ArSh FF "Sajnaa" Part 4 Page 13 23/07 - Page 3

Originally posted by: ajuswa19

THIS IS AMAZING ARMAAN IN HIS SAD ANGRY YOUNGMAN LOOK😎

N THAT HEARTBROKEN LOVER!!!😳 M LOVING IT! POST SOON!

EAGERLY W8ING FOR PART1😛

Originally posted by: kavyanjali08

Interesting...Armaan seems to gave turned full on devdas. update soon!

Originally posted by: sur1911

Interesting concept dear

Poor arman his heart break twice

N shilpa dead.omg.

Plz continue soon.

Thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: 7APK

Wow !!!! Nice...
Par thoda chhotu tha...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Update ...
Loved it...
Continue Soon...
Thanks for the PM 😳

OMG sissy

Originally posted by: ILuvKaran

OMG sissy

who was he??

armaan?

armaan in angry young man form

m very eager dear

do continue soon

thanks 4 pm

thanks dear
will do😉

Wow...

nice prologue...                                      
update soon and thanks for the pm ...

SAJNAA

PART 1

 

 

Place : Mumbai shahar ka ek cheap bar

 

Time : 1 bajke 17 minute

 

We can see many people are there having fun some were dancing some were sitting on the sette's some are at the bar counter

 

Apart from everyone one guy was sitting very far from everyone in some corner of a bar n is sipping his drink n on his other side kuch sit's chod kar one girl is sitting and she is continuously looking at him but the guy he was not paying attention to her

 

Wo ladki kafi der se us ladko dekh rahi he

 

He is damn handsome with killer looks and great physic.

 

Wo ladki uth kar us ladke ke paas aati he n says

 

Girl : hey handsome

 

But wo ladka us ladki ki taraf palat kar dekhta bhi nahi he was only sipping his drink

 

Wo ladki fir try karti he

 

 Girl : I m Ramona n u"she said seductively"

 

But wo fir bhi koi jawab nahi deta n wo ladki wo tab bhi piche nahi hatti n says

 

Ramona : can I get u a drink darling"while saying this try to touch him on his shoulder"

 

She seductively moves her finger on his arm wo ladka tab bhi kuch nhi kehta

 

Ramona thinks he was giving her line so wo us ladke par lean hoti he or uske ear me kehti he

 

Ramona : baby take me I am all yours take me I'll never leave yo..

 

Ramona ki baat khatm bhi nahi hoti n suddenly landed on floor use kuch samjh nahi aata kuch pal

 

Kuch pal pehle

 

Jab Ramona bol rahi hoti he baby take me I am all yours take me I'll never... tabhi wo ladka use jor se push karta he that result in her landed on floor

 

Back to present

 

Sab tham jata he kyuki jab wo ladka use push karta he to Ramona ka bar chair par jata he but push itna hard hota he wo steady nahi ho pati uski wajah se chair waha rahe glass table par girti he or table tut jata he jiski aawaz itni zor ki hoti he ki sab ruk jate he DJ music band kar deta he tab us ladke ki aawaz aati he

 

Ladka : DHOKEBAAZ"he roar like a wounded lion"

 

Sab dar jate he bar me n wo ladka kisiko nahi dekhta bas bar se sharab ki bottle uthata he or nikal jata he

 

haath me sharab ki bottle liye gusse me,ladkhadata hua...

 

Wo bohot gusse me he or bohot drunk bhi usse thik tarah chala bhi nahi ja raha use ye tak hosh nahi ki kaha ja raha uski bike kaha he ye bhi nahi janta wo

 

Bas chala ja raha he sharab pita hua

 

Ladka : WHY WHY DAMMIT usne kaha tha ki wo mujhe chod kar kabhi nahi jaegi to kyu kiya usne esa I HATE HER nafrat karta hu me tumhe...tum dhokebaaz ho dhoka diya he tumne mujhe pyaar karti thi na mujhse to fir kyu kiya esa kyu????me tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karunga kabhi nahi...

 

He was totally drunk road ke bicho bich ghumta hua chal raha he uski body shiver kar rahi he gusse se itni pi rakhi he ki kab gir padega keh nahi sakte nashe me puri tarah chur he fir bhi piye ja raha he mano kisiko saza dena chahta ho khudko chot pahuchake  

 

Nashe me ghumta hua wo road par chal raha he piche se horn ki awaaz aati he but wo to besud ho kar bas apni hi dhun me chale ja raha he

 

Car which was coming from behind car driver was continuously horn baja raha n even shouting too

 

Car driver : are bhai samne hat ja ghadi ke break fail he SAMNE SE HATO..

 

But us ladke ko hosh hi nahi he na kuch sunai de raha he na kuch samjhme aa raha he wo bas I HATE U...I HATE HER... Yahi keh raha he

 

Tabhi the car bash him from behind

 

Wo ladka zamin par gir jata he har taraf usa khoon he n wo car ped se ja kar Takrati he

 

Car driver ko itni nahi lagti wo jaldi se us ladke ke paas aata he us ladke ka face bilkul visible nahi he its covered with his own blood

 

Wo car driver jaldi se ek ghadi rukwata he or use us ghadi me bithata he n car speedly hospital ki taraf doudne lagti he

 

Wo ladka continuously kuch badbadae ja raha he kuch bhi clearly sunai nahi de raha he

 

Its something like me ... maaf nahi ... tumne ...dil... I hat... Dhokeb...

 

Is tarah ka kuch bole ja raha he

 

At hospital

 

Car driver : doctor doctor

 

Doctor : oh my god inka to bohot khoon beh chukka he nurse jaldi se OT ready karo

 

Doc to car driver : ye sab kese hua

 

Car driver : meri car ke breaks fail ho gaye or ye ladka na jane kaha se bichme aa gaya shayad hosh me nahi tha na horn ki aawaz uni na meri plzzz doctor save him agar ise kuch ho gaya to me khudko kabhi maaf nahi kar paunga meri wajah se kisi begunah ki jaan... plzzz doctor

 

Doc : ye police case he hume unka.."but uski baat khatam bhi nahi hoti.."

 

Car driver : mene pehle hi call kar diya he doc janta tha ye accident case he police nahi hogi to aap log use treat nahi karenge

 

Tabhi waha police aati he

 

Police : yaha mr. bajaj kon he

 

Car driver : me officer mene hi aapko call kiya tha meri hi car se accident hua he

 

Inspector doctor se baat karta he then doctor went towards OT

 

Inspector or mr. bajaj dono hi OT ke bahar wait kar rahe he

 

Kuch time baad doctor bahar aate he

 

Inspector n bajaj : doctor ab wo thik he

 

Doc : its miracle jis tarah unka khoon baha usse to laga tha ki chot bohot gehri he I wonder itna khoon beh jane ke baad bhi wo ladka bach gaya

 

Bajaj : matlab doc

 

Doc : unka khoon bohot beh gaya he but chot jyada gehri nahi jiska itna  bada accident ho to patient ya to on the spot mar jata he ya bohot critical stage me hota he but the guy inside he is perfectly fine bas kuch chote he jese sar par stitches aaye he shoulder par chot he or kuch kharoche that's it hume unhe room me shift kar diya he unke hosh me aate he aap bayan le sakte he officer"n he left from there"

 

Thodi der baad us ladke ko hosh aata he

 

He was not getting ki wo kaha he or least he care  about his where about

 

Voice : ab kese he aap

 

Wo ladka confusingly dekhta he door ki taraf waha 3 log khade he ek unknown person,dusre ne white labcoat pehna hua he to ladka samjh jata he ki wo doctor he n unhi ke saath uniform me ek police inspector bhi he or wo voice inspector ki he

 

Ladka kuch nahi kehta bas dekh raha he

 

Inspector : ye mr. bajaj he inki ghadi se aapka accident hua he

 

Ladke ko to hosh hi nahi he was shocked listening this ki uska accident hua wo apne dimag par zor dalta he yaad karne ki koshish karta he ki kab hua accident kese hua but use kuch yaad nahi aata

 

Inspector : mujhe aapka bayan lena he

 

Ladka itni der me pehli bar kuch bola

 

Ladka : mujhe kisike khilaf koi complaint nahi karni accident hua he ya nahi mujhe yaad nahi or hua bhi hoga to meri hi galti hogi so inhe jane do

 

Mr. bajaj thankful look dete he us ladke ko

 

But wo ladka uska face to expression less he na dard kuch nahi

 

Doctor ne kaha ki jyada chot nahi lagi but esa to nahi ki chot hi nahi lagi but use un choto ka ehsaas hi nahi

 

Wo ladka bed se uthne ki try karta he

 

Doc : ye aap kya kar rahe he u need rest blood lost bohot ho chukka he its miracal ki aap bach gaye but u r very weak

 

Ladka sarcastically kehta he

 

Ladka : mujhe kuch hona hota to accident me ho gaya hota nahi hua na"with blank face"meri jaan bacha li aapki duty khatam yaha se jo hona he uska responsible sirf me

 

N starts to go outside of the room

 

Inspector : ok aap nahi koi complaint karna chahte to thik he but ye accident case he apna naam or number likhwa dijiye kuch bhi zarurat hui to I will call

 

Ladka ek pal rukta he but bina mude

 

Ladka : ARMAAN MALIK mera naam or no. mujhe yaad nahi

 

He went from there walking lifelessly...

 

Next  morning in sanjeevani

 

Sab locker room me he but ab locker room pehle ki tarah masti mazak logo ki hasi se nahi gunjata

 

Locker room hi kyu pura sanjeevani hospital its all quite jese koi na ho waha

 

Jese dr. shashank sanjeevani chahte the aaj wo wesa hi he unhe to khush hona chahiye but wo khush nahi

 

Aaj sanjeevani me koi masti mazak nahi hota koi pranks nahi khele jate sab bas aate he apna kaam karte he bas

 

Discipline he kaeda he koi kisise mazak nahi karta kisi ki hasi nahi gunjati

 

Koi apne patient se close nahi hota

 

Pichle 3 mahino se sanjeevani sirf ek work place he jaha sirf apne patients ki dekh bhal ki jati he logo ki jaan bachai jati he

 

Esa lagta he mano sanjeevani ek bejaan murjhaya hua phool he jiski khushboo kiski jaan kahi kho gayi ho

 

Jo Doctor khudko sanjeevani ka maalik kehta tha wo kahi kho gaya ho, jise sab THE BIGGEST PRANKSTER kehte the wo kahi gum ho gaya ho, jo har patient ke chehre par muskurahat bikherta tha aaj uske chere se muskurahat gayab ho gayi, jiske prnks jiske laughter se sanjeenavi alive lagta tha aaj uski aawaaz tak sunai nahi deti

 

Jo ARMAAN apne dosto ke liye kuch bhi kar guzarne ko taiyar tha aaj use ye bhi nahi hosh ki uske dost uske saath ek hospital me kaam karte he jo ARMAAN sanjeevani ki jaan tha har doctor her patient ka favourite tha aaj sirf ek zinda lash ban kar reh gaya he jisme koi jaan baki nahi

 

Wo aata he apne patient dekhta he unhe cure karta he or bas usi taraf chala jata he ek dam khamoshi se

 

Na kisise baat karta he na kisiki baate sunta he

 

Sab uski aawaaz sunne ko taras jate he but wo awaaz sirf rarely sunai deti he but aaj us aawaz me wo naughtiness, wo khushi nahi its hollow

 

Locker room me sab he old gang new gang but sab chup chap apna apna kaam kar rahe he

 

Tabhi armaan enter hota he

 

Sab ek dam se uski taraf dekhte he uske forhead par chot wo kuch ajeeb tarah se chal raha he uski chal se pata chalta he ki uske pair me bhi chot he but koi kuch nahi kehta na koi puchta he becoz now a days ye sab normal he

 

Armaan ko sharab ke nashe me chur dekhna, har din uske jism par choto ke nishan dekhna uski aankho me uske chere par blankness koi expression nahi ye sab roj ka he

 

Sab bas use hi dekh rahe he n wo to mano is duniya me hi nahi ho bas apni hi dhun me apne locker ki taraf ja raha he

 

Aaj jab bhi rahul muskan ladte he armaan nahi hota waha unhe rokne ke liye rahul ko tease karne ke liye abhimanyu se competition karne ke liye atul ko advise dene ke liye

 

Sabko armaan ko is tarah dekh kar bohot bura lagta he sabne use samjhane ki bohot koshish ki but koi asar nahi hua sid riddhima unske baki dost dr. shashank sab but kuch nahi hua

 

Some times riddhima used to breakdown seeing armaan like this

 

Dr. shashank jo use pasand nahi karte the aaj unhe uski fikra hoti he aaj wo apne decision par question kar rahe he ki kya unhone riddhima ki shaadi sid se kara ke galti to nahi ki

 

Sab apni apni duti par jate he sab silently kaam kar rahe he

 

Ese hi lunch time hota he

 

Sab cafeteria me he siwae armaan ke koi nahi janta har din wo isi waqt kaha chala jata he kitni baar use lunch ke liye bulate he ye log kitni baar force bhi karte he jabarjasti khilate he use to ye bhi hosh nahi hota ki wo kya kha raha he

 

Armaan ka riddhima ke liye itna  pyaar dekh sabko shock lagta he aaj wo armaan ka pyaar samjh pa rahe he but ab bohot der ho chuki he ye wo kyu nahi samjhta riddhima ne sid ko apnane ka faisla kar liya he

 

Riddhima ne kai bar use samjhane ki koshish ki ki wo aage badh chuki he use bhul kar armaan ko bhi aage badhna chahiye

 

Lunch break khatam hota he or sab fir apni duty par chale jate he

 

After shift sab locker room me he...

so guys here is the part 1 hope pasand aaye do tell me ki kesa he m waiting for ur reviews 

love u ramya

Edited by arsh4heaven - 6 years ago

awesome update ...
loved it...
ab jaldi jaldi next update bhi dedo...
eagerly waiting for next one...