New Story Ajeeb Prem Kahaani Part 16 last part B updated on page 29 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

call me Sandhya😊
haan mein wahi hoon πŸ˜Š


Ok Sandhya πŸ˜Š

Anjaana Anjaani superb story thanks for such a wonderful story πŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sampa123

Vry nice updt.. Please continue soon. N thanks for the pm


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cute_Saakshii12

Superb update!!
Continue soon!!
And thanks 4 pm!!!



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Posted: 9 years ago
very nice updatee...
continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful story
nice updates
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Kya bat hai Raya ek dosere ke bare Mai hi soch rahe hai and above with little efforts of Priya Neha along with sweet kid Pihu they celebrated am macho birthday. Now again Ram and Vik met with Neha Priya.
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Posted: 9 years ago
waiting for ur update...
pls continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for all the pms 
sorry for late reply .. 

Nice story . .loved it 

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Part 4:

Neha & Priya are in shock, and ram vikram too,ram cant believe that priya is in his arms, both of them lost in eachother eyes, after a while priya comes to reality, lil sternly

Priya : Tu... Tu... Tum, yahan kya karrahe ho, aapko address kisne diya, and am not gonna pay for ur bike damage as I already told u its not my fault

Ram nodding his head , shouts : Will u stop for a while, mujhe apna baath kehne ka mauka do pls jhansi rani,hearing ram priya convo, neha, Vikram come to reality, looks at them, still ram holding priya by her waist, priya still in ram arms,

Priya : Uffo... Stop ur drama, I know aap kyun aaye ho,ab samjme aarahi hai mujhe, dekho wo cake meri order hai aapka nehi, so pls leave

Ram lil irritated tone: arey stop it yaar, pehle meri baath suno, just then pihu comes there crossing her hands towards her chest, looks at ram & priya sternly

Pihu : Hello, pls, aap ye sab baathein baithke bhi baath karsakthe hai, aise yahan doorway mein, iss pose mein baath karne ki jarurat nehi hai...?

Ram & Priya separates from eachother, both try to get back to normal, setteling them selves,

Pihu : Ab bolo kya problem hai aap dono ki...?, Ram looking at her surprisingly, Ram kneels down to her height

Ram very lovingly: hey, Hi!!, Am ram , Ram kapoor, extends his hand for shake

Priya murmuring : name aise bolrahe hai jaise james bond, bond ,,, james bond,..., Ram ... Ram kapoor. With cute antics, Ram noticed that, glared at her

Pihu : hellooo, am pihu, but mein aapko shake hand nehi dungi, kyunki priya ne kahan ki ajnabi se dur rehna chahiye... so no shake hand

Priya sighs and leaves the place saying: Pihu poocho unse ki kyun aaye yahan, aaj hamare liye spl day ladne ki koi mood nehi, jaldi rafadafa karke bhejdo, humein aur bhi kaam hai

Ram fists his hand,gritting his teeth: teri toh... mein baadmein dekhlunga tumhe, filhaal mein bahuth late hogaye hu, so pls mujhe meri dadi se milne do pihu

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Priya : hello... kya kahan aapne... Dadi?, aapko yahan pehle kabhi nehi dekhi meine kisise milne nehi aaye ithni saalon mein, aaj achanak ... drama math karo, aap chor wor toh nehi na.. wait ill call police just then dadi comes there hearing their shouts

Dadi in tears overwhelmed looking at Ram, with so much of love she says: Tum... Tum... Yahan kaise..?

Priya, everyone shocked, Ram steps towards dadi giving winning look to priya, hugs daadi tightly,takes blessings

Ram : Happy Happy Birthday Daadi

Daadi slightly hitting his shoulder : ithni saalon ab yaad yi tumhe daadi dabbu... hearing Dabbu word from dadi everyone controlling their laughter especially Priya, Ram glares at her

Daadi : Dabbu tum aise khaali haath aaye ho... ithne saalon baad mujhe dekhne aaye ho aur mujhe kuch nehi leke aaye tum wo bhi aaj meri janam din... Very bad daadi shows her back to ram

Ram disappointedly bends his head down moves towards daadi, kneels down infront of her

Ram: Am Sorry Daadi, socha toh bahuth kuch tha, ye bday aapke liye spl banana chahtha tha but kuch nehi hopayi... Am Sorry, Ram in tears Seeing ram like this unknowingly priya felt bad, her eyes also filled with tears, Priya steps towards him and place her hand on his shoulder,

Daadi moving her hand on rams hair: arey tum rokyun rahe ho , mein majak karrahi thi, tum aaye ho mere liye wahi kaafi hai, waise bhi meri bday bahuth spl hai harsaal se bhi accha hai, inn sab ne bahuth kuch kiya mere bday pe, Daadi shows gift to ram, Ram overwhelmed felt super happy

Ram shouts : Wow Dadaji pic, ye kiska plan daadi

Daadi : Ye mere bacchon ka plan, ye meri nikuti haina, ye sab jaanthi hai meri khushi kismein hai, mujhe kaise irritate karna, kaise meri teasing karna sab patha hai..

Ram lil confused hearing nikuti word

Ram : Nikuti... Kaun, milna chahtha hu, meri daadi ko khushi dene waale ko spl thanks and ek tight hug dena chahtha hu... hearing this priya shocked

Everyone laughs at ram statement

Neha comes there laughing stands beside priya holding her shoulder: Mr.Ram Kapoor, r u sure about that...?

Ram : Yeah... am very sure why u asking...?

Neha : nehi sochlo iraada badal jaye toh when u get to know abt Nikuti, Priya elbows Neha

Neha : Ouch..., Both Priya & Neha leaves the place

Ram glares at her

Pihu comes to him, forwards her hand towards him : Hiii, Ram.. Ram Kapoor, friends...? Ram laughs at her child antics

Ram : extends his hand but stops in middle : So u wanna be friends with me..? ab aapki priya kuch nehi kahegi kya stranger se shake hand... And all...?

Pihu smiles and nodding her head: nehi ab kuch nehi kahegi kyunki aap amaachi ki pothey ho na... and priya toh amaachi ko bahuth pyar karthi hai... so she don't mind

Ram smiles at her reasoning.. finally they both shake their hands,

Ram : So pihu will u pls tell me who is nikuti? Yahan pe koi mujhe batha nehi rahe hai so pls help me

Pihu laughingly : Arey koi aur nehi Priya he nikuti...Ram looks at priya who playing with kids

Pihu slapps him on shoulder , Ram looks at her

Pihu : Aise gur kya rahe ho... pls unko bolo math ki mein aapki unki nick name bathayi...pls pls

Ram confusedly : Kyun...?

Pihu  : wo isliye kyunki ye unki special name sirf unki special persons he bulana chahiye...so it's a top secret, she signals her hand as T, Ram smiles

Ram : OK done it's a top secret, both shakes their hand, priya calls her

Priya : Princess...Princess.. aajao.., pihu runs from there, Ram looking at priya without blinking

Daadi comes to him, places hand on his shoulder he turns

Ram side hugs her : missed u so much daadi, daadi rubbing his back : me too, both are in tears

Ram makes her sit on couch, he wants make moment lite: Pushpaaa... I hate tears... ye aansu poochlo, dadi laughs playfully slaps on his shoulder : bilkul apne papaaa... She stops there

Ram in low tone : apne papa pe gaya hu na ...both ram & daadi laughing , priya overhears and looks at them she too smiles...

Neha comes to her : kithni khush haina amaachi ram ke saath, face pe smile dekho , sayad isiko kehthe haina family, both neha & priya face turned in to pale a lone tear slipped from priya eyes ... controlling herself

Priya : haan isiko kehthe hai family, just like us, always stay together, laughs together, cry together (priya took a piece of sweet in to her hand, feeds neha saying) anddd... eats together while making her eat she spread the sweet allover neha face, priya laughing loudly, everyone curious about why priya laughing so everyone reach there, looking at neha face everyone burst in to laughter, neha face became red due to anger, she couldn't take it starts to run behind priya to catch her but priya very fast , neha asks vikram to catch priya but vikram failed, neha asks ram

Neha : oye hello... pakado usko...

Priya : helooo... Kisiko mujhe pakadne ki ithni himmath nehi hai... better accept u lost...? showing her thumb in reverse,

All of sudden ram jumps over a table and rolls on floor towards priya , priya stood there in a shock, ram gets up: winks at her holds her both hands back

Ram : nehaa... aajao... jo karna hai karlo abhi

Priya : nooo...its cheating... Neha ... no... please ,,,,, neha took a big piece of cake and stepping towards priya... priya continuously pleading neha & ram

Priya : please mr...mr..kapoor ..please leave me, neha... This is not fair yaar am ur friend & am ur lil sister u cant do this to me...plea...(by that time neha spread cake allover her face),

Neha whispers on priya face : everything is fair between siblings darling... give hifi to ram

Neha : thank u ram, now please leave her & by the way all the best, ram happy but confused why she said all the best, priya slowly open her eyes turns towards ram

Priya : bahuth maaza aaya tumhe mujhe pakdwake...

Ram giving a colgate smile : yeah... Bahuth jyada mazaa aaya...rubbing his palms ,

Priya : hmmm... ab dekho tumhe aur bhi maza chakathi hu... priya anger level reached to top, priya held his collar, pulled his face towards her and rubbed her cake filled face on his face ...

 priya : enjoy... when she turns there amaachi stood entwined hands on her chest, glaring angrily towards priya ...priya starts to explain... amaac... amaachi stops her showing her hand

amaachi : say sorry to ram...

priya : but... Aap pehle sunu toh kya hua then bolo kiski galthi hai kisko sorry bolna chahiye

amaachi firmly : priya... I said say SORRY..., priya unwillingly : Am sorry mr.KAPOOR stressing every letter... turns towards amaachi

amaachi : ram ko leke jaao, wash room dikhao , looks at ram , ram jaao jaake fresh up hojao, ram just nods head

priya murmuring : aise kaise kehsakthi hai amaachi, bina mere baath sune mujhe sorry bolne ko kahan, this is not done, and ye mr.karpur ko chudungi nehi... Ram heard this

Ram : wo isliye kyunki mein unki potha hu, priya stops, ram glares at her

Priya : wash room giving a irritating look

Ram smiles : thank u , can I get a towel please

Priya : yeah ... sure... (priya face all of sudden lite up) why not... pehle aap jaake fresh hojao mein sab thayyar karthi hu... ram leaves the place thinking "pagal ladki hai", priya smiles, meanwhile she washed her face, she waiting near washroom holding towel, priya has a wide smile on her face

Ram shouting : priya... priya...priyaa..., priya suppressing her smile

Priya : haan yehi hu... towel ready hai aap darwaja kholo mein dedungi...she suppressing her laugh

Ram : arey yaar...paani nehi aaraha hai yahan

Priya suppressing her laugh : haaawww... aise kaise.. aap kaunsa wala tap on karrahe ho, left side wali ya right side wali

Ram irritatingly : arey yaar dono mein nehi aaraha hai,

Priya smiling : aise kaise nehi aarahi hai?????

Ram : arey mujhe kaise patha hoga... ohh ... ek minute .. ye sab tumhari plan nehi na...????, ram heard priya laugh

Ram : dekho priya ye accha nehi kiya tumne... yaar pls paani do meri face soap hai, aankhen jalrahi hai pls help

Priya : pehle sorry bolo..

Ram: stomping his feet : tumhe blackmail karne ke liye ye he jagah mili kya...pls paani do

Priya laughingly: nope... pehle sorry bolo then paani

Ram gritting his teeth : OK Sorry... Galthi hogayi tumhse panga liya meine plsss paani do

Priya gives a winning smile : that's like a good boy ... wait on karke aathi hu..

 ram gritting his teeth: arghhh...fisting his both plams , priya back here ram fresh up done waiting for towel

Ram irritatingly : towel milegi ya nehi???? Ya uske liye bhi kuch demands hai aapki????

Priya : haan hai... Ram questioningly : arey yaar... Ab kis baath ki sorry bolna hai mujhe???

Priya : sorry nehi accept karo... Agar wo aapka dadi hai toh hamari bhi amaachi hai, sirf aapka nehi hai humsabka hai????

Ram : grrr... Ok accepted ab please towel mujhe yahan dum ghut rahi hai

Priya : good... Thoda door open karo ill handover towel, ram slightly opens the door and took towel

Ram came out glares at her : U R unbelievable... aise koi karthe hai kya, priya just smiling

Ram : anyways am sorry and I mean it, and accept karraha hu wo sirf mere daadi he nehi aap sabki daadi hai

Priya : Good... Mr.KARPUR... goes from there... ram didn't heard clearly what she said, he again asks

Ram : hey.. stop what u said..., priya turns

Priya : MR.Kapoor... ye haina aapka naam????

Ram : yeah...  

Priya : aapko kya laga?????

Ram : I thought I head u saying mr.karpur...???

Priya : wahi toh kahan meine and runs from there, ram tries to go behind her but stops there smilingly

ram in daadi room, getting ready, he stood infront of the mirror, ruffling his hair, humming something... He stopped and looking without blinking ( remembering what happened few mins back, he remembering how priya rubbed her face ) he closed his eyes ,moving his hand all over his face, feeling her touch, her breathe so close...

here priya too, moving her fingers all over her face ( remembering what she did)

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