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read the 3 chapters...niw I understood why all want to see the end ...to this ff...
am also eager to read chap 4 by renu...
am also eager to read chap 4 by renu...
Originally posted by: hanishank
good update renu...I liked it..
my few questions are...
1.is arjun deceived only radhika or is he in the process of doing harm to Sam...as convo in chap 3
2.how radhika and arjun met before and which circumstance s lead radhika to believe arjun as radhika is brave and intelligent girl...
hope u will give answers to my doubts in ur next updates...
really thankful to u for ur interest and willingness showed in completing this ff...
thanks renu
thanks angel
Originally posted by: Ramyagirish
Hi renu am glad u started writing this. I feel u have beautifully analyzed d plot and captured d emotions of one and all beautifully. Loved arjuns jealousy and possessiveness, loved Neil s calm and trust for radhika.. loved radhikas belief in her love. Loved Sam's inquisitiveness. I liked Neil adopting anesh.. in short I really loved it. Thou am not a writer I still think it's a great feat to start from where d previous writer left. You have tried to do justice to someone else's creation. And u have paid a tribute to it. You have captured d powerful emotions just right. I felt bad when this story ws left out. But am glad u started down on this lane. You r giving it ur own justifiable lovely end. Along with missing pieces I really think it's remarkable. As u have to b in two different mindset to do justice to both d stories. Personally as a reader I like to thank u and appreciate u to give us readers such entirely two different yet beautiful stories . Looking forward to reading more from u. I don't want to say thanks and as v r frds. But I don't know how to show u my appreciation... Plz never stop writing. Take care.
Hiii friends,..Thank you for your encouragement and I hope,I will do some justice to it,..Ignore My Grammatical errors and I din own the characters or this Story,...
Chapter 5:Against all the Odds
In Conference Hall,Birdsong Head Office,...
Today,The office is less like a workplace All because of Radhika's chirpy face,...Neil and Sam were happy to see their Chasni Back in form,..The whole team functions like a Well-oiled machine,...Everyone there felt a new spirit in their works,...
Sam:Neil,We did almost everything we can in this Ad and now just needed to be present before Arjun,..I knew , He will give this order to us,..But,I hope he will be satisfied,...Cox I knew him quite long yaar,..It's really hard to satisfy him,..
Radz:Don't think about his Satisfaction Sam,..We are satisfied with our effort na,..that's enough for us. He likes or not,...That's his problem,..If he didn't,..Then,It's too good that we have greatest source of learning further,..
Neil:Wow!Chasni,...What line yaar,...Satisfaction,..Effort,...Superb,...
Right then,Piyali entered inside holding Ansh with Arjun,...
Piyali:That's Why She got consecutively two years Best copywriter award Neil,...And If she got this year too,..Then,It will be a hat trick ,...Am I right Radhika?,..good to see you back in normal,...Happy for you guys,...
All smiled hearing this,..Ansh Ran towards his mom,..
Ansh:Mumma,...Today,I ate full without disturbing nani,...
Radz hugged him and began,
Radz:I knew,..My Ansh is a good boy and
Ansh:Spider man,...Mumma,I'm very strong like Dad,...
Neil tooks him lovingly and began,
Neil:My Spider man looks so handsome today,...And Where's my kiss?,...
Ansh:Dad,...I gave all kisses to mumma in morning,...
Sam patted his head and began,
Sam:So,No kisses for your Neil Dad now,..
Ansh:Ok,then,..You give my kisses to Dad,...What Dad?,...
Sam and all burst out in laugher,...But,Arjun was irritated seeing these,...
Radz:Ansh ,..Get down,..Dont disturb Dad,...come here,..Sit silently,...
Piyali :Ok,...Let's start the presentation,...Arjun,Please take your seat man and Arjun,This is the overall Ad concept for your New Resort,..I hope you will like it cox The entire work in this Ad was done by our Radhika,..So,No doubt,..You will like,...Radhika,... Shall we,...
Arjun controlled himself to behave normal by offering a fake smile to Piyali and throwing some Angry stares on Radz at the same time,..Whereas,Radz smiled at him vengefully and began,
Radz:This is A place, where We Enjoy our Special person's presence,World's Delicious food with all comforts in a high qualified interior built on our promises,...Your wish are really matter to us,We always make time for you,Here No excuses,No lies and No broken promises,...
Arjun fumed in anger hearing Radz words,..His temper eats his brain and he wanna burn her at that moment with his eyes,..And Neil's words further Added fuel into it,...
Neil:Wow chasni,...Superb yaar,...Arjun,..What man,..You forgot yourself in this lovely presentation,..Shall we finalise,...
Arjun gets up in anger puzzled everyone,..But,He pretends to be normal and began,...
Arjun:Sorry Piyali,..I din satisfied with this concept but,I don't want to waste my time,..So,I'm finalizing this,...Don't mistake me,..
Sam:Arjun,..It's ok yaar,...We knew about you well,...But,M glad atleast you are finalizing this concept cox It really worth it yaar,..See,You gonna thank chasni in future for giving this,...What mom?,..
Piyali:Ya,I agree with sam,...Definitely,You will Arjun,...And Guys,Prepare contract papers and further proceedings within few hours,..Arjun said that he has some important works,..So,Don't waste time,...Rithvik,...I want all the papers soon,...Get to work,...
Saying so,Piyali excused herself with RIthvik,...Arjun too went out of the Hall in anger,...
Ansh:Mumma,...I want to go to bathroom,...
Radz:Ok,...Come,...Neil,Sam,..You guys carry on,...I'll come,...
Sam:It's ok Chasni,..We will look after the remaining works,...You take care of Ansh,..Common Neil,...Help me yaar,...
Radz:Thanx sam,...
Ansh:Dad,..Bye,...
Neil:Bye Ansh,...
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In Radz Cabin,...
Radz made Ansh wear his Dress,..Meanwhile,she was lost in some thoughts,...
Radz innervoice:I still cant decide Meeting you again in my life was the saddest thing or Greatest after what you have done to me Arjun,...Because,My heart is already split into two pieces Made up of love and hatred,...And In both sides,I hold your name Arjun Mehra,... An UnKnown tears of some known pain welled up her beautiful eyes,...
Ansh holds Radz chin and began,...
Ansh:Mumma,...Mumma,..why are you crying?
Radz:nothing Ansh,...Some dust went into eyes,..
Saying so,Radz wiped her tears,...
Ansh:Mumma,...Why that Uncle scolded you?
Radz:Which Uncle Ansh?
Ansh:woh,...That new uncle,...
Right then,Arjun entered Radz cabin and Began,..
Arjun:Me Ansh,...
Ansh: Haan Mumma,..This uncle,...
Radz turned back was shocked to see Arjun in her cabin,...
Arjun's smirk increased Radz temper further,...Ansh saw both of them and began,...
Ansh:Uncle,..I'm so strong,...If you scold my mumma again,I'll bite you,...
Radz chided ansh,...
Radz:Ansh,...Your mumma taught you this only,...hmmm,...How to behave with Big people,..Ask Sorry,...
Ansh make his face crabby by keeping his hands on his waist,..
Radz:Ansh,...Ask Sorry,...
Arjun:Leave Radhika,...Your child na,..So,He will be like you?,...
Ansh:sorry,..and I din like you...
Saying so,Ansh ran away from there leaving Arjun and Radhika alone,...
Radz:Ansh,..Ansh,...
Arjun let out an evil smile seeing this and closed her cabin's door,...Radz was puzzled and began,
Radzz:What are you doing?,..Why are you closing the door?
Arjun:What Radhika,..You dunno,..Why I close the door?,...sounds funny,...
Saying so, Arjun started walking towards Radhika,...
Radz:Arjun,..Stop,...Open the Door,...Or else,..I'll call Neil,...
Saying So,Radz tried to call neil from Office phone,...Arjun in a jiffy,Disconnected the wire,...Then,Radz tried to call from her mobile ,..He grabbed that too from her and threw it away,..
Arjun:What Radhika,...You are behaving like I gonna misbehave with you?,...Or you want me to do so?,...
Saying so, Arjun flips her hands Back and holds her Hair tightly,...He din leave air too to enter between them and taunted her badly,..Whereas Radz struggles to free his clasping hold on her,...
Arjun:You are behaving like that I'm touching you for the first time,...Shall I tell you How many moles you have in your body ?,...Or,...
Saying so,Arjun let his finger to wander on her face and Their Lips were barely few inches apart,...
Radz couldn't Bottle up her anger and annoyed hearing Arjun's meaningless words and his activities began,..
Radz:What do you want now?,..Leave me Arjun,...
Arjun smirked again and tightened his clasp on her hair,..
Arjun:What I want?,...hmm,..How dare you let another man to,...
Radz was shocked and before he could utter any,..She stopped him in mid,...
Radz:Arjun,..Hold your tongue,...If you dare to speak any about neil,..Then You never imagine in your dream too that you have to suffer a lot,...
Arjun:Oh!,..You love him that much,...Then What about your first love,...It's all a lie????,...
Radz:Yes, It is a lie,...And You have no status to talk about love ,Arjun,...I hate you more than I love you Arjun mehra,...And listen, I still love The Arjun,whom I saw was humble,Respects my feelings,Dreams and my happiness,...My wishes,...saves my soul,my dignity,...But,He was no more today,..He was dead three years back on the day you betrayed me,..On the day, you killed our love,..on the day, you killed my trust on you,..But,I wanna express my heartfelt gratitude to you,...You know why?,...Today I was successful cox of you,..You gave me thorns but I made it as Bed of roses with help of my friends,...And You also gave me world's precious gift,..'My Ansh',...So,I forgive you,...But,I never forget your deeds,Mr.Arjun,... Mind it,...
Arjun was shattered hearing this and loosened his hold on her,..Radz pulled him away in anger
A sudden pain of guilty gulped his throat,..
Arjun:Ansh is My child!!,...
Radz:No,..Never,..Ansh,...My child,...My soul,...Meaning for my life to live,...and His father name is Neil Malhotra,...you heard na,..Neil Malhotra,...You know Arjun,..I don't want even your name too to touch my son's shadow,...Why, what happened?,..You are remembering your past deeds?,..If you do so,..You will start to hate yourself Arjun,...I will never take avenge on you for your deeds,...And I will never ask Why You left me or why you crushed my life or why you fake me in the name of love or whatever,...Because You was dead already,..Now,...You are no one to me and There's nothing between us,...If there is something between us,then,It's my hatred for you Arjun,...You hear me na,...My hatred,..I hate you completely Arjun,...
Saying so,Radz walked past arjun to open the door and turned back after opening it began,
Radz:And listen,My Hatred for you is my strength Mr.Arjun Mehra,...Also Remember,...You wont be punished for your deeds but you will be punished by the same,...
Saying so,Radz left the cabin,...Till then, Arjun never believe something could shake his Strong heart like this,...But,Now Everything changes,..Arjun slipped for the first time,..His guilty for what he does to Radhika just stole his sleep till date but The truth which He heard a few minutes back made him completely shattered,..His head starts hitting like a thunderstorm,..Even his sister's pain too never had this effect on him,,,,As Radhika said,He started to hate himself for his deeds for the first time in his life,...He understood the sound of real shattering of his heart is the loudest quiet in this whole world,...For a minute, He wants to live a happy normal life with his Radhika and Ansh,...But Reality stuck him,...He couldn't hold control on himself,...
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