I am really honored with you acknowlegment for the my ss and glad too see ur ss here, there too I want to write a reply for your comment but thought too give it with next part. I have read just few lines from starting and will comment after reading the whole part as starting itself seemed interesting. Best of luck for your first work here.
Originally posted by: sam_DDzfan
Very interesting start. The title itself was very catchy.
Wondering what made Gayatri refuse dinner to Chacha.
Loved the way Ranaji feels n care for Gayatri. Also loved the character of Gayatri
Waiting for next update
Originally posted by: ReelyROSExx
Cngrtz for the new ssAmazing start! Already In love with Gayatri s chara 😊Loved Ranaji s feelings towards her, it's clearly shown that he adores herSo kuwarji is ill treating the citizens , wonder what happened to the maidDo continue soon :)
Very nice start. Title caught my attention.
So here rana loves gayatri ..and she is more of a shy girl ..I wonder maid ko kia hua ??N what's gayatri up to now ???Hope she don't end up messing their relationship ..
Originally posted by: .Verity.
Chacha is illtreating the citizens in the kingdom and Gayatri is giving him back his own medicine but won't tell Ranaji why, as a result he is getting angry with her and is likely now to find some punishment to give her because of her shyness of not talking and telling him what is the matter. Waiting to know what this punishment is going to be update soon.
Originally posted by: Drashtilove
Congo 4 the story lovely start gayatri n indravardan r married n very much in love with each other gayatri is so shy she is very scared of chachaji she doesnt get good feeling about him really wonder what actually happened with that maid gayatri said she wont serve chachaji what will happen now nice start plz cont soon
Originally posted by: amreenshameem
Nice plot
Rana Ji gayatri love each other
Maybe because she don't like Chacha sa that's why she asked it
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