Poem : 'I am breaking a thousand pieces inside'.

Hello there! A newbie here in Writers Corner given the fact that I don't write often. This one's something I penned down long ago. The thought to publish this though occurred just a while ago. Before you go ahead and read, I repeat, I do not have the calibre of a writer.


Edited by .annihilation. - 8 years ago

That was beautiful. I feel like you should write more, you clearly have a great potential.

thats such a beautiful poem yaar 🤗 so beautifully written (=

Being an admirer of poetry, particularly the one that's dark, I think this is one brilliant and sad poem and, believe me, you've done a good job enunciating the ugly sentiments. I can actually feel the misery and it's not solely because I can relate to it. Although I'm not empathetic, I think this time it's your writing that makes me commiserate with the writer on her affliction. You say you do not have the potential of being a writer and I beg to differ. Even though I have not read anything else written by you, I think you surely can gain writing expertise if you write more often. Believe me, this isn't for invigoration purpose. No sugar-coating as well. Pure truth.

I, uh, it's 3am here. But I love you, so I'm reserving until morning.

Beautifully written husna

I hate Reserving things, but I would've forgotten to comment otherwise 🤓



Edited by AzureLicht - 8 years ago

This content was originally posted by: labyrinth.

I, uh, it's 3am here. But I love you, so I'm reserving until morning.

Such mornings are partly why I am such a dark human being.

It was alluring and very nicely written. Nice work. 

she is broken.. she is devestated..

1000 pieces ... u are broken into..

it just takes a small move to glue it..

all the thousand peices glued again..it will give a spider web.. whihc is abstract.. a modern picassa..

depends on how i take it..

lovely ..