Poem : Put up the facade.

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annihilation

@annihilation

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

So, after I received a fairly well response for my first publication over here, I decided to publish another one of mine. Thanks to everyone who read I am breaking a thousand pieces inside and gave their valuable feedback.

Put up the facade.

Locked doors and closed curtains,

It was going to be one of those nights again, that was certain.

She lay there quietly in the darkened room,

Like a corpse in her tomb.

Tears soaked pillows and blanket mascara stained,

Through the window, she could hear the down pour,

Myriad of thoughts running through her brain.

A fully aching body, a sharp pain in her chest,

Her body was no longer hers, it was under arrest.

Scattered books and other junk surround,

The night got deeper, her demons came around.

She withered in agony and suffered in silence,

Her life had lost its purpose and complete balance.

It went on and on, felt like over a decade,

Morning dawned, girl, time to put up the facade!

- .annihilation.

Edited by .annihilation. - 10 years ago

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Madhura

@Madhura..

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Posted: 10 years ago

This is penned down beautifully, dark and deep, and description is bang on, Husna!

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 10 years ago

Another beautiful poem

Well penned👍🏼

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

This is a really good poem. It says so much while barely saying anything at all.

Edited by AzureLicht - 10 years ago

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incognito.

@incognito.

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Posted: 10 years ago

This poem. It's beautiful. A synoptic outline of an imperfect masquerade. People seldom look through the facade, anyway. Um, you should write more. Yeah. You're good at this.

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

The emotions came out just so beautifully here. Simple words and yet every line just get deeper meaning as it sinks in. And the eanding two lines were just P.E.R.F.E.C.T.

Really nice!

Chitra :)

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dinazz

@dinazz

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

Beautiful !

Wonderfully written !!

👏

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Atharva Dev

@*Dev.*

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

Very nicely written poem. Lines go with rhyme.

Beautiful to read and interesting to see such a nice work.

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silent.desire

@silent.desire

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Posted: 10 years ago

O wow I was actually breathing heavily after reading this one, it touched my heart so sharply. Nicely played with the words and brilliantly written.

Just in case for concern, are you in wattpad? Do you write there too? If yes then tell me your username please.

Edited by silent.desire - 10 years ago

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#10

it took me to another world.

she is broken and hides in dark..

but the dawn came she has to put up the facade as she is bful and always in control.

bful.

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