New FF 'Grumpy Golu'; Chap 2(b) updt Pg 16 (30 Apr 2016) - Page 10

Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal

wow wow wow!!!!! <3 u just nailed it..just nailed it..was so waiting..and to be honest..it was freaking... f****ing hawttt...super hawt...really am looking forward to it...yaar..raya are so into each other...! but they just deny...it..they have lust..but so loveable desire! really..plzz I beg u next soon plzzz can't wait real amazing next soon plzz

Originally posted by: Rayaland

Very nice part

Originally posted by: DiehardRaYafan

I have read "The Beautiful bas***d" ...and imagined RAYa all the way through. The concept and the sensuality in that story is so apt for the kind of chemistry they shared so love reading it again with Ram and Priya as actual main leads. My two cents give the story a twist by writing a little bit from your own imagination...trust me you will have fun doing that 😉

Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal

next!!

Originally posted by: Rayaland

I m waiting pls update na

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

me also waiting

Originally posted by: abhishekpanchal

next...mam?

Originally posted by: leena04

well Intro seems quite simple & cute lets see wheree the story goes on... will comment brifly aftr reading first part ...

Originally posted by: leena04

Hmmm intesrting cocept completly diffrent from other story I really actually enjoyed the way story goes Priya thinks Ram is rude & arrogant still Ram's part is yet untold so will surly wait till it gets opn up so now moving for next part...

Originally posted by: leena04

OMG part 2 was complete hot & temptating... it was so burning in fire od Lust never seen RaYa in such bold & hot avtaar eever... it was all new expriance to see them likee that way... too good awesome moving for next...