Originally posted by: Aditi_28
I think I've died and gone up to heaven...that's what it feels like!
No words come to me now, I think I'll reserve this and come back soon.
RES.
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UNRES.
So, I came back :P
Yaaayyy!
Did you mean the wise old men wala Casper? :O
Ummm no I meant Casper the friendly ghost wala Casper.😆
*jumps up and down in glee*
So...I still don't know my favourite part because I loved it all beyond words!
I have brought out my copy of Khalil Gibrain's works to pursue after exams :P
The parallel was another amazing thing. You know, I've had this notion - ends should mean peace. They should give satisfaction and yet the promise of a new dawn.
That's exactly what you have done here. All the small parts, including the new couples (J-K, K-S), Nisha's hesitation, her journey to the new beginning, Viraj's thoughts, the humour interspersed in between via Kabir, I absolutely loved everything!
Lakshita was amazingly cute, and I felt like Viraj was a changed man with her. Trust me, I can go on and on. The best part was the parallel. Yes, the rain...it holds so many emotions for those who can feel them. The poem brought them out soo beautifully!
Ok, I've begun to repeat it :P
And I've probably said a lot too :P
But yeah, please don't give up writing, and whenever you write next, I request a chance to read it.
Duh!😆
The end of an epic, are the only words that come to me now.
This was wonderful, amazing, fabulous, outstanding...read all the adjectives here :P
I loved this story and I love you! ❤️
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