KaYa OS: A Rain Date, After the Date!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Surprise!!!!😆😆😆


Here i am with another OS so fast! Shocked?😲 So am i! I never knew i could actually write so much haha!😆 Yeh Kaya ka jaadu mujhse bahut kuch karwa leta hai! 😉

I actually didnt feel like posting this for a while because i guess a lot of people didn't like my previous OS, so i was a bit discouraged, but then i thought what the heck, the number doesnt matter and i will write for the people who read and like my work and comment and appreciate my efforts ever so faithfully...🤗😳😳

So a big big thank you to my lovely readers and i have a request on my blog just before the start of my OS. If you guys could see it then i would be highly obliged. Thank you! 🤗


Without delay, here is the link---> KaYa OS: A Rain Date, After the Date!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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that was dam HOT... ufff koi paani lao...
 
im sure we will not get to see this level of romance in show... chalo yahi imagine karthe hai
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Posted: 8 years ago
#3
thanks a lot. off to read it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#4
beautiful and a romantic update.
loved it. Actually loved seeing Kabir so romantic.Please don't get disheartened with few feedbacks or reviews. I love yours. Please do continue writing i love them and will enjoy frequent updates too.
Swathi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Send it to cvs NOW i want it to happen...
Excellent..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely OS. .the way kabir had planned the date was perfect. ...and the rain only added to the beauty of it. ..
Great work
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was a really nice date and the after-date part was beautiful.
Great job
Loved the way the story flowed
You described everything so well
Please pm me your other work :)
Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb !!! Too much passionate to feel the heat between the two ... m reading and blushing too like stupid :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for being a part of this forum and giving us such lovely lovely stories. O God kaya will be a death of me. How beautifully romantic. Kabir sharma and mrs sharma tho mast aur bindas hai. Thanks so much
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh wow..it was beautiful..thanks for the lovely OS..
nd I always love reading ur work..ur too good 😊