes closed...she didn't look peaceful...


Kabir entered the ward and asked the nurse for privacy...
After the nurse left...
He took Ananya's hand and kissed it...

K: uth bhi jao na Ananya...Aur kitna tadpaogi...please uth jao...


Saying this he broke down...he had kept patient all these years...but the pain in his daughter's eyes...the longing of her mother...he couldn't take it...he had no answers to her innocent questions...he was tired...he just wanted the love of his life...



He got lost in the memory of the time they first met...


FLASHBACK:


Delhi...morning 7:30am


Kabir was jogging with ear phones plugged in his ears...
The weather was all peaceful and cool...


Suddenly he heard a feminine voice...asking for help...he walked towards the source of the scream...


In an isolated part of the park... he saw a very beautiful girl in the grip of two men...both gripping either of her hands...she had tears in her eyes and was yelling...loudly...



A: chodo mujhe! I said leave me u jerk! 

M1: arrey re jaaneman! Hume yu tanha chod mat jaana!

A: tumhari tanhaayi my foot! Leave u u moron!

They both kept laughing loudly and were ready to pounce on her when one of them felt a tap on his shoulder and was knocked out as soon as turned...


Kabir pulled Ananya from the grip of the other fellow and pushed her slightly behind him...



Kabir was suddenly overcome with a rage and he beat the men black and blue until they scurried away ...



He turned around to find a teary eyed Ananya...her eyes full of tears threatening to spill...slightly shocked too seeing The Kabir Sharma! Her idol!



K: ( gently) uh..are u ok..?

Ananya nodded slightly...but her teary eyes told him she was not fine...


K: here ( he offered her her handkerchief) 

Ananya took it hesitantly and wiped her tears with it...
She sat on the bench as Kabir offered her some water...


A: thank u...sir...aap nahi hote toh ...I'm really grateful...

K: please! It's ok...don't thank me...are u ok now?


Ananya nodded her head as Kabir bided her a good bye and left...



                         TBC😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yayy Me first 
Anaya naam aur bacchi dono bohot cute hain😳
Bechara Kabir feeling bad for him 

Great Update πŸ‘πŸΌ


Update Childhood love plzz :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
This gave me butterfly knots in my stomach 
Awesome 

Please continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
aaawww
it was so cute and touching
plz contniue soon
and best of luck for ur exams
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Posted: 8 years ago
your story will work as breather these days. A very good start...
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Awesome update   πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ⭐️
Plss update soon.. πŸ˜ƒ
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Chapter 2:

It was only Ronnie and Richa who knew of Anaya's existence since Ananya gave birth to Anaya just before slipping into coma...


Kabir was too scared that Shreya being the physco she was could harm his infant daughter...and he certainly could afford That...



Evening...in cafeteria...

Ronnie and Kabir were sitting...sipping coffee...
R: sir...Anaya theek hai kya?...I mean...

K: ( whispered) ha...she's ok...ma use movie dikhane le gayi hai...main usse sab kuch dena chahta hu...par ronnie main paiso se kuch bhi le aau par use uski ma ka pyaar kaise du? Use Ananya ki zarurat hai...and I'm just...just helpless...just helpless...


Kabir hit the table in frustration...

Ronnie kept a hand on his shoulder...

R: don't worry sir...Ananya kab tak soegi...uthegi na ek din...zarur uthegi...

K: I really hope...doctors ka kehna hai ki Vo khatre se bahar hai par uski body treatment ko respond hi nahi kar rahi...


Ronnie hugged Kabir reassuringly...


Kabir broke the hug on hearing his phone ring...he walked to the privacy of his cabin on seeing the caller-ID...


A: hullo daddy! I'm missing u! Ghar aao na!

K: awww! Sorry beta...daddy busy haina...kitna saara kaam hota hai unhe office mein...


A: hmmm...( all sad but her face lit up the next second)...daddy maine na aapke liye surprise bheja hai...


Kabir paled a little since he didn't want Anaya's existence to be known...
K: uh...achcha...kya?

A: arrey buddhu! ( facepalm) surprise batate thodi hai...


K: ok baba..chalo bye take care Aur main jaldi aunga...ok?

A: okay!

Kabir cut the call...a peon knocked at the glass door of his cabin...
On receiving a nod from him the peon entered... 

P: sir...ye letter aapke liye...

K: ( took the letter) thank u!

He was amazed at the envelop and it's design...
Kabir opened the neatly sealed letter and was shocked to find the writing which loooked very small and awkward...
It read...


Editor-in-chief Kabir Sharma
KKN News Channel


Dear daddie
I lub ( love) u...and u are my best friend...I miss mamma but I lub u becase ( because) u brn ( bring) my favvat ( favorite) toy
Anaya Sharma



Kabir had a aww look on his face...he loved this...soo much! There was one more paper inside the teddy bear design envelop...


It was a drawing with three figures...one was a male which he understood was himself holding the hand of a small child ( Anaya Ofcourse! )
Another lady a little farther while the child tried to stretch her hand towards her but couldn't...( lady is Ananya)



Kabir couldn't stop his tears looking at that...
Kh: kabir!

Kabir heard Khalid's voice and hurriedly wiped away his tears and hid the envelop...

K: bolo Khalid...


Both of them discussed some important TOP related things...


After a bang on bulletin Kabir Kashyap house to pick Anaya and then they left for home...

In the car...


A: daddy...aaj bhi maine aapka...bull..bully ( bulletin) dekha...aap na TV pe bohot achchi story bolte ho...Aur phir end mein aap bolte ho...zin...zinda..zindabaad!



Kabir chuckled at her cuteness...
K: thank u my doll! Vaise aap mera BULLY ro dekhte ho...


A: ha...Aur 7 pm ko Vo ek uncle haina..Vo...Manav...Vo bhi!
Mujhe hasi aati hai!



Kabir giggles...

K: Aur?


A: Richa didi! Kyunki Vo mamma ki best friend haina...Aur meri favorite!


K: vaise meri pyaari baby ka toh 6th birthday haina next week...haina?

A: hmmm...par mamma ke bina...nahi chahiye birthday!

Anaya starts crying...


Kabir stops the car at a side and cups her face and wipes her tears...

J: itni choti aakho mein itne mote mote aasu!


He kisses her cheek and hugs her...


K: na mera bachcha! Aise nahi rote hai...aap good girl hona meri...Aur mamma kya sochengi agar aap roogi? Hmmm? Ki daddy toh Anaya ka dhyaan hi nahi rakhte...  


A: ( sobbing) daddy...subah..subah...aap chale jaate ho naani...naani Aur mama hi hote hai...Aur...dusre bachcho ke paas...mam... mamma daddy! Toh mere kyu nahi?


K: ( caressing her hair)...shaant ho jao baby! Chalo...stop crying...ok kal daddy Aur Anaya dono ki chutti ok? Main full day aapke saath hi rahunga...ok my sweetheart?


Anaya hugged him tightly...



They had dinner outside since Kabir wanted to cheer her up...
Both reached home soon after...Anaya had fallen asleep...Kabir lovingly smiled at his sleeping daughter and picked her up in his arms and carried her home...


Anita had already changed German clothes so he put her in bed and tucked her in and sat beside her...working on his laptop...



Past:


It was Kabir's first day at KKN as editor-in-chief...

In conference room...


Kh: are all present?

M: nahi...Ananya nahi aayi hai...pata nahi kaha hai...I'm getting worried Khalid...

K: u know I don't like people who are late Malvika!

M: kabir Vo aisi nahi hai...I think we'll wait...


Just then a beautiful girl with curly open hair in sky blue top and with a floral scarf and jeans almost barges in...


A: sorry sir! Vo..main...main...actually...v..Vo...

Richa rushes to Ananya...


R: oye! Tu theek toh haina Ananya? Kuch bolegi?...


A: ha..m..m..main theek h..hu..


Meanwhile Kabir was boggled to see the same girl he had saved that morning...


K: its alright miss...Kashyap...right? Please take your seat...


A: ye..ye..yes sir!


After the the editorial meeting ...Ananya knocks the door of Kabir's cabin...


K: come in!!
Kabir replies in his monotone voice...


A: uh...s..sir Vo main...actually...aapko thanks kehne ...aayi thi...Vo subah ke liye...


K: it's alright agar koi Aur ladki bhi hoti tabhbhi main vahi karta...


Ananya was a bit dejected but she hid it...


K: in sab mein hamara introdction hi nahi hua...


He extended his hand to clasp hers...he took her delicate hand in his and shook it...


K: Kabir Sharma

A: Aapko kon nahi jaanta sir...main hu junior reporter Ananya Kashyap...


Saying this she gave him one of the cutest smile ever...


   

                          TBC😳

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Originally posted by: zakter

Loved the concept

please continue πŸ˜Š

Thank u!