Originally posted by: tasha001
Trisha Baby Love it
I want to come there and hug you 🤗
It's very nice the use of words and knitting them together was awesome.
Maybe you got inspiration 😉 from the journey
Love you
&
Do pm me when you continue...
Originally posted by: ndcdance
wwoo..
trishu...this is something different...interesting..,dno what's it..but u do write well...do continu.. 😉
Originally posted by: -Kryptic.Keya-
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Words... They have an exotic beauty of their own to create master-pieces worth cherishing and I got a glimpse of it here as well. Way to go girl!!Well said di..oh! Thnx a lot
It's much hard to believe that this is your first set of creativity... Trust me it's much better than what many established writers have to offer...oui..thats too much..
That splendid description of the virtual world much akin to the positive realism of the world that only close eyes can visualize is so captivating! I just loved the metaphorical usage of words there.. Fantastic!*faint*Itti taareef handle nhi hoti mujhse..koi paani daalo re..
Did I somewhere read criminal, eh??Nothing that great..dont get ur expectations high pls..😆
I just can't wait to read the next part already!!
Oh! Thnx thnx thnx:🤗
Regards
KKeep smiling..🤗Trisha..
Originally posted by: sudipto-69
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unresit's awesome superb lovely lovelylovely lovely lovely lovely lovelyit's very different and interesting concept.very very nice and interesting startingvery very well writing didu.👏love it. update asap.😊
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!wow!!wow!!!!!
I jusssttt lovvveeeddd ittt!
it was amazing...
beautiful fiction yaar...
or kuch new b...
do post the next part asap..:-)
Originally posted by: newmoon18
Wow yr sounds intrstng
Loved the proloug
For sure cntniue soon
Excited to read
Update soon
Wtng
Love u
Keep smiling
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