FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 4 (Chap 24 page1 07/04/15) updated - Page 118

Originally posted by: savindi.db

wow..superb..awesome chapter dr..realy loved it...update soon..eagerly waiting for the next chapter...plzzz don't take much time to update😭ok👍🏼thanks for the pm..update soon...

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

What an update !! ❤️
Absolutely akdhalicious.
>> Nanuu..

I simply loved how the little misunderstandings were cleared so quickly. It didnt take long this time.
Awww Jalal's worry of how he'll make up to her this time. 'Last time she was hurt she was hell bent on resigning.. this time toh' .. Wait Jalal.. Lemme tell you this time she's far away from that idea.! Ahem. All thanks to the brimming chemistry between you both off late. 😛 😉
>> haa.. now the situation is totally different.. how can she even think of moving away from him?? 😆

Hayye! The bold moves by Jalal. Asking for lunch date.. trying to manaofy her during lunch.. trying to make her all comfy and relieving her of all worries ... giving her a hard time while caressing her hands! Uff!
Jo is no lesser. Shes making it hard for him to control himself with all those intoxicating smiles and pouty lips.
>> both have same effect on each other darling.. 😆

Also, I had a nice time laughing out loud with the hilarious bits. Moving crab 🤣 but loved the line .. 'Time to restore your skills Jodha' 😳
>> 😆

Loved the update. Last lines were dreamy ❤️ Loved them! Thats how shes special. Thats how shes different.
>> Yeah.. finally madam understood that she's special 😉

Love love love these joJa. Waiting for next update impatiently. Do update soon please 😡
>> update mat poocho 😆

Originally posted by: geeta.M

Wow Jahnu thank u so much dear for this unexpected update🤗.. I was amazed when I saw ur pm...

PBD is very close to my heart... I am madly in love with this story.
>> Hey Geeta.... aww.. very excited to know that you're madly in love with this story..

Enjoyed it to the core... Read many times.
>> thanks dear..

 Wat an update 👏Many wow moments..

Jalal is mad at his friend for making the situation worst between him and his beloved..

Their first date...
>> yep.. I too enjoyed writing that part.. 😳

' Lowered head with locks of hair kissing his forehead,mischievous eyes smiling at her...I know this man'

Oh! It was very close... Y didn't u reveal the Goa incident...hope our jo will find out soon.
>> because the story sequence is planned and its not yet time for Goa thing 😆

This date  brought them  really close.., his care towards her Superb

and the last part is simply mindblowing .

Continue soon.. And pls update asap..

>>will continue soon dear.. and thank u for ur wonderful thoughts 😳

Originally posted by: selvi1275

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Beautiful update Jahnavi... Indeed a pleasant surprise ...glad ur back from vanavasam..
>> Thank u Sudha.. did the update come on expected date?? 😆

U hooked me up till the last line ... those last lines were just awesome...

That jealous kutty AMM... haaaww  am  roffling
>> haa.. poor AMM.. 😆

Peddammas brother's wife's cousins sister-in-law and husband  coming on Sunday...  me roffling again...  haha he..
>> he he.. 😆

She was making excuses and avoiding whom dear ... it s Jalal ... he he... 

She have no choice but to accept  his dinner date...
>> rightly said.. if she knows how to deny he knows how to make her bend

Finally all the petty misunderstandings cleared up... feeling relief n happy

Loved every bit of their conversation .. ".Idiot sounds better than Sir "...

Mr Chill bill for all & Mr kill bill for Jo "
>> So many names na.. she couldn't resist, what to do 😆

Always loved the undercurrent humor in ur writings  ..
>> Thank u dear.. light hearted humor will make it more pleasurable to read na.. so I try to keep it that way wherever possible

 I must say Jahnavi... u r good at writing emotional n senti scenes too .. feeling choked while reading jodha's pet name discussion..

'No one calls me meenu' the moment she stilled  and her inner fears... brought tears to my eyes..
>> Awee.. thanks Sweetie.. 😳.. glad u are connected to the characters 😳😳😳

Jalal genuinely cares for her... caresses too... aaww loved it totally

 

Desperately waiting for the next chapter ... if possible plz update soon

>> thank u so much for patiently waiting for updates Sudha.. I too want to be regular.. but u know na 😆

Originally posted by: devikamahankal

Jahnvi Di jahnvi Di

Kaha se likhna shuru karu,

U know what the whole chapter was such a treat, a different 

Emotion in each line,

Quote karungi to pata nahi kitne post ho jaenge😆

Prithvi is a cool cop !! He z adorable ,everyone Abdul 

N prithvi having fun at jalal' s expense😛

Waise good, coz jalal does the same to my jodha

😉

Taming a tigress,

Friends,too wicked to endure

A woman,too wild to tame

Rofl

😆

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

And yeah... tears rolled down my cheeks while reading the pet name part... :( Everytime theres mention of her painful loss, tears become unstoppable!

Originally posted by: devikamahankal

Jodha is perfect  in erring🤣

Jodha angering with baba, why jalal never errs

50 year old neighbor who is 100% mad,

Ohh god!!

I was laughing my heart out 😆😃

N my mom was like what has got into me

🤪
>> he he.. 🤣.. hope she's not horrified 😆

Awww jalal asking her out

N jodha 's excuses though, poor girl pretending to be upset

😆

Jodha' s reason for not ordering food any more

😆

Did this incident happen with you actually??😉

Ab to please Goa incident reveal kar do please.

>> it didn't happen to me re.. and Goa... uff.. thoda sabar kar

Originally posted by: devikamahankal

When are jalal and jo going to Delhi?

Jalal told jodha about he knowing Tamil

But jodha didn't tell him abt that wonderla incident,

That she knew he was protecting her😭

Jalal trying best to manofy jodha.,

But this girl is 🤪 

Tough way for jalal 

Ahead😉

Meenu, ahh n that soulful conversation

I wish someday jalal and jodha have this conversation 

About jodha her parents and her relation with Gautam.

Jalal touched by jodha' s concern for his injury,

N he cares about her in his own sweet way.

Jealous marketing manager👏

(Sorry for being vindictive here)

😉

You know what jhanvi Di,

Best part was jodha' s realization.

That she is indeed special to him

❤️ 🥳

Thank you for the super duper best mast awesome

Loveliest update🤗

Update super soon

Originally posted by: meeramiss18

Congo 4 new thread akka😊 And the update was awesome plz update soon 😉