SWARON FF:IT ALL STARTED WITH A SMILE #2 *part 29 pg 7* - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome!! Loved sharon in this chapter.
Thanks for the pupdate soon!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
dis is so cute... & a bit hoxy... 😉  loved d update...  update soon... ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Kaha gayab huye the dono for so long time :O

what an a upd FABULOUS and BEAUTIFUL

Taani and Sharon are so pissed with BACHELOR'S party ki directly spy karne gaye

i loved ReYam convo it was damn good (you both had written amazing dialogue):-)

the way taani came front of rey :-D

sharon in guys washroom oh god she is so jealous and swayam Mr.smart know very well how to play his cards even diya kya cousin hai bhai ke liye vo bhi washroom me gayi

poor Sharon dar gayi swayam ke question sunke
and bol dala ill do anything and swayam SEDUCE HIM she did agreed too

i think it was best seduction ever had with sharon ka tadka in desi wear (i like you both keep her desi not so hot and sexy dress) song selection was good

last palm scene was to adorable and her dialogue shaadi ke baad palm won't be there am sure this wedding is go to be a grand thing in there life

shooting star both of there wish too fulfill eachother wish so much love

Ps. please ani nabanita update HAK can't wait for it after last Update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hai Ani and Nabanita.
I had read many of your recent works and this is my most favorite. I just hope that no sort of misunderstandings occur between the cutie duo. The chapter was very nice. 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
Super amazing
Loved it
Thnx for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Totally loved this chapter!..
Swayam played his cards smartly over Sharon!😉
I'm loving all your write ups!..Continue with this amazing work of yours!..Waiting for the next update!

Love,
Shreya
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved the update ...it was super amazing 
Sharon turned into siren listening abt d bachelor's party -
"how dare he???? Bloody hell how dare swayam go for a bachelor party??? Aisa pitai karungi ki zindegi bhar bachelor name se darega..." Sharon said gritting her teeth...😆

loved siren sharon's  reaction  bt swayam too is smart he knew sharon wud be comng n he played his cards wel n made sharon seduce him 
loving dere moments ...waiting for d nxt 😊
update soon 
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's been sooo long...
Plz update
😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
Girls please update
it's been ages you update
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's been sooo long...
Plz update 🥱