New Story Ajeeb Prem Kahaani Part 16 last part B updated on page 29

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Posted: 4 years ago

Kehthe hai "first impression is best impression", lekin agar kisi bhi relationship ek misunderstandings se shuru hotoh wo relationship mein ekdusre pe trust jyada hojathi hai, wahi jab kisibhi relation ship nafrat se shuru hotoh usmein Pyar aise rang lethi hai ki chah ke bhi ekdusre se alag nehi hosakthe wo dono, koi bhi relation ship mein fights jyada hothi toh ye samjho ki unke beech bahuth pyar hai , har fight ke baad ekdusre se aur pyar karne lagthe hai, bahuth bakwas hogayi hai story pe chalthe hai

Pehle introduction karwathe hai hamari asusual koi Ram & Priya ki (koi aur name dungi toh yahan ki saare shareef and innocent bacche violent & Badtameez bacche hojayenge #tongue)

A busy day for everyone, so many vehicles sounding horns waiting  when red signal turns to Green, finally Green signal , everyone gearing like they are going to war, A young man riding bike with headphones plugged in ears, hearing songs (Don't ask which songs etc...),without  knowledge of the surroundings crossing the signal going through the small street at that moment A young lady wearing skyblue salwar collides with biker, biker fell down initially he is very angry on her but when he saw her cute antics of apology holding her ears,her smile, her beauty and her reasoning while gathering his things which scattered on the road, and her continuous apology he is speechless looking at her beauty, and he is floored , he is not at all interested in her apology , she felt strange why he is not reacting so she shook him holding his shoulder, he is out of his trance and saw her name oh her id card and mimes "Priya Sharma"

Priya : hellooo, waving her hands, he is back from shock, he controls himself all of sudden he changes his behavoiur looking at the damage happened to his bike

He : What the hell u Did? Cant u see and cross the road, and do hell with ur apology , who gonna pay for this damage, Priya shocked by this rude behavior

Priya to change her satisavitri mode to Jhansi rani mode: Oye Hello, from past few minutes am telling u what happened exactly and holdon its not my fault its completely ur fault mr..mr.. mr..she stopped

He : Mr.Ram Kapoor

Priya : Ram .. ram kapoor What ever u r, let me tell u am sounding horn but u, u didn't listen and u blindly entered at cross so its not my fault

Ram lil irritated: Oye hello I didn't hear any horn voice, don't lie, just accept and say sorry and pay  for the damage , or else ill lodge complain against u

Priya  steps towards him , grabs his headphones rashly : jab khaano mein aise mothe mothe headphones rakhoge toh kya khaak suneyegi aapko, dimaag hai ya kachra huh...

Ram : Oye mind ur words, and say sorry & pay for the damage

Priya : hellooo don't expect all these ok, agar complaint lodge karni haina chalo chalthe hai yahan pass mein hi hai station chalein

Ram frightened and thinking himself: " arey yaar ye Jhansi rani ko kaise samjhao agar police thak baath gayi toh samjho meri jaan gayi mein toh isko damkane kahan ye ulta padne wala hai"

Ram : oye jhasi rani ladki ho isliye sochrahi hu warna abhitak tumhari khari nehi, waise bhi mein acche hu isliye paise do and sorry bolo , maaf kardungi

Priya totally pissed off: Sorry...huh..., mein acchi hu isliye mein aise he maaf kardiya aapko, and paise kyun du , aapki bike hai toh aap repair karwalo at the same moment Priya Mobile rings, Ram mobile too

Priya : bolo neha

Neha : kahan ho yahan sab waiting ithni derkyun lagrahi hai tumhe

Priya shouts : mujhe kuch kehne dogi ya aise hi bakthi rahogi, neha became silent

Ram : bolo vikram

Vikram: Jaldi aao varna meri band bajegi bahuth pitne wala hu mein pls help me

Priya to neha: Arey mujhe aur time lagega yahan ek ded dimag insaan ko thoda gyan deke aajaungi time pe aajaungi tabtak manage karo

Neha : tumhare saath panga liya ? kaun hai wo Pagal? She laughing, Priya cuts the call

Ram heard what priya said abt him

Ram : oye aajaunga yaar yahan ek sherni jungle ki raastha bhulke city pe aagayi hai unko ghar ki raastha dikhake aajaunga tabtak sambhalo

Priya glares at him angrily, Priya gritting her teeth

Priya taking steps towards him fastly : aapne mujhe Sherni kahan mein jungle se aayi hu, Ram too taking steps towards her

Ram : aur tum mujhe deddimaag kahan wo kya

Again ram & Priya mobile rings, but cut the call looking at the caller id flashing on the screen, Ram snatches priya phone from her hand and dails a number, pRiya shocked tries to snactch the phone but failed

Ram gives back her mobile: meine save kiya tumhari number, Bike ke bill tumhari ghar aajayegi pay kardo, bye Jhansi rani

Priya  sternly : dekthi hu abhi mujhe jaana hai nehi toh aaj aapki khair nehi accha kiya meri number save karke

Both leaves the place taking their vehicles

Edited by joemahika - 3 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
Welcome back di superb start pls continue soon
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Posted: 4 years ago
Originally posted by dhristikpd


Welcome back di superb start pls continue soon

Thank u D
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Posted: 4 years ago
Nice start!!!
Continue sooon!!
Do pm me plzz!!!
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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 2:

 

Priya taunting him continuously while riding her Scooty , Ram too but ram fallen for her, he admiring her beauty  , both reached their destinations taunting eachother

Both parking their two wheeler when both turned, ram & priya facing each other ,both are shocked

Priya in high pitch : U ?

Ram feeling very happy but he didn't forget what happened few hours back,

Ram pointed his finger towards her : U?

Priya lil sarcastically : r u following me? Unbelivable huh...

Ram stops her showing his palm : will u stop , mein pagal nehi hu jo tumhe follow  karu huh.. kabhi shakal mirror mein dekhi nehi , khud ko jaya madhuri samjhrahi ho kya, mujhe bahuth kaam hai tumhare peecha karne ke alawa, he moves from there

Priya stomping her feet : grrr... koi bhi insaan ithni irritating kaise hosaktha hai huh.., whatever now I need to rush nehi toh meri khair nehi aaj

Neha arguing with someguy, Priya notice this rush to her

Neha looking at her felt very lil relieved : Priya thank god u came, kahan thi yaar ithni derse kabse call karne ki try karrahi hu

Priya shouts: Neha... Neha.. stop pehle ye batau tum abhibhi yahan kya karrahi ho, time check nehi ki its getting late come on take the order just leave we need to rush darling

Neha shouts : poori baath sunne ki koshish karogi pls , ek duffer  ne hamari order unki order kehke lene ke liye argue karrahe hai yaar mujhse its disgusting

Priya : kaun hai wo , ithni himmath, neha drags priya with her

Neha pointing fingers towards that guy: yehi hai wo

Guy extending his hand: Hi! Am Vikram

Neha Slaps on his extended hand,Vikram takes back his hand "Ouch"

Neha: Vikram ho ya kisi Bandar humein kya chup chap hamari order humein dedo warna, Priya stops her

Priya : See Mr.Vikram, pls ye hamari order hai so pls humein dedo aapko koi confusion huyi hai pls check once , filhaal humein derhorahi hai pls excuse us, Priya very politely takes the Box which is in vikram hand and tries to leave the place

Vikram stops: Hey Hellooo, Stop , Neha gets irritated, look back gives a angry look, vikram steps back, Priya keep her hand on Neha shoulder

Priya : Whats ur problem MR.Vikram, am telling u na its not ur order ,

Vikram: Hello Pls hold on I called my frnd he is the on the way, he is the one who ordered the cake ,So pls wait , once he came all confusion get clear , Am telling u its not urs yaar its my Order

Priya uffs : Ok Mr, If u think its gonna happen no issues ill wait for 5mins more, but after 5min we will leave call ur frnd right now, Vikram goes to make a call at that moment  Ram enters

Vikram : Thank god ram tum aagaya, Hearing Ram name Priya felt strange, she is very curious to look at the man but vikram covering his face

Finally Vikram &Ram comes to Priya & Neha

Priya eyes popped in high Pitch: Tum? Not again

Ram too: Wahi toh Not again, subah subah mein kiski shakal dekha hu yaar poora din isika chehar milrahi hai jahan bhi jao wahan huh... Disgusting

Priya pointing finger towards him: Oye mind ur words

Ram reluctantly: leave it ab kya problem hai tumhari

Priya : Problem meri nehi tumhari ye pagal dosth ki hai kabse ratt lagake laga ki ye cake order aapka hai jo ki hai nehi , priya turns her face

Ram sarcastically: Hello madam, meri taraf dekho ek baar ye order hamara hai meine khud order kiya chocolate ruffle flavor hai wo, so pls ye rowdy darbar kahin aur dikhao yahan nehi ye meri order hai

Priya : So what yaar I too ordered same flavor cake it doesn't mean that every chocolate ruffle cake is urs very disgusting

Ram lost his patience: ithna argue kyun karrahi ho tum, ek baar box open karke dikhao sab clear hojayegi na

Priya sternly: Why should I yaar, I know its my order then, u too have some confusion

Ram totally pissed off: abhi tum box open karrahi ho ya jistarah phone number liya usstarah ye box bhi cheenke check karu , and then don't blame me when cake get spoil, choice is yours saying this ram lifts his hands up

Priya : so u giving warning , Whats the proof yaar this is ur ordered, its ok leave it , ill open the box, not coz u asking but coz am getting late I don't want to waste time arguing with brainless ppl huh...

Priya opens the cake box, Ram shocked

Ram mimes a Sorry: Sorry , pehle dikhadethi toh ithna sab kuch nehi hotha na, ithni ziddi kyun ho yaar tum, Priya in tears she don't wanna reply him

Just she wipes her tears,

Priya : chalo neha derhorahi hai, she leaves the place Ram felt very bad, seeing priya in tears,

Ram Scolds Vikram, runs behind Priya to manofy her,

Priya in call with someone, she is speaking very sweetly,

Priya : Yes dear am on the way , love u take care, Ram shocked hearing her convo

Priya looks back , frowning eyebrows, sarcastically: What?

Ram too : Mein pagal hu ki tumhe sorry bolne aaya, mujhe laga tum upset ho, lekin nehi madam toh yahan pe sweet sweet baathein karrahi hai huh...

Priya feeling strange: Hello whats ur problem, meine poocha aapko sorry bolne ko, Ram interrupts

Ram : wahi toh mein pagal hu jo tumhari aansu ki drama dekhke aagaya tumhare peeche peeche

Priya folding her arms with a smile: yes theek kahan, accept kiya na aap pagal ho, good happy realization, priya steps towards her scooty and drives off

Ram stand there in shock

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Posted: 4 years ago
Nice beginning!!!!
Pl continue soon.
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Posted: 4 years ago
Very sweet nok-jok loved it pls continue soon
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Posted: 4 years ago
wooww... wonderful start...
very nice concept
raya ladte hua b bade ache lagte hain...
priya kisko call kia??
good going...
continue soon 
thanks for pm..
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