Poem : 'I am breaking a thousand pieces inside'. - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
You say you don't have the potential of writing a poetry which is a statement i totally differ from. The pieces of poetry, especially sad and dark ones are the best which actually decipher the depth which poetry holds. I actually think you should write more.
A way to redeem myself,
I do not see;
An exhausted candle awaits to be lit,

The best of me seems to have died,
I am breaking a thousand pieces inside.
fact is, some wounds never heal,


^ these are some amazing lines.
-Ayushi


Edited by -.wanderlust.- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi I never read anything you wrote . You wrote so beautifully !Just  want to say you are an awesome writer.write more! ❤️ 👍🏼 Edited by Tulasi14 - 8 years ago
suearmaniac thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ohk nw that was amazingly written
emotions were the key to publication door right?
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Posted: 8 years ago
your writing has depth,and this is written fantastically !