PYAAR HAI YA SAZAA .. SidYali VibArth ff [COMPLETED] - Page 18

thanx yaar 😊

i got that in ur previous updates only just didn't ask..

me too swaron forever😃

Vibharth part was not that great, comparing the expectation u had created in 11 th part... And it was short too for vibharth ..

One suggestion.. It appears to me that vibha is likely off the track as teacher since being n love... Esp that last dialogue hook or crook.. Before she seems hesitant and not willing to accept her feelings.. But it is fast.. But it is lovely to read their parts.. Still u can make it part fighting for their love and being possessive and she can make little efforts n explaination but not be desparate to get back to him...

This is my point of view...Jus giving opinion inspired by yr ff...

Uttu and angela.. They made me remember of swayam and Sharon scene.. 

BTW if u r trying put that spice in this story then I m really looking forward for angela character..

Vibhart part was not that great plus it was too short.. 

N niti and Charlie's dad convo was heart touching..!!

Looking forward for roseday..

Tc

its was perfect!! waiting 4 the nxt one!!

Waiting for rose day 😳

Sidyali 

Do make it really special 😉