MaNan ff :Destined together (updated chap 18-page 32) - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Awesome update plzz update soon and also pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
nice update
please manik ko thora aur jealous feel kar wao

continue soon thanks for the pm
Edited by SONIAGHOSH - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Read all of them in a go.. 😃
n it was quite nice
d concept n d story is nive ⭐️
but we want more romance yaar 😊
continue soon 😊
keep writing 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
hmm! nice update
I hope harshad n aliya nandini k saath kuch galat na kre
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Wow amazing update dea. ..
Beautifully written
Read all part in one go
Continue soonnn
If possible pm me nxt time
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Thats so cute!! Please PM me the next chapter!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
hi guys I m back
CHAPTER 10
manik on seeing his girl with his enemy boiled with anger...

cabir noticed this and understood his feelings clearly

with cabir... alya even understood everything

mukti eyed nandu in jealousy

while dhruv stood there innocently... ;)

cabir- aah manik I need to talk to u chal na

manik - Han han for sure...

saying this they went towards the music room

while nandu excused herself and went to washroom

in the washroom she got the biggest surprise of her life

there stood manik with his hands crossed infront of his chest

nandu - manik how did u reach here? this is girl's washroom right!! and waise tum toh cabir ke saath nikle the?

flash back ----
manik! aah cabir I have some work will talk to u later

manik was trying to escape wen cabir said

cabir- kya kaam hai ?
manik - arey wo mom ka kaam hai
cabir - I know who is ur mom right now.. koi na chal tu kar apna kaam...having protection na (winks) kya pata kab kaam aa jaye while working!
manik- cabir shut up!!
cabir - acha bye bye vaise maine Teri ''mom '' ko washroom jaate hue dekha

manik turned to go towards washroom when he heard cabir say - love sick puppy..

he smiled at this and rushed towards washroom

flashback end --

manik kept quiet remembering how he reached there and continuously smiling to himself ..he truely had become a ''love sick puppy''

his life was nice b4 nandu ...but wen nandu came in her life it became beautiful.. it became happening...although he was loved by his parents but they were so busy in their business that they could hardly give any time to manik ...but when she enterd his life he got a reason to live to be happy... inshort he got life...

now that girl was standing there asking him wat he was doing in a girl's loo..

manik - tum harshad se kyu baat kar ra--

then he stopped in the middle and looked at the girl.. i.e his life and realised that he hadn't seen her properly.. she was looking beautiful... even that word couldn't describe her...
with black skinny jeans and sleeveless white tank top she made every boy fall for her and every girl burn with jealousy

manik (completely lost in her) - u look beautiful --damn beautiful...

nandu turned her face as she could feel heat rise in her cheeks...

manik - vaise u were talking to that jerkshad..why? u remember na how he hurted u and then even? why???

nandu - mera mann he apologized n was behaving nicely and he is a good friend so wats the harm. ?

manik - but u know na I cnnt let him harm u again u r -

nandu - shh...

nandu was admiring the man or in other words the handsome hunk of the college... she might be unlucky in her first few years of her life but to compensate with her losses god gave her this awesome man named manik... manik.. the most handsome n rich guy of Mumbai was there for her always.. on seeing him caring for her so much her heart would swell with love which was only for him..

on seeing nandu seeing her so lovingly he lost himself again and grabbed her oh so delicate waist with his strong hands... then pushed her on the wall and leant on her with his face dangerously close to hers...

manik - u r the most beautiful girl I have ever seen

nandu turned her face to hide her blush as manik leaned closer to her...and he placed a deep long kiss on her neck...

automatically nandu 's hands went on his necks and she moaned his name in pleasure...

this turned on manik.. he started giving lovebites all over her neck and then sucked them to soothe them...but unfortunately...their romance got disturbed as they heard the door banged by someone

while manan were romancing something really bad happened which ought not happen... --

flashback

alya was going to washrum to freshen up when she heard manik 's voice from somewhere... she looked around and found manik with nandu in the washroom...

she stood there seeing their romance and when the romance reached its peak she couldn't control herself and banged the door of washroom and went from there crying to harshad

flashback end

manik - ah um um. ...I wanted to say stay away from harshad... he is dangerous u know... bye

nandu just nodded as she didnt have the energy to say anything after whatever happened just now...

manik to avoid any more questions ran out of the washroom ..
nandu was continuosly washing her face to stop the blush in her face...

and soon she left as they had practice...

meanwhile alya went to harshad

alya - bhai I wanted ur phone for once

harshad gave her the phone and she quickly copied down the imp number which she needed...

alya-s pov

now I will see Nandini how u will come close to my boyfriend

end of pov

alya was talking over the phone - ya Rs50,000 ok.. Ya small petite girl with very long hair upto her waist... yes n agar puche toh bolna ki it's from manik.. ya...

she cut the call with a wicked grin

precap - alya 's evil plan

note - sorry for late update guys :(
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Alya is making a plan!!!!! 😡 OMG!! The Manan romance was awesome!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Nice one after a long time. Plz this time cont soon😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Loved it
Update the next soon

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