MaNan ff :Destined together (updated chap 18-page 32) - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
read in one gooo
loved it
u penned the emotions very well
wicked alya
i just hate her
good concept
keep writing
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Plz update the next soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome
I love this story
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome finally alya ka adli chrhra sabke samne aa gaya...
I m loving it...

Cont soon..

Thanx for pm..
Keep writing... stay blessed...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow at last everyone understand truth...
poor manik...
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...Thanks for the lovely update..u penned it very well dea...jus loved it...the way u write is awsm...update soon dea eagerly waiting for next part...i will kill alya for doin such cheep plan...continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi guys..
thank u for so much support...
I m flattered by ur love
thank you so much..
n sorry as I forgot about mentioning the precap in the previous part...
CHAPTER 12
manik was too ashamed to face Nandini... he felt that his cheeks was wet, he was crying..

Nandini was hurt on seeing manik... she was trying to behave normal even after whatever happened few minutes ago.. she shivered at the thought of it...she was still wearing his jacket as it made her forget all the worries of the world, in short, made her feel comfortable...when cabir asked for manik 's jacket she refused to give it to him... he just smiled and excused himself leaving Nandini all by her own...

cabir found manik at the bar, he went there and to his surprise he was not drinking alcohol but a lemonade..when he went closer and took a seat beside him then he realised that this man who never used to cry was shedding silent tears... he was surprised... but then after recovering from this shock he started consoling him..

cabir - manik aise roke koi fayda nahi... see we saved nandu na.. she is safe with us.. what 's the reason for being so sad.. hume Nandini ki help karni chahie so that she feels ok even.. u know wat vo suffer ki hai n she is behaving so bravely, not crying at all n u, tu kyu aise asu bahaye jaa raha hai? why?
manik - Because I never in my dreams even thought that alya could go so low, why did she do dis? why? because she was jealous of her ?I know she hates her a lot but it doesn't mean that she will go so low.. I need to talk to her right now... I am goi-

before he could complete his sentence he heard -
MANIKKK!!
he rushed to his room where nandu was lying and saw her shivering..manik eyes welled up on seeing her in this condition

manik sat beside her and held her hands

manik - kya hua nandu?
Nandini pointed towards the window..
a bird was scratching the window...
manik at first didnt understand but after some while he understood, she was scared of it even..

cabir's eyes even welled up on seeing nandu.. he even didnt imagine that his group member that even alya the good girl of hid gang would go so low... would turn into a witch, now he even wanted justification from her...

manik went and drew the curtains and nandu relaxed after this..

in order to lighten the mood cabir said -
manik see she is not giving ur jacket back see...
nandu turned her face and clutched the jacket more tightly not letting it go ...
manik felt so nice on seeing her not giving his jacket back as she was feeling so comfortable in it... he smiled beamingly at her...then with a naughty smirk asked her

manik - kyu nahi Dena? arey mera jacket hai mujhe do wapas...
just then cabir received dhruv's text -
''cabir we are at alya 's place... come here as fast as you can and dont bring manik ''
thinking it better to leave manik with Nandini he excused himself saying that he has some work and manik was so engrossed in nandu that he didnt ask him any question and just nodded his head...

now only manan were in the room...
Nandini - mai nahi dungi ...no..!!
(note-Nandini was only wearing a bra inside the jacket and the buttons were closed and she covered herself with the blanket)
manik sat on the bed and leaned closer to her - acha? nahi dogi-said he in a seductive voice...
his breath fanned her face and she shivered as she smelt him... she couldn't say anything and just nodded...
manik suddenly started tickling her..

Nandini - arey manik dont do this! haha! maa..nnik..ha ha... stop na...
and during this tickling session manik climbed over Nandini and as nandu was moving a lot the blanket slid off her body and her chest was exposed...

manik saw that and stopped and leaned closer ...
Nandini felt no blanket on her chest and to her horror the blanket was now lying on the floor...before she could say anything manik leaned closet to her and kissed just above her bra... she moaned with pleasure...listening nandu moan his name so sexily his inner desires woke up and he started kissing her collarbone, neck... he proceeded upwards towards her lips when Nandini said -''but alya?''
manik stopped there and got up from the bed, facing the other side,
manik - tum change karlo,sirf mere jacket pahenne se u r not safe..
Nandini blushed on his remark
Nandini - ok and she went in her room to change...
precap - alya- fab4 confrontation...
abhimanyu intro.. manik jealous ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
fab update
loved it
nicely written
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update dear..
continue soon..👏😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow brave nandu
Tnx for pm
Continue soon
Stry amazing

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