New Story Ajeeb Prem Kahaani Part 16 last part B updated on page 29 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
ufff raya and their nok jhonks..loved it. maja aa gaya. pl continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sweet noke jhoke,,,vikram ka itna attitude vo bhi pehli mulaqat me neha se panga leliya,wha!!!!aur priya itni si bath keliye rorahi hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update!!!
Continue soon!!!
And thanks 4 pm!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
New story yipee
Both the part was awesme
in first meeting of Raya started with arguing and ended with fight
and again through second meeting along with Neha Vik ended with fight only
will be interesting to see wat happen next continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story
you back with bang yaar. Love raya nok jok.
Plz continue soon.
Thank's 4 pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful story...
I love d way u wrote
their nok joke.. fighting etc
at first sight ram fall for priya
very nice.. Thnx for d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read both the parts in one go...
Ram fell for her but even then he fights with her...
Clever Priya... Finally she made him accept that he is a pagal... Great...
Please continue soon...
Thanks for PM😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

here is the update 


Part 3:

Ram stompping his feet in irritation: how disgusting, ye ladkiyon ki copyright act hai kya harbaath pe rona, logon ko sentiments se maardethe hai ye ladkiyan, do aansu waste karo saamne walon se sympathy paao, and waise bhi ismein rone wali baath hi kya hai, saying all this ram turns back by then vikram stood there smilingly

Ram gets irritated by vikram : kya hai bey, kyun hasrahe ho, aaj tumhari wajahse mujhe ye sabkuch jhelna pada, and haskyun rahe ho ill kill u , ram hold vikram neck,after a while vikram somehow manage to get out of from ram grip

Vikram moving his neck to side to side : waise ram ithni irritated kyun ho, ithni impatient kyun ho jab wo ladki rorahi thi, Ram glares at vikram

Ram: matlab kya tumhara?

Vikram putting button to ram shirt: matlab ye hai ki kya kuch kuch hua kya? Vikram pointing his finger near ram heart

Ram slaps on vikram hand, and twists vikram hand , now vikram back facing to ram,

Ram : jyada filmein dekhna bandh karo, usiki asar hai ye sab , kuch vuch nehi hai, meri wajahse koi sad ho wo mujhe manjoor nehi, by then ram leaves vikram

Vikram setting his shoulder: then kya , aise bhaag aaye ho uske peeche jaise koi apne ko kuch hua

Ram didn't hear what vikram said, he is in deep thoughts, vikram shakes him

Vikram : kya sochrahe ho?

Ram : priya ke baaremein ..., matlab kais eek pal mein apni mood change ki usne, means wahan ithni upset hogayi jaise kuch unhoni huyi ho, and with in sec yahan phone pe kisiko love u kehrahi hai, how strange na patha hai mujhe kya lagarahi hai bhagwan jab ye ladkiyon ko banathe waqt  harkisiko dimaag ke saath saath  ek ek tank bhi install karke bheja hoga hamesha tank full hothi hai , instantly aajathe hai aansu huh...

Vikram : ahem.. ahem... ram looks at him

Vikram : tune ek din bahuth jaan liya yaar ladkiyon ke baaremein very impressive

Ram : hahaha very good joke, lekin hasi nehi aarahi hai am just irritated am concerned tensed abt her, and she telling love u in phone & more over all this she called me mad huh...

Vikram: ram mere bhai mujhe ye batao tumhari problem kya hai priya kisiko love u boli wo ya tumhe pagal bola wo??? Pls clear karo

Ram tries to tell something but vikram interrupts, vikram noticed that bike damage

Vikram in shock : Ram what happen to bike, ithni damage kaise hua yaar

Ram : yaar ye bhi wo priya ki wajahse hua, u just chill I got her number, I told her that ill send bill to her

Vikram : she accepted?

Ram : no yaar ziddi hai maanne ko tayyar hi nehi uski galthi hai, usko patha nehi mein kithni ziddi hu, paise toh usiko pay karna hai

Here priya & neha on the middle of the way neha on back seta holding cake box, priya lil upset & lost in her own world, neha observed this , tries to cheer up her

Neha : arey priya ab chodo na ithni upset kyun ho, waise bhi sirf box open kiya just that, don't be upset

Priya wiping her tears with one hand; its not about box open and all, its about my emotions and my surprise to my special person though they don't know that this box already opened,still it hurts ,tumhe toh patha haina meri ye iccha thi , meri surprise hai ye, kisiko bhi nehi bathayi meine cake ke baaremein not a single thing even I didn't told abt the flavor, but ye so called ram kapoor, poora chaupat kardiya kabhi mila na toh chodungi nehi upar se dekha nehi kaise react kiya parking lot huh... disgusting

Between all these talks Priya & neha reached their destination: Kasturibaa Old age & orphanage home

All children with flowers, bouquets, came running towards Priya & Neha, a lil girl came forward and kept her hands on her hips lil angry too

Priya & neha understood what they gonna face now, so immediately they both hold their ears

Priya : am sorry, thodi si late huyi, wo cake shop mein late huyi but we reached before time na so pls maaf kardo, lil child still glaring at her angrily

Priya : yaar this is not fair pihu pls with a puppy face, lil child smiles

Priya bends down, folds her hands : meri maa ab chalein bahuth derhorahi hai

Lil girl with a sweet smile catching priya folded hands : meri maa nehi meri princess kaho, hugs Priya, priya too responds

Neha : hello drama queens chalein bahuth derhorahi hai , all headed towards a room

A old lady standing near window holding rails in deep thoughts, Priya felt very bad looking her like that, but composes herself and give signal to kids to start

All kids at once : HAPPY BIRTHDAY AMMACHI, Ammachi turns back, she is totally surprised all kids runs towards her with balloons, flowers, chocolates, all at once hugs her, finally priya & neha goes to them

Priya & Neha : Chalo Baccha party get ready for surprise, Ammachi looks surprised

All kids dispersed from there and they stood there with some plycards in their hands, Priya blindfolds ammachi and takes her to the centre of the room, Priya winks to baccha party, all kids understood and they held plycards such a way that it formed a image, priya unfolds , Ammachi totally overwhelmed by the cake and the image on the plycards, she is so touched ,

Ammachi looks at priya : Thank u so much for making my bday so special and thank u so much she hugs priya tightly, she became very emotional, priya too in tears, after a while both back to normal

Priya : whats this ammachi today urs bday we all in super mood, wipes ammachi tears, be happy bday baby, chalo ab cake cut karthe hai, cake cutting all done , every one enjoying , dancing and singing songs for Ammachi, ammachi dancing with them, Priya & neha taking snaps

Ammachi  tired, she came back to priya & neha, priya gives camera to neha and sit beside ammachi encircling her hands on ammachi neck,

Ammachi kissing priya hands: thanks darling, making my bday so special, the cake and the decoration on the cake its too good, bilkul jaise hi tha jaise meri shauhar karthe the am so touched

Priya wiping her tears: kya ammachi aap firse senti baathein karrahi ho, mujhe ye bolo aapko cake acchi lagi ya phir oh plycards pe photowale, bolo bolo , priya winks

Ammachi blushing, Priya signals neha to click the pic, when flash light appears ammachi shocked and glares at them unbelievable,

Ammachi holds priya ears: Badmaash, aise baath karthe hai kya koi apne ammachi se,

Priya wincing in pain: ammachi pls chodo na bahuth dard horahi hai, pls ok am sorry.. sorry..

Ammachi leaves her ear and hugs, Pihu comes there keeping her hands on hips

Pihu : hello koi mujhe bathaye ga ki yahan kya horahi hai?

Priya & ammachi smiles

Priya bends down: celebrating darling, joy of happiness,

Pihu : celebrations ...? Sirf inke saath huggie wuggie kyun...?

Ammachi : oye daadiamma, meri nikuti (pulling priya cheeks) ne ithna saara arrangements kiya mere liya mein happy toh hogi na , usko kuch jyada milna chahiye na isliye huggie

Neha & Pihu looks at each other : Haawww, aapko ye kisne bathaya ye sab ye nikuti akeli kiya,hamara kya? Mehnath ki humne aur huggies, wuggies milrahi hai unko huh...

Priya laughs at her childish antics, goes to her hugs: meri pyari princess, yahan kuch bhi mera tera nehi hai sab hamara hai, and aap sabke bina ye mein kabhi nehi karpathi hu na ,so all credit goes to all of us, don't be upset,gives a peck on pihu cheeks

Pihu smiles at her : aapko sachi lagrahi hai mein upset hu, mein toh tease karrahi hu aap dono ko,

Ammachi: bahuth jyada badmaash hogaye ho

Neha : wo toh hogi na kiske saath dosthi hai inki the great priya Sharma se toh thoda toh asar hogi na, priya & pihu gets angry, both tries to hold neha, but neha super fast she running all over the house

Priya & pihu behind her , both trying to catch neha but every time she is escape, playing catch catch three of them reached the door way, as door closed neha stood there, Pihu & priya felt very happy, now she cant escape from them, priya very close to neha just then some one opened the door, neha falls down, priya didn't noticed who stood there on the doorway she goes to catch neha but her leg slips , Neha safely landed in vikram arms, and priya landed in Ram arms.

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Posted: 9 years ago
wonderful update.
amachi ka bday kitna mast celebrate kiya priya aur neha ne. woow... yaha b pihu. too cute
mujhe pm karo na next time se.
pl continue jaldi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
another one awesome update yaar love raya and little princess thanks for pm continue soon