~Ardhika OS Series "Stay away-She is mine part 2 on page 9 ~ - Page 2

Waah bowya 👏👏 loved it yaa..
Wife .. my wife.. Biwi aahaa those magical words through his mouth sounds passionate 😳☺️ don't tell me motives are guttery 🤣 but yes i wanna room main mangal ☺️[=]]) waiting for the update.❤️

ahh...cliffhangers!!! not fairrr loved it..updt asap

Amazing story dear!! I loved it!! Great job 👏 👏 Looking forward to next chapter. Hope it has ArDhika romance 😉 Update soon!!

Ohooo bowieee .. So u are a writer.. Not bad.. Nw u have to update soon my dear 😉 😊

Originally posted by: RainbowPearls

Loved it yaar! Hope we'll get hot romance in the next update! Please do continue soon 😉

Thank u 😊, Will update soon.. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: blackcirus

well done.hope show m b kuch aisa ho.

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: Asheley

How can you stop it there after nearly taking my breath 😡

Loved it ❤️

Amazing update yaar 

So romantic update 😳

Update next part soon

Don't kill us like this with that kind of endings 

Thanks alot dear 🤗

Originally posted by: esprit_00

I don't usually read FFs because it's just not my thing but since it's your fic, I gave it a try... Good attempt. Few grammar mistakes (you mentioned no proof reading) but still an easy read.

I see many on here who write FFs, I would suggest if you really love writing, take up a course or 2 in creative writing - it helps! Otherwise it's a good hobby nonetheless.

One day if I get time I'll continue writing my short story... Sigh.

Glad to see ur comment.😃🤗. Thanks alot for taking ur time to read my story.. 😊

Originally posted by: shreepatil.

wow loved it dear, superb.

Thank u 😊

Originally posted by: -Enigmatic-

Waah bowya 👏👏 loved it yaa..
Wife .. my wife.. Biwi aahaa those magical words through his mouth sounds passionate 😳☺️ don't tell me motives are guttery 🤣 but yes i wanna room main mangal ☺️[=]]) waiting for the update.❤️

Thanks alot Soni 🤗..