SwaSan OS: 'Saath Saath'

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Posted: 8 years ago
After hearing that Swara and Sanskar will live together in a tent, many ideas came up in my mind, so thought of sharing with you this OS πŸ˜Š

Swara and Sanskar leave the MM house and settles down in the small tent outside in the garden.
It's evening and it's a cloudy day.
Swara enters the tent and looks around. It's a bit small, but they will have to manage.
Sanskar keeps their luggage on a side.
'I know Swara. tent thoda chota hai dono ke liye' says reading her mind thoughts. 'But don't worry'
Swara is looking at the bed. No sofa, just a bed for them.
Sanskar reassures her 'don't worry, tum yahan soh jana, mein bahar saun jayunga'
Swara looks at him 'bahar? Kese?'
He takes a pillow and a blanket and puts them outside the tent on the grass,'Eese' says indicating to her.
'Iski koi zaroorat nahi Sanskar, bed dono ke liye theek hai' and sits on the left side of the bed.
Sanskar sits on the right side. 'Swara tum meri fiqaar maat karo,vese bhi bahar thandi hawa chal rahi hai so mera AC to bahar hi hai' says trying to make her smile.

There is a moment of silence between the two, when Swara 'bhuk lagi hai' keeping a hand on her stomach.
'Mujhe bhi' agrees sanskar 'lekin yahan par kuch bhi nahi hai' checking around. He then checks his pockets and finds a small chocolate bar.
'yeh lo, aaj ke liye issi se guzara karna hoga'  extending his hand towards her.
She immeadiately tries to snatch it from him, but sanskar taking advantage of his height, raises his hand in the air.
Swara tries to jump a few times but in vain. She gets an idea and gets on the bed to snatch it, but Sanskar smartly moves away from there.
'Cheater' shouts Swara at him.
He runs away showing his tongue to her and teasing her. She followes him and they start running  around the tent.
Sanskar is way too fast for her and not able to reach him she pretends to get hurt,
'Ouch' she says falling down and touching her ankle. Sanskar worried comes to see her 'kya hua? Chot lagi? kaha?' but while he is checking her ankle she pushes him and gets the chocolate.
'Not fair'' he says looking at her.
'Everything is fair Mr. maheshwari' and greedily starts eating the chocolate bar.
Sanskar looks at her eating, finally she managed to divert her mind from Ragini and her plans.

Swara catches him while he was looking at her and she realize that he might be hungry as well. She already ate half of the bar; she hands him the other half 'yeh lo sanskar'
He looks at her astonished, it was the first time she was sharing the chocolates with him. 'Are you sure?'  inquires a bit doubtful. She nods with a smile.
Swara starts thinking about Ragini once again. ' shayed bhagwan ji bhi nahi chahte ki ragini ki sacchai sab ke saamne aaye' thinks loudly.
Sanskar hears her and realize that she is thinking about her sister. 
He goes to sit near her and keeps his hand on her shoulders.
'sanskar jab bhi mein kuch accha karne jaati hoon sab ulta ho jata hai; abhi maa aur baba ke beech mein misunderstandings aur zyada ho gayi'  says dejected. 
'Swara, yeh maat bhulo ke sacchai ki humesha jeet hoti hai, aur ek na ek din Ragini ka sach sab ke saamne zaroor aayega' lifiting up his chin. 'meri aakhon mein dekho'
She looks in his eyes with her teary eyes. 'ye maat bhulo ki tum akeli nahi ho Swara, mein tumhare saath hoon'  he assures her.
She gaze at him with surprised eyes, he is doing so much for her, he is supporting her no matter what, he is going against his family, his mom, dad, just for her.

They hear a noise outside. It was Ragini who brought a tiffin for them,but hearing their laugh placed the tiffin near the tent and went irked.
They come outside to see who is there and find the tiffin near the tent.
Sanskar goes to have a look around to see who brought it and finds Ragini entering the MM.
'Kon tha' questions him Swara when he comes back.
'Ragini' replies. 'Andar chale?' asks her wondering why ragini brought the tiffin. He believes something is wrong.
Swara quickly opens it and is about to eat when Sanskar stops it. 'Ruko Swara' and takes the tiffin.
Swara wonders what's wrong with him and follows him with her eyes. He takes a spoon and tastes it; after that he gives it back to her 'ab kha sakti ho' comments.
Swara is about to question him but he anticipates her 'yahi soch rahi ho ki meine eesa kyun kiya right? Wo actually mujhe Ragini par bilkul bhi bharosa nahi hai, ussne pehle bhi tumhari jaan lene ki koshish ki, kya pta aj bhi eesa kuch karti? So i just checked ki food mein poison to nahi hai; but everything seems okay, so ab kha sakti ho tum'
She puts aside the tiffin and walks near him 'pagal ho gaye ho? agar sach mein poison hota issme to?' 
'To kya? Mujhe kuch ho jata, but tum to bach jati na?'  replies in a very composed way.
She puts her hand on his lips 'sanskar!' and starts beating him on his chest.
He is caught off guard by her reaction 'are you mad? maar kyun rahi ho? ek to tumhari jaan bachai aur upar se tum yeh thank you de rahi ho'
'haan aur mein zyada marungi tumhe agar phir se eesa tumne kaha' 
'Sorry sorry, galti ho gayi, ab marna band karogi please? Dard ho raha hai' holding his ears.

'Swara bohut raat ho gayi ab, tum so jayo aur mein bhi so jata hoon' going outside.
'Sanskar tum bahar sone wale ho?'
He hesitates a bit 'haan, tum yahan so jayo, mein bahar comfortable hoon'
He goes out and lies down on the grass where he already placed his blanket and pillow.
She goes to lie on the bed.
After a couple of hours a few rain drops fall on her face waking her up. She notices that it's raining outside. The first thought that comes in her mind is Sanskar 'Sanskar bahar so raha hai' and runs out to see him.
He is still awake and is trying to cover himself with the blanket preventing to get wet.

She goes inside, takes an umbrella and goes to sit near him to cover him.
'Sanskar?'
He suddenly gets up 'Tum yahan?'
'Baarish ho rahi hai, andar chalo, hum manage karlenge'
'Nahi, tum chalo mein yahan theek hoon' says thinking that she might feel uncomfortable.
'Okay, theek hai, to mein bhi yahin rahungi baarish mein. Agar tum reh sakte ho to mein kyun nahi?' she replies.
'Yeh kya bachpana hai swara?'
'yeh kya bachpana hai sanskar?' imitating him.
'agar yahin rahi to sardi lag jayegi'
'Tumhe nahi lagegi? Iron man ho tum?' replies in a sarcastic way.
'Mujhe aadat hai'
'To theek hai, mujhe bhi yeh aadat padh jayegi'
'Acha meri maa, theek hai. Tumse to koi nahi jeet sakta' says folding his hand in front of her.'Chalo'
They go inside.Outside the rain continues to fall, inside they can hear the sweet sound of the rain flowing on the grass and on the trees leaining on a soft bed of the leaves fallen on the ground and expanding the scent of the leaves and the flowers around.


So this is it. I hope you will like it πŸ˜Š



Edited by Preet_12 - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow new one...
It was so sweet one...
Loved the rain wala amd chocolate scene...so cute...
They both are so cute...
Plz do write more on them...
Edited by anu91 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Preeto aww that was so cute! Specially sanskar, he goes to sleep outside so that swara won't feel uncomfortable. Haayee <3 Loved it :*
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aww Preet it was really cute and sweet..
love chocolate chasing part most 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
So cute... thanks for writing this
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome
Loved it...πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow Preet its just awesome..πŸ‘πŸ‘
Loved Chocolate chasing part...Also how Sanskaar went and slept outside..😳
Continue soon...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
but r they really going to share the tent..
hope so!!!
i want to see some eye locks between swara and sanskar..
and want lakysha to see it..
and regrets his decision of marrying ragani...
but anyays cute swasanπŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very sweet os
Please do write more
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Posted: 8 years ago
You are such a great writer yaar...! This was too good. Really...! Please do write more..!πŸ‘πŸ˜ƒ