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...-Riya-...

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Posted: 11 years ago

These Oneshots have been written by Mona aka dear10.😃 This is her very first attempt at writing. I am posting them on behalf of her.

Index

OS 1

Part 1 - Pg 1
Part 2 - Pg 1
Part 3 - Pg 9

OS 2

Page 11

OS 3 - Biji ki wapsi

Part 1 - Page 15
Part 2 - Page 17

OS 4 - Secondary School

Page 18

OS 5- Sarpanch ka Punch

Part 1- Page 19

Part 2- Page 23

Oneshot 1

Part 1

Sabko pata chal gaya ki baldev is manjulikas son n bansuri take him because she want boy kyunki ghar ki sari zaydaad balwant ke father ne apne useless bete balwant ke puttar ke naam ki thi agar uska puttar nahi hota to property gurudwara trust main chali jati manjulika ka ek beta pehle hi tha to usne bhi lalach main aker apna puttar bansu ko de diya😲

Manjulika ab bimar hai or uske paas jyada time nahi or uska bada beta mentally ill hai to usne socha ki wo marne se pehle sukku ki zimmedari apne ger zimmedaar puttar ko dekar chali jaungi 😒

Ab manjulika marr gayi n baldev apne pagal veerji ko lekar balwant house le aaya jiska pagal pan badhta hai raakstaar ka saya saya song sunke darasal wo pagal hi ye song sunke hua

Once upon a time veerji balwant house aaye or gaane lage saya saya saya hoon douda douda aaya hoon tabhi sukku doud kar aata hai or gamla utha ke veerji ka sarr phod deta hai every one is shock😲

To be continued

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 2

Every one is shock veerji apna sarr pakad ke zameen par gir gaye gunjan chillai ranviii bansuri chillai mera gamla balwant ne danta tumko gamle ki padi hai sukku ne tumhare damaad ka sarr phod diya uski chinta nahi pata bhi hai kuch party main dj wale kitne pese lete hai agar ranvi ko kuch ho gaya to baki ki party main koun gayega sukku chilla raha matt ga matt ga sabne use pakda or room main band kar diya

Chaiji ro rahi chilla rahi veerakdi tu kitthe hai

Veera apne room main hai or usne tez volume karke gana laga rakha hai mahiya n ankhiyo ka mixture taki koi usko or baldev ko disturb na kare mahiya session ke time veera to baldev tennu ki laga ye party maine sukku veerji ke liye di hai ye party to maine sabko vyast karke tere naal waqt bitane ke liye di hai she is romancing with her husband or wo kiss karne hi wali thi ki bansuri zor zor se darwaza peetne lagi finally moment broke n ballu ne song bang kiya or darwaza khola

Baldev- kya hua biji ghar main aag lag gayi kya kyun darwaza peet rahi ho

Veera- haan kya hua

Bansuri- nahi aag nahi gamla toota hai

Baldev gamla

Bansu- puttar tere veerji ne veera ke veerji ke sarr se gamla phod ditta ab ranvi behosh hai use aspataal le gaye hai

Veera baldev rush to hospital

Gunjan accusing baldev

Aap itthe kyun aaye ho aapke veerji ne mere ranvi ka ki haal kiya aap nu koi ahsaas hai ab mere makeup ka ki hoga koun pese dega uske

Baldev - gunjan veerji bimar hai unka ilaaz chal raha hai

Doctor bahar nikla

Veera doctor ki hoya mere veerji ko wo theek hai na veera crying

Doctor

Agar inko subah tak hosh nahi aaya to inka bachna mushkil hai

Aap log koshish kare inko hosh main laane ki ab humare hanth se sab nikal gaya

Every one start crying sab ranvi ke room main ghus gaye tabhi veera ko idea aaya or usne chaiji se bola ki chaiji laddu banake lao

Chaiji laddu banake layi sab uthane ki koshish kar rahe but no fayda

Veera laddu veerji ki naak ke aage rakhti hai but no asar

Tabhi gunjan bench par beth kar rone lagi or gaane lagi

O rabba o rabba o rabba

Tabhi veerji ki ungli hila sabne notice kiya or sab gaane lage o rabba o rabba dil ki duhai sun peeer parai sun o rabb veerji ko dream aaya ki baldev uske laddu chheenke bhaag raha veerji chillake uthe

Baldevvv chhad mere laddu nu mere laddu na le

Ese veerji ko hosh aaya

Doctor

Ab ye khatre se bahar hai Kal inko aap ghar le jana

Aapke pyaar vishwas or o rabba ne inki jaan bacha li

To be continue

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...-Riya-...

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Posted: 11 years ago

I am forever your pankhi, Monakdi.🤣
*Bows before you*😆

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SereneWorld

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Posted: 11 years ago

This is damn hilarious🤣

Well done Mona its awesome🤗

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SereneWorld

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Posted: 11 years ago

Im Your Phanki too now🤗

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...-Riya-...

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Posted: 11 years ago

I want an update 2mrw as well.

Suma..check again.😆

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wowmoon

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Posted: 11 years ago

🤣 🤣 Hilarious man !

Monakdi 🤗 Jhu are AWESOME 🤗

Apka pehla autograph mennu chahiye 😛 plse 😳 - yur Rekhakdi

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MaaneetDeewangi

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Posted: 11 years ago

OMG this is EPIC 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

I can't stop laughing so freaking hilarious 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Mona you should write more you're awesome 👏 🤣

Thanks for sharing Riya 🤗

This made my day 😆

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...-Riya-...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...-Riya-...

Every one is shock veerji apna sarr pakad ke zameen par gir gaye gunjan chillai ranviii bansuri chillai mera gamla balwant ne danta tumko gamle ki padi hai sukku ne tumhare damaad ka sarr phod diya uski chinta nahi pata bhi hai kuch party main dj wale kitne pese lete hai agar ranvi ko kuch ho gaya to baki ki party main koun gayega sukku chilla raha matt ga matt ga sabne use pakda or room main band kar diya

Aap itthe kyun aaye ho aapke veerji ne mere ranvi ka ki haal kiya aap nu koi ahsaas hai ab mere makeup ka ki hoga koun pese dega uske

To be continue

Bold: Some of my fav bits from Part 2.🤣