a nibir story- 3 shot part 3 (last part)updated on page 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Awesome update
Felt bad for Nisha Can't wait for Kabir to make his entry
Hate sumit n karan
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Very nice... continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hiya!
Do continue your story
But why did Nisha change her mind? 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Terra04

Hiya!
Do continue your story
But why did Nisha change her mind? 😕

Are u talking about nisha who talked like that with kabir...???😕
If so she talked like that because she didn't wanted to come in between him and his dreams...!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Plz update soon, want nibir to unite again. .
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Originally posted by: poo10

Plz update soon, want nibir to unite again. .

Will update the next part within2 hours...!!
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Will update the next part tomorrow...!!!
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will post it in an hour...all of it got deleted...writing it again...!!!
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The story is superb!! Please continue soon! Eagerly waiting!!👏😊😉
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PART-3
it was 2 A.M.
viraj and kabir's phone conversation...

kabir:bhai...nn...nishaa ko  kuch hua hain kya...????wo mere se aise baat kyun kar rahi thi...???wo aisa kyun bol rahi thi ki aaj uski shaadi hain...wo mere saath aisa kaise kar sakti hain bhai...???
bhai kuch bolo na aap chup kyun ho...kuch to bolo...!!!

viraj: kabir ...aap abhi ke abhi shaant ho jaayiye...kuch nahi hua hain aapke nishu ko...aap bas jaldi se aajayiye...humne aap ki ticket book kardi hain aur aapko mail bhi kar di hain...4 baje ki flight hain apki..abhi ke abhi nikliye...please jaldi aajayiye...aap ki nisha ko le jaayiye yahan se...ye log aapke nisha ki shaadi karwa rahe hain...!!!

3 A.M
with that he just hung up the call...kabir was now literally crying...he started packing up his things in a jiffy...he took nisha's photo from the side table and kept it in his pocket...and checked out of the hotel he was staying in...he took a taxi and reached the delhi airport...he calls viraj ...
kabir:bhai pleasee jab tak main nahi aata meri nisha ka dhyaan rakhna bhai...main bas abhi airport mein hun bas aur do ghanto ki baat hain ...phir main apne nisha ke paas aa jaunga...!!bhai pleasee aap bas do ghanto keliye iss baat ko sambhal lijiye...!!!

viraj:aap fikar mat kijiye kabir...hum wo sab dekhlenge...aap bas jaldi se aajayiye...aap aaj late mat kijiye ...please jitni jaldi ho utni jaldi aajayiye...

with that he hung up the call and immediately called his manager and told him about the plan to break the marriage...
in the flight, kabir took nisha's photo in his hand and started talking to it. ...his fellow passengers were shocked to see him like that...they decided to not to talk to him as they thought that he may have gone mad..for the next two hours he kept staring at nisha's photo and talking to it...he finally reached jaipur..he took his bag and ran outside the airport...viraj was waiting for him outside the airport with his car...kabir reached delhi at about 6 A.M. ,and nisha's marriage was at 7 AM...
VIRAJ DROVE HIS CAR AS FAST AS HE COULD...
kabir kept asking him what the matter was but he didn't answer...he was silently driving the car...viraj dropped him at the wedding hall...and was about to leave when
kabir:bhai aap kahan jaa rahe ho...aap andar nahi aaoge...???
viraj:abhi nahi...abhi aap jaayiye,,,hum abhi thodi der mein aate hain...hume abhi thoda sa kaam hain...thoda band baaje ka arrangement karna hain...
kabir was not able to understand what he just said...
kabir:main samjha nahi...
viraj:thodi der ruk jaayiye...aap sab samajh jaayenge...!!!
he said with a smile and left the place...

kabir was about enter into the gangwal house when someone shouted from behind...it was ramesh...!!!!
ramesh:tu ab kya karne aaya hain yahan kabir...???
kabir:papa...
ramesh:mujhe papa mat bol...aur teri yahan aane ki himmat kaise hui...???
kabir:papa aap samajhne ki koshish to kijiye...
ramesh:abb jo tune kiya hain ...uske baad bhi kuch samajhna reh gaya hain kya...????tu abhi ke abhi chala ja yahan se...aaj meri beti ki shaadi ho rhi hain...aur maintujhe use kharaab karne nahi dunga...
kabir:papa pleasee muje bas ek baar nisha se milna hain...bas ek baar...
ramesh: nahi...wo main tujhe kabhi nahi karne dunga...!!!
with that he called the security guards...and ordered them to throw him out of that place...
the security guard started beating him...and threw him out of the place...
but, however, kabir gathered the courage to get up once again and this time he went to the backside of the house and with the help of the pipe he successfully climbed upto nisha's terrace...he saw nisha sitting before the mirror with an expressionless face but many thoughts were crossing her mind...she didn't knew why she was doing all this...but she had to..!!
he was about to enter her room when he saw tauji coming towards nisha's room...so in order to hide himself from him...he quickly ran to the next room which was dark..and hid himself there...then suddenly someone switched on the light...he turned back to see who it was..it was the cousins gang and saurav...!!!
they were watching him with a shocking+angry expression...suddenly sukku came to him , grabbed his collar and punched him on his face...
kabir was shocked to see his reaction...
sukku: KAHAN THA TU??? pata hain kitna call kiya humne tujhe...??dimag pocket mein leke ghumta hain kya...???
all cousins: teri himmat kaisi hui nisha ko chodke jaane ki...???pata hain gharwaalo ne nisha ki kya haalat kar di hain...??
everyone was about to punch him when umesh came in between...
umesh:aree...bas karo guyzz...kitna maaroge isko...isko kuch bataya bhi to nahi hain na nishu ne...to iski kya galti hain...ye time emotinal hone ka nahi hain thoda kaam karne ka hain...yaad hain na viraj sir ka plan...??
KABIR LOOKED AT THEM WITH A CONFUSING LOOK...
kabir:are mujhe batao to sahi yahi ho kya raha hain...aur nisha aisa kar kyun rahi hain...???
saurav:sirf tere liye...taaki wo tere dreams ke beech mein na aaye...tu usse nafrat karne lage...use bhool jaaye ...aur tu apne career pe dhyaan de...use pata tha ki agar wo tujhe apne iss halat ke baare mein bata degi to tu sab kuch chodke usske paas aajayga...aur wo jaanti thi ki tu usse pyaar karta hain...!!!
kabir:yaar tum log kis haalat ke baare mein bol rahe ho...mujhe kuch samajh nahi aarha ...!!
all cousins shouted together:
ABE KABIR TU DHAKKAN HAIN DHAKKAN...ITNA BHI SAMAJH NAHI AATA TUJHE...
 they all shouted together:
bro you are going to be a father yaar...thoda to apna brain develop karne ki koshish kar ...
kabir gave a confused look to all of them...
kabir: father...kiska father...???
saurav:saale tu aur kiska father banega...???
kabir: apne bachche ka aur kiska...when suddenly understood what he just said...wait a minute...!! do you m..meannn...nn..nnishhaa is pp...pregnant...!!
cousins and saurav: EXACTLY...!!
with that kabir just fell on his knees and tears escaped from his eyes...
kabir:nisha ne kyun nahi bataya mujhe ye sab...kyun ye sab wo akeli sehti rahi...wo mujhe bas ek baar bolke dekhti...main sab kuch theek kar deta na...main sab kuch chod sakta hun uske liye...i love her yaar...nisha mujhpe itna bhi trust nahi karti...??
dolly:putting a hand on his shoulder:wo tujhpe trust karti hain tabhi to usne ye sab kiya na...use pata tha ki tu uske liye sab kuch chod dega..isliye to nahi bola...wo tujhe happy dekhna chahti thi...
all the cousins and saurav gave him a group hug and told him that they will help him get his nisha back...!!
they explained him all the plan...!!
part A of the plan was pataofy nisha...which was kabir's department..
all the cousins pushed him into nisha's room and kabir locked the door from inside ...nisha thought that it would be one of her cousins...she turned back to see that person...she was shocked to see a teary eyed kabir standing there with alot of bruises on his face which showed that he was badly beaten by someone...she nearly ran to kabir to hug him but stopped herself from doing so...she was very concerned for kabir seeing his bruises but she didn't show it up..

kabir:ab aao kisi muhurat ka wait kar rahi ho kya...hug nahi karna mujhe...???
nisha:kyun aaye ho tum yahan...kya chahte ho ab mujhse...???maine bola tha na ki aaj meri shaadi hain ...mujhse milne ki koshish mat karna...phir kyun aaye ho yahan...leave kabir...just leave...
kabir:yaar tu to bura maan gayi...main to yahan tujhe congratulate karne aaya tha ...teri shaadi jo hain...he took out a box from his bag and gave it to her ...aur ye le teri shaadi ka gift...!!!!
nisha was shocked at his sudden gestures...nisha was crying from inside...and kabir was smiling...gift kholke nahi dekhna..???said kabir..
jaldi kholo na please...mujhe batana kaisa laga...!!
kabir started moving toward the door...
she finally unwrapped the gift box...and was shocked to see her favourite chocolate box inside it along with a big note which read that "I LOVE YOU NISHA , WILL YOU MARRY ME ONCE AGAIN "
happy tears escaped from nisha's eyes and she just hugged kabir from back...kabir was happy to see that...
nisha: kabir...lekin...tere dreams...ka kyaa...??
kabir turned back and cupped her face,
kabir: nisha yaar tu bilkul pagli hain...maine kab bola ki main apne dreams ko chod dunga...hum apne dreams saath mein bhi to acheive kar sakte hain na...!!!
main london school of dance mein, aur tu london school of archery mein...!!!
nisha: agar tu yahin chahta tha to pehle kyun nahi aaya...itna late kyun kardiya...???
kabir: tujhe to pata hain na ...main kaisa hun...DHAKKAN...!!
time lag jaata hain yaar muje...
nisha :isskeliye main tujhe maaf nahi karungi...
kabir: yaar abhi wo sab chod...ladayi to hum baadmein bhi kar sakte hain na...wo to humara full time kaam hain...!!!with that he hugged her tightly ...
kabir:nisha...
nisha: kya hain...??
kabir: tu mujhse kuch chupa to nahi rahi naa...kabir asked curiously...
nisha.: nahi toohhh...main kya chupaungi tujhse...she said while shying...
kabir saw her shying...
kabir: tu thodi moti nahi ho gayi...???
nisha: tu yahan aane se pehle kisse mila tha ...??
kabir:cousins se...!!!
nisha:ohhh...to bata diya un logon ne sab kuch...!!!
kabir:haan...!!
nisha:haan sahi hain...i'm pregnant...!!!
kabir:hawww nishaaa...ab to tu moti ho jaaygi...he said teasingly...!!
kabir picked her in her arms and started dancing in the room...
nisha:kabir chod mujhe abhi ke abhi mujhe neeche utaar...
ye sab hum baadme bhi kar sakte hain na...aage kya karna hain soche...
kabir made her stand...took her hand into his...and started walking out of the room...
PLAN A ACCOMPLISHED...!!!
nibir started walking down towards the living area where the mandap was made...
the family members saw them with an angry expression...
sumit ran to him and was about to punch him when kabir stopped him and gave a tight punch on his face...DISHUMMM...
and sumit landed on the floor...DHADAMMM...
karan races to kabir to hit him...
kabir:he stops him:tu mujhe maarega...ab to tu dekhle beta...tu meri nisha se shaadi karega...bhai main to tujhe bachaane aaya hun...haan bhai haan karle...baadme pitne se achcha hain abhi pit jaa mere se...aur bhaag jaa yahan se...tu bhi bach jaayga nisha se...(he said in his ears)
karan got angry and blowed a punch into kabir's stomach...and started talking nonsense about nisha...and kabir got damn angry on him and started hitting face as he was his punching bag and started crashing him...
seeing this bade tauji and chote tauji came to the rescue of karan and sumit and started hitting kabir...only then nisha comes in between...
nisha:bas kijiye aap log...kitna ladoge aap sab...stop it...just stop it...!!!
ramesh stood silent there...he was not understanding what the heck was happening there...and singham said
singham:bas karo yeh sab...nishaa...ye sab kya ho rha hain mere ghar mein...band karo ye sab ...!!!
just then viru enters the scene...
viru:ARREST THEM...!!! they are the culprits..you have been searching for...sumit and karan...
singham:ye sab kya ho rha mere ghar mein...police kya kar rahi hain mere ghar mein...
police:hum sumit aur karan ko arrest karne aaye hain...!!
singham:lekin kyun..???kya kiya inn logo ne...???
police:ye karan chor hain...ameer ladkiyon ko phasata hain shaadi karke...aur phir uunn ke paise leke bhaag jaata hain...iss ke khilaf station mein bahut sari complaints darj ki gayi hain...!!!iss ko hum bahut saalo se dhoond rahe hain...aur hume further investigation se ye pata chala hain sumit aur ye partners hain...humare paas prrof bhi hain...
singham sat down then and there holding his head...
just then sukku came from behind and showed him the video which they recorded while sumit and karan were talking about looting the gangwal house...dadaji was shocked to see that...with that singham stood up from his chair and went near sumit and karan and grabbed their collars and said
TUM LOGON KI ITNI HIMMAT KAISE HUI HUMARE GHAR KE BACHCHO KE SAATH AISA KARNE KI...???HE SLAPPED BOTH OF THEM..
WHEN SUMIT SPOKE OUT :abee oo budhdhe...aukat me reh samjha...!!!hearing this the whole gangwal family except the cousins pounced in them tobash them...
just then dolly spoke out...
dolly: inko to aap hum cousins pe chod dijiye...hum dekhte hain inki kya aukaat hain...!!!!
with that the cousins, kabir, viraj and saurav pounced on them and kicked them black and blue..with chappals, belans,pans, etc etc(you can vent out your anger with your own wild imaginations)😉
tore their clothes,made them into rags,in short dono ki achche se dhulayi hogayi..!!
police :ab aap log bas kijiye, inn logo ko aap humaare hawale chod dijiye...inki baaki dhulayi hum karenge...!!
they took both of them away...with that they were kicked out of the house...
now, dadaji approached kabir in his singham look as if he was about to punch him on his face and surprisingly he put his hand on kabir's shoulder and asked...
KYUN BHAI HUMARI BETI SE SHAADI KAROGE...???
with this gesture of dadaji , kabir's eyes widened in shock...he was staring at dadaji like an owl...and suddenly he started dancing...all the family members laughed their heart out...for the first time everybody saw viru smiling like a mad person, it showed that he was really happy for his brother...
he went to kabir and nisha and hugged both o them together...!!
kabir:thank you bhai agar aaj aapne meri help nahi ki hoti to meri nisha mujhse door chali jaati...he hugged viru tightly...nisha smiled seeing the love between the brothers...
now, nibir got married in the same mandap...viraj called his mother...vasundharai there...she was happy for both of his sons...
then , viraj noticed kaira there...he was angry with her...she came infront of him...and was about to say something when viraj spoke out...aapko yaha kisne bulaya??
vasundhara said-humne bulaya hain use...!!
viraj-lekin kyun...???
vasundhara-aap ek baar uski baat to sun lijiye...!!!
viraj stood silent as kaira spoke out...
kaira-viraj humne jo galti kari hain hume pata hain ki wo maafi ke layak nahi hain lekin humne wo majboori mein aake kiya tha...hume wo karna pada tha...aur hum aapse ek aur baat bhi kehna chahte...
!!!
viraj:ab aapne itna bol hi diya hain to wo bhi bol hi dijiye..!!
kaira:viraj humara pyaar jhoota nahi tha...hum aapse sachchi mein pyaar karte hain...lekin hum aapse kabhi keh nahi paaye...
listening this viraj was shocked and turned around...kaira understood it to be a noo and was about to leave whenviraj said
SHAADI KARENGI AAP MUJHSE..??
with that kaira nodded in a yes and hugged viraj...kabir was blowing whistles seeing this while sitting in the mandap...and all the cousins started dancing ...and then finally seeing that saurav proposed dolly and dolly nodded in a yes as somewhere in her heart dolly liked saurav very much...he always stood by her side...always saved her from sumit...aur lo bhai maine teen teen logon ki setting kara di iss part mein...!!! and all of them lived happily ever after...!!!


Edited by premc - 9 years ago