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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi
    I have read all the parts u wrote really awesome when I read that and congrats for ur second thread please kindly post the next part of story as soon as possible.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal

u never pm-ed me!! :-( I was waiting soo eagerly neel.. didn't knew 2nd thread is out... well read and deffo comment on one condition... do pm me...




Hii bro ..hope u r doing fine ... 

I have never pmed anyone for this story πŸ˜• , i don't have that much time these days ,when im publishing this story that time itself i said No pms .
Sorry i cant PM ... 
Thank you for reading the story . 
Edited by luvsakshi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
PART-29


Next morning,

Priya woke up Pihu to get ready for the school. Pihu is very excited. Where on one side Priya is get ready Pihu other side she saw today also Kush is struggling with shoe lace. She goes near him and helps him to tie the shoe lace. Kush smile Priya also smile and caresses his head lightly.

Kush:- Chalo Pihu neeche chalte hai. Both ran down.

Priya smiles and turn to leave when Amarnath knocks the door.

Priya:- Papa aap yahan

Amar:- Priya...Mein tumse kuch baat karna chahta hoon

Priya:- haan kahiye na papa

Amar:- Muje kal Rajat ne bataya ki tum office dhund rahi ho.

Priya looks down "Haan mera Singapore office ka kaam bhi hai toh meine socha ki ek chotta sa office dekh lu toh mein yahan ka wahan ka dono ka kaam sambhal sakti hoon.

Amar:- Lekin uski kya zaroorat hai beta. Kapoor industries mein rehkar bhi tum apna kaam kar sakti ho na.

Priya:- Papa yeh sahi nahi hoga

Amar:- Please beta...Tum muje papa bulati ho toh apne papa ki baat nahi maanogi. Please beta mana matt karna tum apne office ke liye jaisa arrangements chahti ho mein bilkul waisa hi arrangement kar dunga.

Priya is helpless. She cannot deny Amarnath request. At last she agreed "Teek hai Papa"

Amarnath smiles and put his hand on her forehead and left.

 

In the Dining table,

Ram:- Pihu you looks very cute in school dress. Pihu smiles and said thank you.

Ram:- Kush aaj se Pihu bhi aapke saat school jaayegi. Pihu ka first day hai na aap Pihu ka dhyan rakna ok

Kush:- Haan papa mein Pihu ko apne friends se bhi milaunga. Just then Priya and Amarnath came down. She looks at Ram and remember yesterday night incident.

Pihu:- Mumma chalo na jaldi se breakfast kar lo nahi toh school ke liye late ho jaayega.

Amarnath:- Pihu aap happy ho yahan.

Pihu:- Haan bahut happy hoon dadu. Pehle mere saat sirf mumma thi abhi papa hai, kush hai aap ho dadi hai badi dadi hai. Pihu bahut happy hai.

Ram:- Kush first term ke baad ke lessons ko finish karne mein aap Pihu ki help karna Ok.

Kush:- Ok dad.

Ram:- Tumhara homework complete hai.

Kush nodded his head in negative. "Muje Maths ka sum nahi aa raha tha"

Ram:- Kush aap papa se puchte. Kush aap jante ho na agar tum homework complete nahi karoge toh papa ko gussa aayega.

Kush:- Kal aap late aaye the dad.

Ram:- Kush ghar mein aur bhi log hai. Muje aaj ke baad tumhara homework hamesha complete chahiye.

Kush becomes scared and nodded his head lightly. Priya noticed Kush expression change into fear.

Priya:- Pihu chalo beta jaldi se breakfast complete karo.

Pihu finishes her food quickly and everybody left.

Priya:- Pihu aap papa ke saat jaavo mumma dusri car mein aati hai.

Ram:- Dusri car mein kyun...Priya hum koi business work ke liye nahi jaa rahe hai...School jaa rahe hai. Kya sochegi Principal agar unhone hum dono ko alag alag aate hue dekha toh. Hum sab ek hi car se jaayenge.

Pihu:- mumma-papa aap dono phir se fight kar rahe ho

Ram:- nahi rockstar aap gaadi mein baitho mumma bhi hamare saat chal rahi hai. Saying this he held Priya's hand opens the front door of the car and made her to sit in the car.

Priya thinks "aap mere saat zabardasti nahi kar sakte Mr. Kapoor"

 

They reached School.

Priya:- Pihu achhe se padai karna aur kuch bhi problems ho toh Miss ko batana ok...saying this she kisses on her cheeks.

Ram:- Rockstar aap apni class mein jao. Papa aapki class teacher se milkar aate hai. He then turns towards Priya and said "Priya tum gaadi mein baitho mein ek baar pihu ke class teacher se milkar aata hoon"

Priya sits in the car and thinks "Ram Pihu ke liye itna sab kuch kar rahe hai. Pihu ko bhi apne papa ki aadat ho rahi hai. Kya hoga jab cheh mahine ke baad Pihu apne papa se alag ho jaayegi. Muje samaj nahi aa raha aakir yeh kya chahte hai. Yeh sab se Ram meri aur Pihu ki mushkile bada raha hai. Kya waqui mein Ram Pihu se itna pyar karte hai ki yeh sirf muje dhikane ke liye kar rahe hai". Her chain of thought broke when Ram came back and sit besides her.

Ram:- Papa ne abhi call kiya tha woh tumhara office mein wait kar rahe hai.

Priya said nothing.

Ram again:- Pihu ka first day hai sab kuch achhe se ho jaaye. Meine Pihu ki madam se kaha toh hai ki Pihu ka dhyan rake. Kush bhi hai toh I think Pihu ko problem nahi hogi.

 

Priya again kept quiet. Ram switch on the player and some soft song start playing. Priya ignored it and looks outside. Ram observes her change in expression. Ram drove the car to the KI. Priya came out and without waiting for him she entered into the lift. When she entered into the office all staff employees wished her Good morning but at the same time they are giving odd looks and looks into each other. After some time Ram also entered and headed directly to his cabin.

Some employees were talking about Ram and Priya.

1st employee:- Pata chala hamare Ram sir aur Priya madam husband-wife hai. Inn dono ke beech kuch problems ho gayi thi issliye dono alag rehte the

People were surprised and curious to know more about raya.

One employee:- Haan suna toh meine bhi hai. Pata nahi isme kitni sachaayi hai.

1st one:- Aur jo Priya ma'am ke saat ek bachhi thi na PIHU woh Ram sir aur Priya Madam ki beti hai.

Another employee:- Ohh toh inke beech mein kya problem thi

1st one:- Woh toh pata nahi lekin suna hai ki abhi Priya madam Ram sir ek saat hi rehte hai. Yeh deal weal sirf ek bahana hai. Yeh sab pehle se hi plan tha.

One employee:- Wah apne sir toh bade chupe rustam nikle. Lekin manna padega Priya ma'am kya mast lagti hai.

Another employee:- Issliye toh uss din party mein Anil aur Arvind sir Priya ma'am ke baare mein kuch bol rahe the aur Ram sir ne sunn liya aur unhe job se nikal diya.

Priya and Amarnath came out from the cabin and all the employees get back to the work.

 

In the evening Priya came back to KM,

Pihu ran to receive her mumma. Priya took her in embrace.

Priya:- Achha Pihu aaj aapka school mein first day kaisa tha

Pihu:- Bahut achha tha mumma aur pata hai muje yahan 3 friends bhi bann gaye hai.

Priya:- That's very good. Aur school mein achhe se padai kiya na.

Pihu:- Haan aur Kush ne meri mera work complete karne mein help bhi kiya.

Priya:- Yeh toh bahut achhi baat hai. Achha toh aap dono ka homework complete ho gaya.

Kush:- Nahi Priya angel. Muje maths bahut difficult lagta hai.

Priya(doubtedly):- Priya Angel!!!! Aapko kisne bataya mein Priya Angel hoon.

Kush:- Papa ne.

Priya:- Papa ne????

Kush:- Haan aaj school ke baad papa hum dono ko lene aaye the tabhi papa ne bataya ki aap meri Priya Angel ho. Aap meri Priya Angel ho na?????

Priya is surprised but smilingly said "Haan Kush mein tumhari Priya Angel hoon".


Days passed,

Priya becomes busy in her work. She is maintaining only professional relationship with ram; all other times she avoids Ram to the maximum. She leaves office early and come back home before Ram. At home also she spends most of her time with Pihu and Kush. She helps them to complete their homework. Pihu is also happy with her parents and family. Kush is very fond of Priya Angel. Priya is happy with Pihu and Kush. She is ignoring ram as much as she can. It doesn't matter to her whether he is at home or not. Now she is not scared of Ram that he will take any advantage of her. Obviously she notice changes in Ram but it's not sufficient to change her opinion about Ram. Above all inside she is worry about Pihu. What will happen after six months? Ram and Pihu is attached to each other. Will she able to make her understand y they separated. Now Kush is also a part of her life. Is it possible for her to separate from Kush. She knew how much he is fond of her. Shrugging of all her worries she is enjoying with her kids.

             Ram tries to spend most of his time with Pihu and Kush though he know his work is his priority but he also know that after six month Pihu will not be there in his life. This pricks his heart the most. There is no doubt he fall for Priya but it's only a dream but he is happy to live with his dreams. He admires her beauty. Every night he comes to priya's room gaze at her for some time and left. More he sees Priya the more he falls in love with her.

 

Priya come to the office alone and sometimes with Amarnath. One day Amarnath and Priya entered into the office when they overhear the talks of staff people.

1st employee:- Priya ma'am ko yahan kaam karke ek mahine se upar ho gaya hai lekin kabhi bhi Ram Sir aur Priya ma'am ko baat karte hue ya ek saat aate jaate nahi dekha hai.

2nd employee:- Haan dono alag alag waqt mein aate hai aur alag alag gaadi mein aate hai

1st one:- Haan bade log hai inke paas ek nahi dus dus gaadiyaan hai toh aayenge bhi toh alag alag

Other one:- Muje toh lagta hai yeh dono saat hone ka natak kar rahe hai. Ek baar mein inke saat lift mein tha lekin dono bahut alag alag kade the aur ek dusre ka dekh bhi nahi rahe the.

1st one:- haan yeh toh meine bhi notice kiya hai. Kuch toh inn dono ke beech mein chal raha hai.

2nd one:- chal yaar kaam karte hai...kisi ne sunn liya toh hamari khair nahi...dekhte hai aur kya kya hota hai office mein.

 

Priya becomes upset and goes to her cabin. Amarnath know how much she is feeling bad. He also enters into the cabin.

Amarnath:- Priya dekho logo ki soch ko mooh ko tum chup nahi kar sakti. Insan hai baate banayenge hi...farak sirf itna hai ki hum inki baato ko kitna seriously lete hai. Priya is silent.

Amarnath:- Beta logo ki baato par itna react matt karo. Haan ek baat kehna chahunga ghar ki baate ghar tak hi rahe toh achha hai. Baat ghar se bahar niklegi toh log baat toh banayenge hi.

Priya said nothing

Amarnath continue:- Priya tum dono ek hi jagah aate ho kaam karne lekin dono alag alag aate ho. Jaate bhi alag alag ho. Office mein bhi tum dono kabhi baat nahi karte, Ek dusre ko dekhkar haste nahi toh log ulti seedhi baat toh karenge hi. Beta mein janta hoon tum kush nahi ho aur tum yahan se jitna jaldi ho sake jana chahti ho lekin beta jab tak ho eise udas aur shanth matt raha karo. Mein tumhe hamesha muskurate hue dekhna chahta hoon beta.

Priya's eyes become wet. Amarnath caresses her head "Achha toh yeh sab kuch bhool jaavo aur kaam par dhyan do. Saying this he left.

Amarnath came out from the cabin and warned all the staff people to concentrate on work than gossiping.

 

One day Priya is in her cabin. Ram also enters into office. He once looks at Priya cabin and then he heard Priya is talking with somebody. He goes near her cabin and tries to overhear her talk. It was not clear but he can understand she is talking with one man. Ram is curious to know who is that.

Priya:- Karthik bolo kya chahiye tumhe.

Karthik:- Di muje thode paiso ki zaroorat hai. Agar meine investors ko paise nahi diya toh unke log muje zinda nahi chodenge di. Please help me di.

Priya:- Karthik please don't panic. Mein tumhe help karungi. Bolo kitne paiso ki zaroorat hai

Karthik:- 5 lakh...5 lakh kaafi hai.

Outside Ram KARTHIK????. Karthik yahan kya kar raha hai. Nahi mein Karthik ko janta hoon woh priya se jhoot bolkar paise maang raha hai aur mein eise hone nahi dunga. He pushes the cabin door and enter.

Ram(angrily):- Karthik tum yahan kya kar rahe ho aur tumhe ander aane kisne diya. He goes near Karthik and held his collar.

Priya got up from the place and shouted "stop it. aapko mere cabin ke andar aane ko kisne permission dia...Chodiye Ram and she try to removes his hand from Karthik's collar. Ram please chodiye Karthik mujse milne aaya hai".

Ram removed his hand from him and said "Abhi yahan se chale jao warna mein security ko bulakar tumhe yahan se dhakke maarkar nikal dunga".

Priya:- Karthik kahi nahi jaayega.

Karthik with an attitude said "aap hote kon hai muje yahan se nikalne wale. Mein yahan apne di se milne aaya hoon"

Ram:- Di???? Uska meaning bhi janta hai

Karthik:- Meri baat kar rahe hai aap???? Mr. Ram Kapoor kya aap biwi ka matlab jante hai. Aapne jo kiya meri di ke saat uske baad toh di ke chehre se hasi hi gayab ho gayi hai aur aap muje sikha rahe hai di ka matlab.

Ram:- Karthik U...He pointed his finger at him. His eyes show how much anger he is...Just shut ur mouth.

 

Priya had enough. She shouted "Enough...bass kariye aap dono. Apna nahi toh yeh toh khayal kariye ki aap dono office mein hai. Karthik tuje paise chahiye na mein tere account mein aaj hi paise transfer kar dungi.

Ram:- Priya he is a cheater. Tumse jhoot bolkar tumse paise maang raha hai. Tum iski baato par matt aavo.

Priya:- Enough Mr. Kapoor. Yeh mera paisa hai aur muje kisise puchne ki zaroorat nahi hai ki muje kise kya dena chahiye.

Karthik:- Thanks Di...aap bahut achhi hai. Mein bahut jald aapka saara paisa wapas kar dunga.

Karthik knows that he hit at the right place.  He smiles evilly at Ram.

Priya:- Iski koi zaroorat nahi hai Karthik.

Karthik:- Teek hai di mein chalta hoon. But Priya stops him "Ek minute karthik Maa kaisi hai"

Karthik:- Maa achhi hai di. Aapko kaafi yaad karti hai.

Priya smiles a little and said "Maa se kehna ki apna khayal rake aur meri chintaa bilkul na kare"

Karthik nodded and left. Ram stares at Priya for a while and he also left the cabin.

Priya to herself "Mein janti hoon Karthik tuje paise kisi investors ko nahi dene hai".

 

Precap:- Sweet raya scenes and a step closer to their relation.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Are wah what a update really really fantastic I think rays will be closer on reading this update when I read ur precap I am sure that they will become one superb yar and please continue soon as soon as possible waiting for ur update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update..
Ibwant Raya to come more close..
Katyhik is cheating... But she has improved so much that she knows it.. But in anger towards ram she helps karthik.. This is not right..
Want to know more seeing the precap..
Please continue soonπŸ˜›πŸ˜›

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Posted: 8 years ago
nyc part..KI emplys were gspng abt ram n priya...priya felt bad..karthk tk advntgs of priya's kind nature...wtng fr d nxt updt..Edited by devajaan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update.
I feel Karthic should not be spared.
He also needs harsh punishment.
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update.
I feel Karthic also needs harsh punishment. Don't spare him too.
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update...
Precap looks great..hope all the problems will be sorted out..
Pls continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update!!
Plz continue soon!!!