Originally posted by: 19dishayadav
Hey! Thanks for the PM :)
This chapter was, again, worth the wait :)
Originally posted by: 19dishayadav
Hey! Thanks for the PM :)
This chapter was, again, worth the wait :)
Originally posted by: Adeebaayub
Aye aye
This was too good to read .
The way you write
Wow ! 👏
I loved it !
Manik and his kitten
Hahaha
"Since the situation landed me with another opportunity to accompany the package of cuteness and drop her back home, I was rather looking forward for it. "
Awww
These lines .
Manik's POV was very well written .
Nandini's simple philosophy and great understanding of life . :)
Looking forward for further parts.
Thank you for the message.
-God bless
Even with that said and done, YOU do praise me a LOT more than what I deserve, in fact multiple times than what I might deserve. Though, I do doubt whether I do deserve or not, but that's a different thing.Yes I know I do praise you A LOT, but not more than that is worth. Because trust me, I can go on aand on and on praising this story and you!! When it comes to writing it down, I still control myself :p
Well firstly, after writing and sending this comment, I am definitely rushing to the other stories of yours! I really can't wait for them to begin!!Coming to this update! What an amazing piece!! Manik's point of view is always a treat to read ! I can't believe Eric seriously planned all of that, is he really trying to hook them up or what?Manik doesn't want to mess up his friendships for a casual going, oh such a 'good' boy he is :pI totally loved that little moment with the old man, haha, looks the entire universe wants them to try at each other!!Oh man, how can Manik let go of an opprtunity where Nandini is himself 'inviting' him ;)And the next day, well just like manik and Eric, I have true same question for you, what did just happen there?Cz I know for them, only Nandini has the answer and for us, only you have the answer, so I thought it's better to ask you!Hopefully, the next update would answer that!!Thanks for another extra-ordinary update!!Thanks for the pm!Loads of love to youu!Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year to you too ! :*
I am glad you like the way I put up the work.Originally posted by: filter.coffee
have I told how much I love the way you write.the way you narrate.I guess I have but couldn't help say it again
Originally posted by: khevnashukla
I am really sorry for late reply...actually was busy with some wedding stuff...
anyways atlast you updated...i really missed your story..u knw i was thinking tht as kyy is ending u r also quitting this story...talking abt this chapter...!!!its was gud but a little boringcoz nandu has told her bro the she kind of like manik but manik has no feeling for her as such still like a normal hey-hello friends...may be i m thinking in fast forward but still i feel manik is not jealous by other boys around nandu like when leo thing happen he was angry not jealous or protective...if u cn take a small leap like for a month or so n make nandu school diva as her bro n manik are clg hunks n then jealous it would be so much fun...and last but nt the least 'eric' he is a ideal bro he is like ''DUDE TRY TO TOUCH MY SIS AND I WILL BREAK UR BONES'' i loved it coz i cn totally relate to tht coz even my brothers are same😆😆will be waiting for the next chapter plz dnt make us wait much plzzz
Originally posted by: snow_manan
oh my god omg omg omg😲
thank you thank you thank you for the pmbecause you cannot imagine for so long i have been searching for this😲😲and i dont know out of nowhere i get ur pm in my inbox😲😲thank you sooo sooo much for the pm deari might have searched so many times for this story even i have lost the count 😭😭...i some how remembered the content but forgot the title😭😭you blew me up with strolling with stranger...i loved that very muchi think i was searching in kyy forum only...but i never found iti would have never found it agar tum pm nahi karti to😆😆😆so now i m very very happy to read the continuation of the OSread all the parts in a goyou have done a great job👏very different story...like the characterization...erik,manik nandinii like the trio very much...love the storyyou have penned down beautifully👏so now please do send me pmi will surely read and comment😊😊hussshhh...such a relief to read the story😆😆😊
🤪 I know why you are commenting with these smileys.
Originally posted by: DhruShti
Hey dear. .
Read ur all parts in one go. .
I must say now i dnt have PATIENCE word in my dictionary to knw whats next. .
And Eric i admire him he is such cute bro protective to his little one. A single hand on her and the world has to face his wrath. .but at times he is too much. .
And thanks for manik's pov. .we got to knw about his thought. .
So after that drive and walk with her he came to knw how matured she is
But when she just stick her tongue out manik malhotra's irritation and fury went out of the window
And that leo too much scared on the mere mention of there past encounter. .
I m confused why nandu is defending leo. .
Wow manik also feeling protective towards her..
Update soon want to read next. .
Hey i have read ur other Manan drabble tough summers and u knw what i actually stay near Ranoli, Vadodara. .
It was also very interesting and a total new idea. .
And i also came to knw that u are going to write another drabble on Manan named Voyage, well m looking forward to it. .
The concept of realization of love, fear to lose, tinge of jealousy would be an amazing roller coaster ride. .
Continue soon. .
Originally posted by: neha0002
Awesome update
I really like Eric and nandini relationThey are perfect brother and sister
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