a nibir story- 3 shot part 3 (last part)updated on page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
It has been 2 months and 3 weeks since their contract marriage started And after 1 week , their so called marriage would end, making them free birds, the contract marriage thing has been revealed and kabir and viraj being brothers has also been revealed...the gangwal family decided to seperate them and did so...the were living separately...kabir in viraj's house and nisha in gangwal house ...both of them were missing each other badly...after one week the contract would end ...kabir will leave her...!!!
The night before the revelation of both the things, it was kabir's birthday,both of them were drunk that night ,they couldn't control their feelings towards each other...they came very close to each other, they became one that night!!
Next morning ,when they woke up they saw each other, it was a very awkward moment for both of them but however they talked to each other and decided that they would forget this thing and would continue with the contract marriage,and after that the revelation thing happened...and the gangwal family took nisha away fromthere nisha had been unwell since that day...vomiting, dizziness and all...!!!the family ignored these things...nisha wanted kabir to be with her...she just wanted to cuddle herself in kabir's arms...And be like that for hours and hours...
The gangwal family was very angry with nisha and kabir's deeds and thought of marrying her off to a NRI guy...the next day, the NRI arrived,And the marriage talks were done and was decided that the marriage would happen after two days...nisha was crying badly as how her family could do this to her even after knowing that she loved her kabira only...she decided to talk to that NRI guy...the next day, they both met at a hotel...nisha was About to say that she loved kabir only when that guy started misbehaving with her..he started touching her..She hurriedly started dialing kabira's number when she thought that she would be coming in between his happiness... And she didn't wanted to do that So she had to save herself...!!She kicked him on his legs and hurriedly ran away from there crying...this didn't went unnoticed...viru saw nisha running away from the hotel crying With half teared clothes... He was boiling in anger ...he tried to stop her but couldn't , he saw a guy running behind her...he Understood that this was some serious sort of matter...he had to find it..he had to tell kabir about it..she was his responsibility...kabir was heartbroken after the incident which separated him From his nisha...he left for Delhi for his rehearsals ...viraj tried calling kabir several times...but he didn't pick it up...he hurriedly dialed a number and found about nisha's situation...it was more shocking than he thought..he just wanted kabir to take her out of that house as soon as possible...he had to do something for his brother and his dear wifey...!!!He called kabir once again and this time he picked it up...!
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Klaustrophillic thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
I wrote it for the first time...appreciations as well as rotten tomatoes are welcomed here...do comment if u like it...I thought of making it a single shot but but all of it got deleted..so had to write it again...so here's the first part...hope you like it...!!!tell me whether you want me to continue or not...if you want me to continue it ,will post the next part by tomorrow evening...!!Edited by premc - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yes yes continue...waiting for next part 😳 👏
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Originally posted by: poo10

Yes yes continue...waiting for next part 😳 👏

Thankyou for your support...will post the next part by tomorrow evening
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely... waiting for next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey beautiful start
Plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice start...
Plz continue it...
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Thanxx...for your comments ...will update the next part tomorrow
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Posted: 8 years ago
thats cool!!plz continue😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
intresting😉
waitng 4 the nxt part