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An exceptional update as usual and enough of a sample to display the flair you possess.
As much I was eagerly waiting for this update, I was also dreading the anticipated hospital showdown. But, true to my belief you have rolled me right in by warming us up with the light mood of prancing Anitha and then easing on to the dreadful parts.
Anitha definitely looks like someone whose purpose of life is to live it. It was hard to decide if she was flirting or being herself. But, that is a compliment in my book any day. Some flirt with words and some with acts and looks like she had the knack of using both. But, I love her for that for the simple reason that whatever she did seemed to be genuine and honest. Aman might be feeling a little jittery with her acts and words but I have to feeling that the same silliness will start looking cute for him.
"Price of Penance" - A poetic title worthy of your caliber, but I would have been even sold for a simple version called "Art of guilt". Kushi's emotion of nothing but guilt, Arnav's guilt of helplessness, and Manya's guilt of jumping the gun...it feels like other than one who lost her real sense and lying on the hospital bed, everyone else is stuck with a sense of guilt.
We are all glad about Lavanya's physical recovery, but with the truth coming out from all ends, I am not sure where her mental state will be headed to. Unfortunately for Khushi, Lavanya might have been partially successful and the truth is not going to reach Khushi on time. Looks like her journey of guilt trip has already started. Arnav is not far behind either and we have to see how far a trip they both embark on before meeting each other.
I am readying myself for this phase of story and journey. But I am also afraid that guilt has a way of bending minds to do extreme things. Hoping for the best for Arshi and hoping the guilt phase will end soon for us Saffronians.
As much I was eagerly waiting for this update, I was also dreading the anticipated hospital showdown. But, true to my belief you have rolled me right in by warming us up with the light mood of prancing Anitha and then easing on to the dreadful parts.
Anitha definitely looks like someone whose purpose of life is to live it. It was hard to decide if she was flirting or being herself. But, that is a compliment in my book any day. Some flirt with words and some with acts and looks like she had the knack of using both. But, I love her for that for the simple reason that whatever she did seemed to be genuine and honest. Aman might be feeling a little jittery with her acts and words but I have to feeling that the same silliness will start looking cute for him.
"Price of Penance" - A poetic title worthy of your caliber, but I would have been even sold for a simple version called "Art of guilt". Kushi's emotion of nothing but guilt, Arnav's guilt of helplessness, and Manya's guilt of jumping the gun...it feels like other than one who lost her real sense and lying on the hospital bed, everyone else is stuck with a sense of guilt.
We are all glad about Lavanya's physical recovery, but with the truth coming out from all ends, I am not sure where her mental state will be headed to. Unfortunately for Khushi, Lavanya might have been partially successful and the truth is not going to reach Khushi on time. Looks like her journey of guilt trip has already started. Arnav is not far behind either and we have to see how far a trip they both embark on before meeting each other.
I am readying myself for this phase of story and journey. But I am also afraid that guilt has a way of bending minds to do extreme things. Hoping for the best for Arshi and hoping the guilt phase will end soon for us Saffronians.
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