KaYa OS: A Rain Date, After the Date! - Page 2

This was simply wow 👏 👏 ...wonder if I can swoon over Kabir more than I already am 😳 😳 ...
Lovely OS & u really tempted me to wish something this similar happens onscreen 😳

Wow, so vivid and passionate!

Oh god it was red hot !! Loved it
You should have the chance to write one day script
Such romance wont be shown haha
Amazingly written
Dont be disappointed there is alot of silent members here

loved the os

beautiful and a romantic update.
loved it. Actually loved seeing Kabir so romantic.

Originally posted by: sss97

beautiful and a romantic update.
loved it. Actually loved seeing Kabir so romantic.Please don't get disheartened with few feedbacks or reviews. I love yours. Please do continue writing i love them and will enjoy frequent updates too.
Swathi

Thank you so much!😳

Originally posted by: rabzonedge

Send it to cvs NOW i want it to happen...
Excellent..

Awww! That is so sweet of you!!🤗

Originally posted by: sowmyap03

that was dam HOT... ufff koi paani lao...

 

im sure we will not get to see this level of romance in show... chalo yahi imagine karthe hai

Thanks!😳

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

Lovely OS. .the way kabir had planned the date was perfect. ...and the rain only added to the beauty of it. ..

Great work

Originally posted by: cutemishti

Beautiful os.

Originally posted by: Shweta13

Superb !!! Too much passionate to feel the heat between the two ... m reading and blushing too like stupid :)

Thank you!!😳

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

That was a really nice date and the after-date part was beautiful.
Great job
Loved the way the story flowed
You described everything so well
Please pm me your other work :)
Thanks

Awww! Thanks!😳😳