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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
I loved it
Hope manik win it
Nandini talk is bit complicated
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey next part update soon plz ... waiting fr it ... :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: srija-n

Hey next part update soon plz ... waiting fr it ... :-)


Will be updating till 1 tonight...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey plz update soon na.. It was such a nyc story dat i cant wait for d next part..
So req..
Plz update as soon as possble for u..
Nd..
Its an awesome storyline .. Saw ystrdy only.. N red ol d prts in one go..
Great work..
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey Mish...
it's Superb yaar so sorry for late cmnt...
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how can someone write this much fantabulous
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Aryamaan N Nandu talk about mind n heart was fantastic lil confused but its damn true...
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yup Aryamaan decided ryt to take her with him...
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But Manik what he is up to got to know soon...
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hmm Neonikaaa tumhaare liye ky kahu Tadap tadap k tumhare dil se Aah hi nikal skti ab toh... 😆
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Manik u hv to doo something soon...
tc stay blessed
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Chapter 8- SUNO NA

"Can't you buy enough food and grocery to make this store look like a kitchen" said irritated nandini making omelette in Aryamann's lavish kitchen which had only egges and coffee on the name of food.

Aryamann sat at the dinning table with newspaper wide spread across him paying no heed to her bickering when suddenly an article made made him scream his lungs out hearing which nandini came to him running. Asking him the reason, a dumbstruck Aryamann handed newspaper to nandini.

As nandini's eyes ran over the article a knowing smirk curved up on her lips with shocked Aryamann to his wits.


"What the hell you are smiling at"


"Nothing" said nandini with a casual smile as she went back to the kitchen to continue with her work.


"What!!!! That guy manik malhotra!!! transferred all his shares of malhotra group of industries under your name and you are standing her actually smiling at that news can anyone tell me what the heck is happening around me" said fuming Aryamann.


"Hey! Hold on... How can he transfer shares with out your consent as in your signature" asked a confused Aryamann leaning against the kitchen shelf facing nandini for an answer.


"I think you underestimated the name manik malhotra its not tough for him to forge my signature" said nandini placing omellete in the plate and handing it over to Aryamann with a proud smirk.


"You get started I will join you in few minutes after making myself a tea I badly need it" said nandini moving back to the stove placing a pan to prepare tea when similar memories came crashing down across her eyes.


Nandini walked to the pool area holding 2 cups of tea for them. She noticed manik read a file and sighing it precisely. She keenly observed movement of his fingers over the paper, how perfectly the tip of pen craved his name on a piece of paper in utmost perfection and scratched till the last line.


She cleared her throat making him aware of her presence. He smiled and took a cup from her hands. The moment he was about to sip, she turned away closing her eyes and muttering something to herself.


He stopped taking his sip and advanced closer to her. He stood next to her watching what she is doing. She is blabbering something to herself. He leaned in closer trying to hear what she is muttering.


"Nandini?"

Suno na sangemarmar ki yeh minaare

Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare

Aaj se dil pe mere raaj tumhaara

Taj tumhara

"I fell in love with your signature the very firstday joined malhotra group of industries after our marriage"She said excitedly like a small kid.


Marriage raised his brows in surprise and gave a nervous smile. He is not used to compliments and he is just taking baby steps to digest them from his new partner.


"I used to admire your singature so much that my gaze never went past that signatureline. What a sign man!"nandini praised him flying her fingers in the air making him little nervous and smile.

Suno na sangemarmar ki yeh minaare

Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare

She continued, You got amazing strokes.


Manik blushed, little embarrassed at nandini's compliments. Manik heard people telling how handsome he is but no one except her told how good looking his signature is.


"You know I used to admire your signature.Iused to practice your sign." She giggled shyly covering her mouth.


"You were forging my signature? "manik teased her.


"No never. I was just very fond of it." nandini spoke sincerely.

Aaj se dil pe mere raaj tumhaara

Taj tumhara

Suno na sangmarmar ki yeh minaare


Manik turned on his phone display and took out the stylus from behind the phone. "Sign it!" He handed over his phone to her.


What?


Sign it. I wanna see how you sign my signature.


Manik malhotraaskingforhis own autograph. She teased him grabbing the stylus and phone from his hands. She signed and showed the signature excitedly.


His jaw dropped seeing the way she stroked the letters. How did you do that? Its almost perfect.


She shrugged and smiled shyly. I dont get that tail twist in theAlphabetM. She pointed it on the display.


Bin tere maddham maddham

bhi chal rahi thi dhadkan


Hold it. He asked her to hold the stylus and he then enveloped her hand and her fingers resting on stylus. He leaned closer to her, almost rubbing his frontal hair onto her cheek and guided her fingers to show how he strokes the alphabet M in Malhotra. His gelled hair tickled her cheeks and ears and she flinched nervously.

Jab se mile tum humein

Aanchal se tere bandhe

Dil ud raha hai


Suno na aasmaano ke yeh sitaare

Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare


As he guided her fingers, after a point, he noticed her fingers more relaxed and surrendering to his hold. She no longer gripped the stylus tightly and her fingers started turning cold. He silently observed the dramatic changes happening to her, he slowly tilted his head and raised his eyes to look at her pair eyes which are already nervously looking at him. Unable to stay focused and look at his piercing eyes, she away and withdrew her hand from his hold nervously.


Yeh dekho sapne mer

Neendon se hoke tere

Raaton se kehte hain lo

Hum toh savere hai wo


Instead of leaving her or replying to her, he pressed his body more into her gently trailing his fingers down the entire length of her. The flimsy excuse of the sari she wore did nothing to help; neither did it conceal nor reveal yet it aroused him in ways and made him do things. She felt herself going weak and bit her lips to hold back the moan that threatened to escape.

Sach gaye jo

Suno na do jahaano ke yeh nazaare

Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare


He slowly turned her towards him, brushing her hair aside cupping her reddened cheeks kissing her closed eyes and brushed his lips against hers. She fluttered her eyelashes, his gaze intoxicating a mixture of both love and lust that she could no longer resist. She hugged him closely giving herself completely wrapping her arms around his waist kissing his heart.


In one swift move, he lifted her in his arms and raced towards the bedroom with a teasing smile as she buried her face in his shoulder.


Since you are very interested, I can share a little secret that I wrapped under the covers for last few years. He said placing wet kisses across her face.


Aaj se dil pe mere raaj tumhara

Taj tumhara..

Suno na sangemarmar ki yeh minaar


"I can do your signature perfectly" said manik between his kisses making nandini look at him in shock.


"You remember I made you sign a contract when I made you my spot" said manik to which nandini nodded. " I couldn't admit it but they were pretty good and were not something that anyone can forge easily. So""


"So you forge my signature" said cutting off manik and pushing him away.


"Gosh! That's not fair... You can admire my signature but I can't" said manik in utter annoyance seeing nandini walking away from him.


Suno na sangemarmar ki yeh minaare

Kuch bhi nahi hai aage tumhaare

Aaj se dil pe mere raaj tumhaara

Taj tumhara


Turning in her heels, she grabbed manik's collar before fusing her lips with his shocking manik with sudden action. Nibbling and licking his lips she broke off "every bit of you belong to me... Only me!" And again slammed her lips with his making manik smirk seeing his agitated tigress avatar and jammed his tongue in her mouth enduring her sweetness.


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"Nandini!!!" A scream and a sudden pull made nandini come out of traces. She saw Aryamann turning off the gas stove and turning towards her with concerned eyes.

"Are you alright! Are you mad.. What the hell where you thinking dammit...what if something had happened" said Aryamann hugging a nandini to with she hummed. Nandini looked around the kitchen as damage was already done.

Feeling her shaking in her arms Aryamann decided to calm to mood around.

"Then landlord would have beaten the hell out of me. And yes you are gonna replece the stove. Com'on, you are the new owner of malhotra group of industries its just a drop from the ocean for you" said Aryamann making nandini chuckle and lightly shower her fist on his chest.


"If you are done with your damage control session can we move out now. We are running short of time. "Said Aryamann cheekily.


"Aryamann you go ahead..I don't wanna tag along" said nandini as she was thinking about their last night conversation over drinks.


"Nandini, I will perform with you or there will be no concert. You have equal share in it as much as I have I don't want to take all the credit and fry in hot oil in hell so shut that crap and come!" Snapped Aryamann dragging nandini towards the car.

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"Aryamann, wait here I need to use the rest room" said nandini handing him her cellphone and vanishing in the ladies restroom.just when her cell rang making him shock. Beads of sweat appeared on his forehead as he looked at the similar digits flashing at the nandini's cellphone screen. Before he could answer the call it got disconnected . he hurriedly put all her calls on diverter directly to his cellphone.


(i have to get rip off this case before its turns its face back to them. I can't mention it to nandini as she is changing a bit since manik came back she is melting for him a bit... I can't let this happen now. I will take care of this)whipping off the sweat beads he thought as he saw nandini walking towards him smilingly.


Walking through the corridor lavishly built London branch of AD studios nandini and aryamann stood outside the cabin. Placing a soft knock they entered the cabin. And shock was written on nandini 's face she saw him standing there dressed in a tailored black suit with white shirt and stripped tie, designer shoes on his feet and his hair slicked back just perfect. He was truly an image to behold. After all, he was the one, the only...


Manik malhotra


Nandini averted her eyes from Arnav and looked at her best friend Aryamann, however, She gave a pointed look to Aryamann before turning around to leave. She couldn't face the man after what she did to him.



Only, manik couldn't let her go. "Nandini wait!" he called, standing up.

silent shiver passed through nandini as she heard manik's voice. Nandini closed her eyes, willing herself to not become the victim of his charms again. She had to be strong, atleast for Aryamann.

"We have to talk," manik said urgently.


Nandini whipped around. "No," she objected. "We have nothing to talk about. Our deal was over a long time ago."


"Please," he begged. "Just... just listen to me. Just this once."


Nandini's heart almost ached to see the torment on his face. Deciding it wouldn't hurt to listen. She stood there with arms crossed around her chest facing manik.


That's it guys!!!

Drop your views lambaa lamba...

I know many oof you found last conversation between nandini and Aryamann confusion. Actually it was made to confuse u...yippee I succeeded...

You will understand it went the mystry revels till then sty stick to the story...

Give long long comments and I want each one of you to comment...

Stay happy stay blessed

Mishshergill


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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
unres...yipppiiieee i succeeded in comin first!!!!! 🥳
awesome update...the beginning was fun!! Nandu's bickering n aryamann paying no heed...lol...
Aryamann's shocking lines were awesome!! I loved how u wrote that line..!! Nandu smirking...forging each others signatures...shocked aryamann..hahah..i cant stop laughin! 🤣
flashback...this ws again lovelyy cute adorable n wild! Nandu's excitement seeing manik's sign..aww so cute...i lyk tail twisting M...manik's proximity weakening nandu...that ws superb...! Manik understood that n started being more naughty...manik complaining nandu that he cant adore n forge her sign ws sooo cuteee...wild cat nandu!! I love her!! Wild form of nandu is a treat to watch/read!!...flashback end
aryamann has turned into a great frnd...i adore their frndship re !
AD studios...it had to be manik na! But seeing him this vulnerable is very painful!! Just hope MaNan come thoda sa close atleast...
N u left us again wid manik to react!! That's not fair!!
Update soon..thnx fr d pm...all the best fr ur exms mish:D
Edited by Toshna_1522 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update

flashback was soo cute
continue soon
waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...so thats how manik was able to transfer his all shares on her...by doing nandini's signature...manik n nandini they both r unbelievable...but who called nandini...?? n what case was it...?? n what had happened in the kitchen..?? what damage...?? what had nandini done to manik...?? n what is manik doing here..?? n what did he ask ask cabir for in the last chapter...?? n AD studios belongs to whom..?? its been so long but still y they r separate is still a suspense...waiting for the suspense to end...continue soon...waiting to know what will manik stay...n will he be able to stop nandini from walking away again or not...
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update...
pls update the next part soon .
eagerly waiting.

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