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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#91

nice revenge story

SSK and his son's YSK and VSK

killed whole handa family geet and hr bro

son's manage to run away from their clutch

SSK ordered his younger son to bring them back

and he did as his father said

he didn't have any marcy on any one they

are powerful man of his district he becomes

cruel person after witnessing handa's ruined

his bau badly and killed her his father ranjit khurrana

took promise from him to ruins handa's

wen they brought geet and ayaush and gave geet

to yash daadi maa stopped his son and told give

this girl as gift of maan's bday make her his slave

samrat never denies his maa but yash was disappointed

he lust over geet and wants her

daadi and maan was team up to save geet and ayush

so maan was playing as daadi said but wen he succeed

to set her free she cane back to maan as willing slave

daadi was angry fr keeping geet with him and she

said now he will responsible of everything as daadi

afraid of yash try to force geet and maan came on

time and both bro fighting fr geet SSK want to kill

the reason but Vicky told she's pregnant

now they will not kill geet its last pt

waiting fr next season

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loveguruDD

@loveguruDD

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Really an amazing story

Read the whole of it

Part 1

Concept is interesting

No child is supposed ro witness such a crime which samarth witnessed

But that doesnt explain his cruelty

Geet n ayush are innocent

They are doing to geet what had happened to his bua

Poor geet

At the age of 19 she had to witness such cruelty

Part 2

Daadima wants to gift geet to maan

Maan wants to keep her in his room

To use her for his satisfaction

Part 3

Geet tried to kill maan but couldnt suceed

Maan stopped her

Poor geet

Was she not suffering that they beat her up with a hunter

Part 4 and 5

Thankgod maan put ointment on her wounds n comforted her

Samarth wants to punish geet more

Maan never touched geet

He is not like his dad n bros

He is a good person

But still hates handas

Now geet knows why this hatered

Maan asks geet to not be conscious

As he saw her naked

Part 6 and 7

Maanhelped geet change

Geet feels that she is not good enough for maan

She knows that maan wont hurt her

Thankgod aayush is safe n sound

He is being cared for

That bas***d yash

He always had his dirty eyes for geet

He made aayush bait for getting geet

Poor aayush n geet

Thankgod maan arrived at the right time with daadima

Part 8,9 and 10

Geet got her conscious back

Maan helped her

Geet wants to go outside as she is feeling suffocated with everything

Maan is feeling burdened he wants to return back to germany

So daadima reveiled that she was trying to protect geet from everyone

Daadima told her son that ayush died due to yash

And he got a good thrashing

What happened in thosse 45 days which changed everything

Did maan n geet make love

So the day finally came when maan freed geet from slavery

Geet didnt leave and she wants to stay with maan

Why did she do that

Daadima is angry with both of them

She wont help maan anymore

Part 11

That bas***d again tried to harm geet

And maan wants to kill yash for touching geet

Yash reveals that smarth didnt do any harm to geet physically

Samarth wants to kill geet

As sce caused his sons to fight among themselves

But vicky stopped him n revealed that geet is pregnant

How did this happen

What an amazing twist

Teally interesting

Eager to read more of the story

Pls send me the password for further parts

Really interesting

Eager to read season 2

Continue soon

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saf24

@saf24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

This was such a well written, intriguing story of revenge that had me hooked from the beginning. There was a certain mystery surrounding Maan at the beginning as Geet did not know what to expect from him and then when she did meet him, he never treated her badly until the day his father demands some proof but despite that he still turns around and tries soothing her wounds and nursing her back to help.

I have to say Geet is one strong woman for all that she endured just to ensure that her nephew remains safe. I liked that she still had some fightl left in her and did not just sit back and cry. I really felt it for her though when she started doubting herself thinking that she was not attractive enough for Maan.

I really loved it when Geet realised that she wanted to stay with Maan and i'm glad that he waited even if it was just to ensure they left safely. Words weren't needed for their feelings to comf forth with just that appearance.

Also loved that Vicky too stood up against his father when he attempted to kill Geet. It is always good to see the younger ones standing up for what is right rather than blindly following their elders.

It was a fantastic read and you are a very versatile writer, Totally enjoyed it.

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Bhuvanaguru1986

@Bhuvanaguru1986

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Interesting title please send password.

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Susmitha

@susm

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Kuranas n hand as r highly influenced people in their place. Every one obeys kuranas what ever they do right r wrong. Samrat has 3 sons. Yash Maan n Vicky. Maan sent to his but in his childhood n never came back. Samart saw his dual rapped by hand as at age of 6. He promised his father to take revenge. Yash n Vicky r also become like Samrat. Hands r killed by Samrat ruthlessly n Geet n her bro son Ayush escaped but soon caught. Dadi of Maan came n saved Geet saying she belong to Maan n she will be his slave. Maan came n Geet want to kill Maan but Maan caught her. Yash has lust on Geet n proofed Samrat to say Maan to punish Geet in front of them. With no option Maan beats Geet n later took care of her. Yash brought Ayush from where dadi hide him n throw him in pool to get Geet. Burgers to jump to save Ayush n Maan saved both Geet n Ayush with help of dadi. Dadi said Ayush is dead because of Yash. Samrat angry on Maan. Geet herd Maan n dadi talk. Geet thought Maan is in love with kiya. Geet is in love with Maan. Dadi arrange Geet n Ayush passports to send them to London but last moment Geet send Ayush n she came to Maan. Dadi is angry on Maan n refused to support Maan. Samrat got to know Maan never torched Geet n ready to kill Geet n Vicky saved Geet n said that she is carrying their offspring ie Maan baby. How Geet n Maan fall in love n now what happen to know n waiting for season 2 please update soon. It's awesome n explain each n every pain to heart constant.

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Title is pulling me to read

Do u have season 1 for this ss? From the title I get maan is gonna make geet as his slave. It seems interesting to me. Pls add me if you found me as your true and geniune reader.😉

Hi Riccha

I dont know why I am not getting pw and pm from u anymore. I was away from net for few wweeks bcoz I wwent to my native and moved to another city recently. Just two days ago got my internet connection fixed.

Edited by ambbiha - 10 years ago

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Part 1-nice start maans father is taking revenge from hand because they raped his bua n for that she died full family died because of old deeds except geet n her nephew poor them they didnt do anything yet they have to suffer dadima wants geet to be slave of maan n she cant do anything because ayush life is in danger

Edited by Drashtilove - 10 years ago

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Leenu

@Blossom_29

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Congratulations richa dear
Concept is spicy
willing to read the story
waiting for the password

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Part 2-maan coming back home after 20 years he knew about handa n the revenge he agreed to make geet as his slave but put condition now she will be just his

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#100

Part 3 A-nice part maan came from his birthday party drunken state n there geet thought of killing him she saw her family died infront of her so thought to take revenge but maan is smart he was just pretending urgh yash is so disgusting n there samarth also took side of yash poor geet something very bad is waiting for her