Originally posted by: chinudolly
βοΈhello dear well i m a silent reader of the wonderful stories of this forum , n trust me uriters are just awesome , i mean i just read this whole story n i m in love wid it , i have read some chapters before n now read the left chapters , they are superb , m speechless , really very beautifully written , u wont believe i m reading stories from 3hours n couldnt stop myself until i finish reading it
all chapters are superb ,some are emotional too , but really beautiful π³and kabir's phrases n intelligence socked meπ, phrases , shloks n all my god , never read suh kind of stuff , really creative thinking of ursgreat story ,niraj are always awesomei love niraj so very muchi have even read ur ss "not an object of pity " but coldnt comment on it as i m quite busy so dont come ol regularlythat ss was also wonderful and so amazing , i loved that toowell this applaud is for uπ πππβοΈ super duper awesome blossom story π³loved it from starting till the end , π³π³loved the ending so much , lakshita is so cute n ch-16 was super duper cute n beautifulπ³π³i may not be commentingbut i will try to read 4 sure , cant afford to not read such amazing stuffπtake care n keep smiling always π
Originally posted by: ArSha_TillIDie
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-Unres-I actually have not believed you've completed this, I don't want to.βΊοΈ This. Thanks.So, coming to the update.The Vidaai was beautifully written.Kabir and Jwala?!?! I'm TOTALLY shipping them now, all thank to you.Well he needed someone who gets him πI never knew that Poem would mean something to me when I learnt it, now it does.The parallels drawn! What are you?! Outstanding. *applauds*I so wanna quote the whole part.The field and the cloud are loversAnd between them I am a messenger of mercy.I quench the thirst of one;I cure the ailment of the other.This parallel was my fav. Like, HOW?! *all hail*The rest of the chapter. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. The Love was as beautiful and the love-making. *bravo*Thanks! Was really nervous about this. Poem k liye I'll have to give credit to my Mom. I had this nun in schoolwho just paraphrased it to us instead of explaining... Came home , asked Ma and the awesome person that she is- she explained every possible connotation that the poem could have. It's been one of my favourites ever since. Sorry if I bored you with my story. And glad you like the parallel. Oh, and as usual that's my favourite too.πThe Epilogue.Lucky, the name and the baby-CUTENESS OVERLOAD. Lakshita is different.The Father-Daughter relationship is beautiful. They're going to make an awesome Ramesh-Nisha duo. :)Kirti and Saurav!!! GO, GO, GO! *happy dance*"Noi tupp!" Lakshita informed him^ I couldn't help but go 'awww'!Isn't that what babies are for?Viraj rolled his eyes. "Genius!""You called me, bhai?" Kabir interrupted.Kabiraa! I'm gonna miss him bad.Me too. *hugs and cries*But between them, it was okay to be awkward.All was well. :')What an incredible end to an even more incredible story. I'm in awe.Thanks! That kind of describes any relationship to me... Not just "love"Don't stop writing, Shivi, not for anyone. You're pretty damn good at it. You're amazing, Lady, you know that.I can't tell you how much I'll miss you and your updates. I pray you'll be back soon.And that you'll do your exams well and will get into your 'dream college'.All the best, my JKR.Love you, Miss you. Be back soon! *huuugs*
Originally posted by: MyselfMihu
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Ps: I love u
Originally posted by: jhanvi.123
Whoa! A ghost reserved the post!π²See Shivi, the power of your story has attracted a comment from the great beyond!ππ
Come back on the earth sis, you have tons of exams lined up too, you can't escape themπ
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