RagNa TS: Obsessive Love 6th shot 4 Final Part Pg43 (No PMs) 28/10

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abxetz

@abxetz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Nice update 😛 ye Priya 😡 😡 rags ko kya zaroorath dhi usse support karnai ki 😆 😆 vaisai galthy kalpi ki hai 😉 par humai kalpi ki side lena hai oops ab posessive lover mai hu 😆 😆 😉

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Saumya

@SamBricka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

nice update Eri.. But i hate this Kali.. She is so mean.. Raghav is a darling.. Finally ragna got married..

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Erika

@roni_berna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: charvi3
Wonderful update dear
Kalpi is so possissve about raghav
They are like a different pole...
Update next part soon dear

Thanks dear 😊

Kalpi and Raghav are quite different and their married life will be facing many ups and downs as well.

Will update the next part soon 😳

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ayesha khan

@Fly2TheStars

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

its amazinggg

kalpi is soo possesive

ragna got martied yay

wonderfull updated the next part soon :D

Edited by ayesha.khan - 10 years ago

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mattieram

@mattieram

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Posted: 10 years ago

#175

What is the deal with Kalpi and the servant Priya? Why is Kalpi so insecure? Where is the strong, kind, and independent Kalpi?

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Great update. But Priya was spying to. But kalpi needs to be less possessive.

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Skyfalls

@Skyfalls

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Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Lol...I'm scare of this Kalpi ...heheh she 's so egotistical 😆😆 + she 's a sicko & a threat poor Raghav have to deal with her tantrum 😆😆

Edited by GUYCAN - 10 years ago

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Erika

@roni_berna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: mattieram
What is the deal with Kalpi and the servant Priya? Why is Kalpi so insecure? Where is the strong, kind, and independent Kalpi?

Kalpi is quite different from the strong and independent Kalpi we have seen and this Kalpi has negative traits. I wrote this story as it had only 6 shots and so I took the risk of portraying a Kalpi with grey shades.

Kalpana in my story is a girl who has lived in riches and has been pampered a lot and to some extent her upbringing, environment, friends and family are responsible for this as she always believes in what she has seen. She has seen that her dad was cheated by an employee which made her think bad about all poor people.

Kalpana is open about her thoughts and does not wear a mask of pretending to be goody goody in front and back stab. She is not perfect but she does has feelings for Raghav and her family and is not exactly insecure but is possessive abut Raghav and wants him for herself only. Priya has feelings for him because of which Kalpana hates her as she believes that only she has that right while Priya according to her wants his money.

Kalpana is not independent as she has got everything served in a silver platter and has never required to work for that. Here Kalpi is selfish, self centered and a brat but there is a positive Kalpi also within her which Raghav wants to see as he knows only his own sweet and innocent Kalpana but Kalpana hasn't recognized her positive side until now.

Always it had been Kalpi who was giving, sweet and good while Raghav was arrogant and was making Kalpi listen to his wrongs and rights and compromise while in my story it is completely the opposite side and what you wanted Kalpi to be, Raghav is exactly that. 😳😆

Kalpi will definitely turn positive and independent at the end of this story as just two parts are remaining. Sorry if you haven't like my portrayal of this Kalpi but I still love her 😳

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Erika

@roni_berna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: GUYCAN
Lol...I'm scare of this Kalpi ...heheh she 's so egotistical 😆😆 + she 's a sicko & a threat poor Raghav have to deal with her tantrum 😆😆

Thanks dear 😳

Kalpi is a bit dangerous but till you don't eye her Raghav, you're safe 😛😆

Raghav will definitely have a tough time and I can feel for him 😆