MANAN FF FOUND PERFECTION WITH YOU part25 on 45 - Page 12

Originally posted by: audity.sm

First of all always commenting...I do read the comments but its so hard to reply to comments because of my stupid phone...since my exams r coming next so im not allowed to use my laptop for more than half an hour...and most of it I spend to update my story...but I read it and love all of ur comments!!!!!! please do showering my story with ur lovely comments...I know its a bit short...but it will be worth it in the next updates...Please do tell what u want type of scenes do u want to see next... options 1.sweet n romantic 2.emotional 3.hawt!!!!!!!! :p

Hey thanx for replying...
I was just thinking ki pata nhi u read our comments or not.. but thanx for clearing my misunderstandings and sorry if it hurt u in any way...
All the best for ur exams!!!!
And ya any type of scene u want to show u can but romantic one is my fav...
Sorry again if I hurt u in any manner...
Keep updating!!!!
Stay blessed..
LOVE,
AAROHI...

Very short yet nice update. But the separation!! Uughh!!
Well i know that u'll bring them together again 😉
Waiting for nxt update. And yeah thanks for the pm!!
All the best for further updates .. 👏

Nice update
Plz don't separate manan

hello everyone!!! im back with part 14...give me reviews about what u think about my ff...what do u think would make this ff better and what makes it bad...also what u want to see in further updates...u have 3 options--
1.sweet n romantic
2.emotional
3,HAWT!!!!!
also buddy me n comment for further pm's so that i know that u want to read my ff... :) :) :)

PART14
Manik went to his room..again he was shattered...fab3 n navya were waiting for him there..he went in and told them everything...Everyone was upset
M:kaha tha na I lost her...just for one stupid mistake of mine..
Nv:no manik..she loves u alot..its not possible for her to be just friends with u..
M:what?par usne to..
Nv:manik mai pichle do din se uske sath thi..wo bilkul tut chuki thi..aj pehlibar usne muskuraya..just after seeing u..she is just afraid of losing u again..u cant give up now..u hav to fight for her..
D:she is right buddy..u hav to fight for her!!hum tere sath hai!
M:ur right guys..I cant let this relationship slip away...I have to win her heart back..Everyone was happy to se confident manik..they all left for their rooms..dhruv walked navya to her room..
D:thanx navya
Nv:kis liye?
D:manik ko hope dene k liye
N:oo...iske liye thanx kehne ki zarorat nehi hai...nandini to meri hi behen hai!!
D:zaroorat hai!! Thanx again navya..he kissed her cheeks and walked away leaving a shocked navya behind

Next morning:
Fab5 were at the breakfast table with everyone else..manik was thinking of ways of talk to nandini..mukti n cabir was sleepy as usual..they couldnt even held their heads up..nandini laughed at them..she picked up a plate for them and started feeding them..dhruv seeing nandini feed them he also made a puppy face so nandini fed him as well..manik was upset as he felt like even lost the right to ask..he was about to get up when he saw a hand with a bite of food.he looked up to find a smiling nandini..he rose his eye brows in question..nandini gestured him..he happily took the bite out of her hand...suddenly two people entered the room..nandini turned to see whoit was when manik kissed her hands..she looked at him and gave him a faint smile.. it was rahul n nimisha who entered..both of them r nandinis childhood friends..they also came to attend the wedding..nimisha met fab5 last year..she was awestruck to see manik as she had a huge crush on manik..

Nandini was happy to meet them..she hugged nimisha..nimisha whispered in her ears that y didn't nandini informed her that manik was coming..nandini was a tad bit annoyed...she said I didn't know myself..afterwards rahul came forward and hugged nandini...they were meeting after 3years..so the hug was longer than usual..after breaking the hug rahul kissed nandinis cheeks..
Rahul:I missed u nandu!! Kaha thi itne din!!
N:I missed u too!! Tu to usa jake mujhe bhul hi gaya..
Rahul:really!!mai bhul gaya!!
N:yes u... She lightly slapped his face..she was still in his arms..
Manik was annoyed to see all this..cabir noticed it
C:agar tum logo ka bharat milap khatam ho gaya hai to can we eat??
N:of course...nimisha ran to sit next to manik...nandini wanted to sit there but she sat beside rahul then..after the breakfast all of them were sitting at the garden..nimisha was annoying manik bt all manik was observing was rahul n nandini catching up..nandini too was annoyed with manik n nimishas closeness..suddenly arohi n Rehan walked in..
arohi:y r u guys wasting time??kal sangeet hai!! And all of u will have to perform..
C:oh yes..dont worry we r going to rock this sangeet!!
Rehan:that we know!!!
Mt:lets make pair guys..then we will decide the songs..and we hav to practice as well..me n cabir!
D:me n navya!
Rahul:me n nandu
Nimisha:me n manik dn!!! Both manan were annoyed..they both wanted the other person to say something..but their ego and helplessness stopped them..the rest of the day they all practiced on several songs..at the end they decided to do a romantic number..nandini was too tired so she said she isn't interested..then nimisha jumped up to say that she n manik will do it!!Before manik could say anything rehan agreed to it..nimisha and manik started practicing...nandini glared at them for a second..then she left the place.after the practice manik tried to talk to her but every time she made some sort of excuse..at night nandini was sitting in the garden looking at the stars..manik came there with two cups of coffee in his hands
M:coffee?
N:thanx.. manik sat beside her..They were silent..it was quite chilly..manik was a bit shivering..nandini noticed it..she opened her shawl and took manik in it..manik smiled at her..he side hugged her..nandini rested her head on his shoulders..manik planted a light kiss in her hair..nandini smiled..
M:yaha kya kar rahi ho?
N:stars manik..they are so pretty!!i love their lights..hai na?
M:ya...
nandini looked at him..he wasnt looking at the stars..he was starring at her..
N:manik...ur not even looking at them..
M:i dont need to...my favorite star is right here in front of me..
They both got a sudden flashback of the valentines party..the competition,their victory hug and their first kiss... nandinis eyes became filled with water..she abruptly got up..
N:good night manik..ill see u tomorrow morning.. She ran away..
M:i miss u nandu...and i know that u miss me just as much...we will be back together soon..i promise...

the next morning all of them were busy with the haldi event.all of them had fun..they all applied haldi to aarohis face..manik was recording the entire event..actually he was just recording nandini and her cute antics..every time she laughed his heart skipped a beat..after applying haldi they all started to dance..while nandini was dancing with rahul while nimisha was trying to get cozy with manik..both manan were annoyed..manik suddenly took a chance and pulled nandini towards him... nandini still had some haldi on her hands..she applied it to maniks face
Manik gave her a look.. nandini winked at him and ran away
M:nandini murthy u will have to pay for it..he ran behind her..they ran all around the house..finally manik catched nandini..he grabbed her from behind and twirled her around..nandini laughed her heart out..manik suddenly out her down and pinned her to the wall...
M:so!!now I hav u!ab kaha jaogi?
N:manik let me go!!
M:itni asani se to nehi..
N:manik tumhe meri kasam tum kisi bhi tar he se mujhe touch nehi karoge..
M:thik hai..par jab tak tum apne face mai haldi nehi lagaogi mai tumhe nehi jane dunga..
N:seriously!
M:yes..ab tum socho..mai to tumhe haldi lagane nehi wala hu..tum kaise lagaogi tum socho..nandini smiled she moved her face towards him..she wrapped her hand around his neck..manik tightened his grab on her waist..she slowly leaned in and rubbed her cheeks with maniks ones..she did it with both his cheeks and did it slowly..they both could feel their hot breaths on their necks..manik was shocked at this..he loosened his grab on her..nandini took this chance and ran away..manik bit his lips and ruffled his hands in his hair..

In the evening Nandini was helping arohi to get ready for the sangeet
N:di apse ek baat puchu?
A:sure
N:ap ore jiju itne saal se ek saath ho..kaise?kabhi fight nehi ki apne?
A:nandini we fight everyday...we broke up countless times
N:then how come u r still together?
A:nandini if two people are together than fights or misunderstandings to honi e hai...par what matters is if theres a want in ur heart to work it out or not..agar hai..then u should give it a chance...fights make a relationship strong!!with every reunion they relationship gets a new dimension..it brings two people closer cause u realize how much u need that persons..distance does bring people who are in love more closer...vaise tu yeh sab kiyu puch rahi hai??
N:kuch nehi bas aise hi...chalo ap to taiyar ho gayi hai..niche chalte hai..
They both get down...
precap:something u have all been waiting for :P :P :P :P

Great update!!
Continue soon :)

awww...its so cute and great

Awesome Yaar and plz make next updates sweet and romantic plzz and alsi pm

Wow what an amazing update
I loved the way navya made manik understand nandini's love to him
Hahaha..navya and dhrub Jodi nice
Haldi scene was superb
For next updates I choose 1 & 3 option
Thanks a lot for this amazing update
Thanks for pm
Please update the next part soon
Eagerly waiting

They are meant to be together :)

Thanks fr the PM :*
Amazing Update :)

fantastic part...loving ur story a lot
manan ...awww..loving their nok-jhok a lot
pls continue soon
take care