Tormenting Mr. Gangster #2||CHap 44 Pg104 [SanDhir] - Page 44

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Posted: 10 years ago
superbly written zubi and seerat
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Posted: 10 years ago
Atlast you updated
Its so late bt its worth waiting
The chapter was great..
Atlast sabki story bahar aagai
Loved the update... 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
👏Superb superb wow wow wow...😆
Very indepth n can c the randhir pain 😭

Next sanyu will b in action... mrs.gangster thenn 😊
Gud luck girls .. waiting fr more...

luv
nithu
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: misssmily

I AM THE FIRST ONE TO LIKE ! WHAT DO I GET ? 😛

And omg, between us the chapter is quite long !

Thanks Seerat and myself 😆



Seerat yaar at the end of the chap your blushing emoticone cracked me up... what were you thinking that got you bothered like that 🤣



just because woh icon bhut cute h...and it turns red lol like some chem reaction... hahah i knw right i was actually not thinking anythin...
hahahlong but its only 3.7k words...we hv had longer ;)

u get a hug ...

haha
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my! I am so glad that the secrets are revealed. I loved the way sanyukta and vidushi tackled with Sahil! Awww! Poor him.
I feel contented! Yay!
The scene where sanyukta blushed reminiscing his way of stealing those bank transation papers. Wow! That scene in the previous chaps was so naughty! Can't ever forget it! :v
Also, his emotions were depicted in the best way possible, ever! I mean it!
Can't wait to see them all killing that stingy piece of an as* and making him beg under their mercy.


Gun di, Zubi di, you two are just so good at this.
This story is the epitome of sandhir fictions!
You guys don't know, but are growing this story with a crazy fan! And I am a huge crazy fan of you guys!


Keep writing please please please,
Love you both,
Karishma. :* <3

PS- I'M FROM WATTPAD, HOPE ANYONE RECOGNIZES ME!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting part
Nice background info
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww Zubi n Seerat
I would like to engulf u both in a tight hug 🤗
Finally the secrets r unveiled
I wanna give a comment longer than ur update :)
But I'm indeed spellbound...
The way u guys depicted each n every feeling is fantabulous
The update was so touching
Each and every character is well portrayed
Amazing, lovely, magnificent piece of writing
I'm fumbling with words to describe the update
Randhir, a sweet heart was forced to become a gangster due to Raghav's deeds...
Raghav, a brute,the biggest culprit is gonna be attacked by the team
Waiting for that special update...
And I really don't know how to or wat to comment more than this..
But i wanna comment more..

Thx for Pm
Update soon...

Love
Chandu
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dear. another cracking update dear. d way u both has written this ff I must say no one in this forum can compete with u. amazing n marvelous piece of writing dear. d sanyu who all of us wanted to b strong n independent which we didn't get in our show we get it through ur ff. sanyukta hidden motive behind raghav has been out. she is a gem who involved in this thing not for herself. she is in thus mess coz to give someone Justice. she is not doing for money or something else. she is selfless. n on other hand rds gang story was quite heartwrenching. specially rd past he has lost his mother, hid house, his everything coz of raghav. how can anyone can do anything with someone. he has kill rd parrent. destroyed there house. rd was so hurt recalling his past but sanyu is there to heal his pain. they haven't confessed there feeling to each other but there eye n action speak a lot. now sandhir ll together give raghav what he deserve. do update soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all, i am delighted to see such lenghtly, full of praise comments, thanlks a lot guys !!!! 😊 😳 😊 😳 😊 😳 😊

Annoucemement :

Pmz are getting hard to send with the increasing number of fan and also being two writers it's not easy to know who sent to whom, who received it two times, who didn't receive it all and who does not care lol...

well you got it, its complicated ! 😕

So we've created a joint account from where pmz will be sent : ZuSee. 😳

To all who want pms we invite you to like the first part of the FF on the first thread, here is the link :
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4219447/ff-tormenting-mr-gangster-chap-29-pg-140

You will then receive a buddy request.

Thanks for facilitating our life 😆

Love
Seerat n Zubi ⭐️
Edited by misssmily - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
We will be awaiting ur response... :)
Edited by Gunseerat - 10 years ago

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