MG SS:Salaam e Ishq#2 *|| Part 57 @ Page 141 ||* 27-Sep-2020 - Page 79

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice part

Geet is not able believe what everyone is saying about maan

Contradict between heart and brain

Hope maan express his feelings soon before something goes wrong

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@Fariya waiting for your review 

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Thank you all for your comments and likes would be updating tomorrow hopefully

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Omg. Seriously maan. How Much longer. Geet should Go away   Only then will maan realize. He knows that too. He shoultalknyo her about his fear. He is so afraid to loose her that he is losing her anyways

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Hello everyone,

hope you all still have the patience to deal with this maan, coz geet is loosing it now and here is the big twist just around the corner. get ready to see geet's sherni avatar.


enjoy the update and do leave your reviews.


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MG SS Salaam e Ishq


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Part 48



Geet woke up with the bright sunlight showering her and the first thing she felt was acute pain in her neck and back …she winced realizing she slept on the window bench …cursing her stupidity she sat straight remembering the whole night all over again…already regretting it to be a weekday …

 

**^^**

 

Aniee: Dadi maa ..bhaikahan hain ? pooja mien bhi nahi aaye …

 

Dadi maa: Bete he is busy in the study ..aap breakfast finish kijeye or you’ll get late for your class ..

 

Prem had already left & aniee left soon after finishing with her toast while dadi maa sat worried when nakul arrived to clear the table ..

 

Dadi Maa: nakul Maan …gym se bahar aaye ?

 

Nakul: g ….Abhi abhi apne room mien gaye hain …

 

The old lady sighed a breath of relief…

 

Aap unki black coffee banayi …hum lekar jayenge …

 

A few minutes after she walked in maan’s room only to see him getting ready for office …she stood at the door step trying to decipher …from the outlook he appeared completely normal ..like usual but for a person who knew that he has spent the last few hours in the gym breaking the cold ice blocks and hard wooden planks …hurting himself relentlessly …this was every bit worrisome

 

Good morning Dadi maa…aap yahan …nakul kahan hai …why isn’t he here with the coffee ..

 

She smiled despite her worried state of mind and walked in ..

 

Bas humara mann kiya apne bete se milne ka ..

 

Maan smiled turning to take his shirt putting it on ..

 

Savitri devi stood trying to see past the facade maan was trying to pull off but she just couldn’t understand what must have happened …she kept a hand on his shoulder and he turned to face her ..

 

Sab theek hai na maan…

 

Ofcourse dadi maa …ek kaam kijeye aap neeche chaliye ill just join you for the breakfast ..(he was about to pick his watch but stopped) …acha wohh prem theek tha …

 

Aapka pouch raha tha…but ready hukar school chala gaya tha …

 

Koi baat nahi ills peak with him at dinner ..

 

Maan bete …sach mien..koi baat nahi hai ..

 

Nothing dadi maa …sach mien ..

 

**^^**

 

Geet’s mami entered her room just as she stood up to go to her en suite…

 

Geet puttar office nahi jaarahi …

 

She took the towel and took out a dress from her cupboard mindlessly ..

 

Ar’re jawab tu de…jana hai k nahi ..

 

Chali jaongi …thori deir se shayad ..mamaji office gaye ..

 

Han wohh tu kab k gaye… pareshan thay kuch.. bina breakfast k hi chale gaye waise tu aaj late kaise hugayi hai ..

 

Geet stood in the middle of the room …still disoriented …lost and massaging her neck to get rid of the stiffness …

 

Hmm …waise aap tyaar hui hain subha subha …kahin jana hai ..

 

Geet puttar mien tu rozhi subha tyaaar huti hon tulsi pooja se pehle …tu ne aaj notice kiya hai ..

 

Geet looked away still contemplating whether or not to go office …because going would mean facing Maan…and she was so not in a state of being in the same place as him …

 

Tu sun rahi hai …

 

Han sorry …mami woh mien ….kya kaha aapne ..

 

Le… kahan dhyaan hai tera …mien keh rahi thi agar tu office nahi jaa rahi tu mere saath chal na grocery lekar aajate hain ..

 

Itni subha ..

 

Han humesha raat kojaate hain itna rush milta hai mart mien …aur phir abhi jayenge tu fruits and sabzi bhi saath le lenge ..

 

Mami woh …

 

Tu soch le …mien naashta banati hoon …

 

Actually chalte hain mera office jaane ka mann nahi hai ..

 

She just closed her washroom door when her phone buzzed with a call from pinky ..

 

Geet puttar pinky kacall hai ..

 

Mami ji usko bolden mien office nahi aarahi ..

 

Acha theek hai tu neeche aajana jaldi ..

 

Hello …

 

Geet yeh teri awaaz kokya hugaya ..? 70 saal ki budhi jaise kyun sound kar rahi hai ..

 

Pinky puttar kyun kmien geet ki mami bol rahi hoon ….

 

Oh ..sorry mami ji …I mean aunty ji …woh geet

 

Wohh geet busy hai ..

 

Acha koi nahi …office aayegi tu baat karlungi ..

 

Nahi nahi ..geet office nahi aarahi aaj ..

 

Par kyun ..? wohh theek hai na ..

 

Han han theek hai …

 

Tu phir chotii ..?? geet tou kabhi leave nahi leti ..

 

Han par aaj wohh ..woh usko dekhne larke waale aarahe hain na …iss liye ..

 

Geet ko dekhne ….par wohh iske liye chutti ..

 

Han special larka haina ….tu tyaari bhi special honi chahiye ..

 

Pinky gave a weird smile across the line still sounding confused ..

 

G …g aunty gi ..


yeh office waale bhi na ek chutti p kitne sawaal karte hain... geet aayegi tu usko batadungi k mene bahana kiya banaya ...

 

15 min after she walked down messaging her team that she won’t be coming …

 

Mami ji ..chalien

 

Tu kuch khayegi ..

 

Geet looked at the paratha .. but didn't had the mood to eat so went past picking up the list..

 

Aapne nashta kiya ?

 

Han mene tu kiya …

 

Bas tu phir nikaltehain 9 baj gaye hain phir rush hujayega ...

 

Han han …chal ..

 

Mien scooty nikalti hoon …

 

Are par scooty kyun gaari mangate hain na ..wohh mobile se bolate hain na …

 

Mami ji late hujayega…aap chaliye hum wapsi mien dekh lenge ..

 

Acha chal …mien bas lipstick laga kar aati hoon …who paratha khaya na tu ..

 

Gi mien bahar wait karti hoon ..

 

**^^**

 

Maan entered his cabin and the emptiness hit him with full force …the first thing he noticed was her empty seat across the glass …absence of his steaming coffee on his table and the warmth she carried with her …last night was rough …he was filled with restlessness …god only knows how he locked himself in the gym venting just to stop himself from going at her home and making sure she hasn’t left him already and her absence from the office only heightened his paranoia …

 

he was pacing left right when Anushka entered the cabin with a note pad and his appointment dairy in her hand ..and a bright smile ..

 

Good morning sir ..

 

What’s so good about this morning …

 

G sir …wohh

 

Ms. ___ whatever your name is aap shayad bhool gayi hain but let me remind you kisi k cabin mien aane se pehle knock karte hain …

 

So ..sorry sir woh mien …

 

Coffee kahan hai meri..

 

G …

 

Coffee …last time I knew you were appointed as my secretary right ??

 

G …g sir but wohh …

 

Wohh kya ..

 

Wohh tu geet ma’am…har roz wohh hi banati hain ..

 

Tu ek kaam karte hain na tumhain fire kar dete hain ….agar geet ne hi karna hai sab tu why are you here ..

 

I am sorry sir ..mien abhi lati hoon ..

 

And before maan could say anything else she ran away …only to collide with pari on her way to pantry..

 

Pari: what the hell…look where you are walking …

 

Ma’am …ill be fired today …I am so sure ..he is completely out of his mind …aur mujhe tu geet ma’am jaise coffee bhi banani nahi aati ..

 

Wohh tu kisi ko bhi nahi aata Anushka ..what I know is he takes it black with a block of sugar …

 

Anushka left murmuring while pari stood wondering ..

 

So it begins ..!!

 

**^^**

 

Mami ji aur kuch lenahai aapko ..

 

Nahi geet list mien jokuch tha sab le liya …

 

Tu chaliye bill kara lete hain …

 

Han chal …

 

Wohh grocery ke paise..

 

O teri …puttar wohh tune jo paise diye thay wohh tu mien ghar pe bhool gayi ..

 

WHAT …!! Acha ek minute …(she checked her wallet for her ATM)… chaliye ATM hai mere pas …

 

**^^**

 

Geet walked in KM only to see dadi maa giving orders to staff for lunch …when she hugged her from back..

 

Ar’re bete aap ..iss waqt yahan kaise ??

 

Geet parted and she turned towards her …

 

Kyun dadi maa …mujhe yahan aane k liye appointment lena hai ..

 

Bilkul bhi nahi …aap jab chahen aa sakti hain ..

 

Nakul …yeh kuch grocery hai …kitchen mien rakhdo …

 

Dadi maa yeh dekhiye..mien grocery k liye gayi thi …mujhe prem waala hot chocolate mil gaya …

 

Geet bete …itna pamper mat kijeye prem ko ..

 

Oh ho dadi maa …hot chocolate kahan se pampering hui …prem ne 1 week se sahi se milk nahi piya ..

 

Aap se kuch bhi kehna bekaar hai …yeh bataiye yeh office ki jaga subha subha grocery kahan puhanch gayi aap ..

 

Wohh bas dadi maa…yoon hi ..

 

Geet …!! Ab aap hum sebhi baat share nahi karengi ?

 

Dadi maa bas ….wohh tabiyat theek nahi lag rahi thi tu bas …

 

Kya hua aapko …

 

Kuch nahi bas ..neck pain ..

 

Aap log bhi na ..poora poora din laptop k samne rahenge tu aur kya huga …

 

Dadi maa kuch nahi hua…

 

Rehne dijeye aap …painkiller li ..

 

Nahi dadi maa …theek hu jayega …

 

Chup kijeye …sab ka khayal rakhti hain aur apna bilkul nahi …nakul ….Nakul idhar aaye (nakul camefrom the kitchen)… nakul geet k liye sandwich aur juice lekar aaiye aur painkiller bhi …

 

Chaliye geet humaare room mien chalte hain …rest kijeye aap ..

 

Dadi maa …iss hi liye nahi bata rahi thi …

 

Geet apni shakal dekhiye aisa lag raha hai kitni tired aur bemaar hu gayi hain aap … bete hum kuch nahi sun rahe ab chaliye aap …

 

**^^**

 

Mujhe samajh nahi aaraha tum log yahan kaam karne aate ho ya picnic manane … ek file …rohan ek file nahi la sake ho tum log last 2 hours se ..

 

Sir who file par Romeo ne working ki thi he is on a site visit aur us ne geet ma’am ko kal handover ki hai file ..

 

I don’t want any excuses…Romeo ko bolao… geet ko bolao do whatever you want I want that file in my hand today ..

 

He walked out and satin adi’s room where even pari was…

 

Kya hua rohan …where’s the ghost ..

 

MD Cabin mien ma’am ..

 

Adi gave his signature laugh …

 

Adi sir yahan meri jobp bani hai aur aap hans rahe ho ..

 

Rohan geet is not here…this was expected ..

 

Adi: hua kya hai rohan..

 

Ar’re kal jis file pe Romeo kaam kar raha tha …wohh geet ma’am ne kahan rakhi hai I have no idea…unka laptop lock hai …Romeo ka phone unreachable hai …and MSK is asking for that only ..

 

Adi: Amid London project crisis why MK is looking for that file ..

 

Pari shook her head and gave her *Isn’t-it-obvious* look to both men ..

 

Rohan now you only have 2 options; find the file or ruin geet’s leave ..

 

Pari ma’am ..i don’t want to call her …she hardly ever take a leave ..

 

**^^**

 

Geet was resting in dadi maa’s room lying her head on the pillow while she was caressing her head …

 

Mien theek hoon dadimaa ..

 

Geet hum serious hain…aapko apna khayal rakhna chahiye …apne breakfast nahi kiya …subha subha bahar ghoom rahe hain …

 

Who tu bas jaldi mien..

 

Aur yeh neck pain…iska kya ..

 

Geet mummed lost …she so much wanted to voice all the questions her mind was screaming at her butthere was nobody she could talk with …never in her life she felt so alone …so isolated …never ever she missed her mother so much ..may be that’s why she came here …her sub-conscious mind took her here …

 

Maan ne kuch kaha aap se ?

 

Dadi maa’s question cut right through her thoughts and she snapped out of it ..

 

Nahi ..nahi dadi maa..aur waise bhi aapko pata hai na …unke mood swings ki adat hugayi hai ab tu ..

 

The pained look on geets’ face was all the confirmation the old woman needed to be sure that her favorites children were indeed amid a storm …yet again !!

 

Buhat tang karte haina woh aapko

 

Han ..(geet said lostin her hurt).. buhat ..par yeh haq bhi tu mene hi diya hai unko ..

 

Geet …kuch kaha aapne..

 

Dadi maa …aisa kyun huta hai k koi apna aapko baar baar dukh deta hai phir bhi aa puss ko khud se door nahi kar paate ..

 

Dadi maa smiled caressing her head with all her affection ..

 

Kyun ke wohh humara apna hai .. jab dil se dil ka Rishta huta hai na geet tu kuch bhi adha nahi huta …sab sanjha huta hai …khushi ho ya dukh dono ek si mehsoos karte hain …

 

Par agar Rishta ek tarfa ho tu ..

 

Is ki gawahi tu dil hide sakta hai bete …ke Rishta ek tarfa hai ya do tarfa

 

Par dil tu jhoota hai…dhokebaaz hai …

 

Hum nahi maante geet…ek larki ka dil kabhi jhooti gawahi nahi deta …specially uss insaan k liye jis’se who pyar karti ho …us insaan ki nazr aur dil dono parh sakti hai …

 

Geet fell silent listening to her remarks… how would she ever believe her hearts call that maan also loves her …after all he has said to distance her …his rudeness …every time he hurt her with his words …but then his actions contradict so much with his own words …

 

Finally she fell asleep under the affect of pain killer remembering all the times maan has been her support …every time they were close …she basked in the warmth of his body and his smell that MSK special fragrance …a smile kept on her face and dadi maa left seeing her at peace …

 

While on the other hand maan had everyone on their toes …making each person terrified with his anger Anushka didn’t even dared go near him after he threw the morning coffee mug on the floor …and rohan was busy searching the file ..

 

**^^**

 

Geet walked down the stair case searching for dadi maa …when she spotted tarun taking a trolley full of food ..

 

Tarun Guest aaye hainkya ?

 

G madam ..dadi ma k NGO ki kuch log aaye hain ..

 

Acha theek hai …woh main hall mien hain na …

 

G ..

 

Mien kitchen mien hoon..dadi maa pouchen tu bata dena ..

 

G theek hai ..

 

Dadi maa entered the kitchen after almost an hour ..panic and worried

 

Geet yeh kya …aapko rest karne ka kaha tha aur app yahan kitchen mien ..

 

Oho dadi maa ..i am completely fine now …aur mera neck pain bhi chala gaya ..

 

Really …1 hour mien ..

 

(she walked around the counter and hugged her) ..Aapke pyaar ka kamal hai ..

 

Ziada maska mat mar’iye …aur chaliye yahan se ..

 

Dadi ma bas 10 minpasta bas hone hi wala hai …

 

Yeh kya aapne poora lunch khud ban aliya ..nakul aap kya kar rahe hain …picnic banana aaye hain kya..

 

Geet chuckled …earning a glare from dadi maa ..

 

Sorry dadi maa …but aap na bilkul maan sir ki tarha daant rahi hain ..

 

Hmm unki dadi hain unse ziada strict hu sakte hain hum …chaliye aap ..out from the kitchen now ..jo kuch rehta hai nakul dekhenge …

 

**^^**

 

Maan just returned from a video conference with his London staff …and he saw rohan still rummaging through geet’s cabinets …he threw the paper weight across the table trashing the coffee tables’ glass top …frustrated and worried about what could have made geet take a leave and then he remembered what fernandes said …just like last night he wondered if something led to him saying all what he said to him …and he dialed his number ..

 

M: Fernandes …what happened last night

 

F: What are you talking about maan ..

 

M: geet …is she ok …

 

F: Yes perfectly fine..

 

M: Then what …why did you said all you said

 

F: Seriously …you wanna know the answer again !!

 

M: Fernandes …geet is not in office ..i need to know whats going on ..why has she taken an off …

 

F: Fine …ill get in touch with ronit ..

 

He hung up the cal land walked out towards adi’s cabin only to eavesdrop on pinky, adi and pari’s talk ..

 

Pinky: Bechara rohan…maan sir ne kitna dant diya usko ..

 

Adi: abhi bhi filed hundh raha hai ..

 

Pari: You guys should have seen anushka’s face this morning …she looked petrified …

 

Pinky: aaj pakka koina koi tu job se jayega …

 

Adi: Geet se baat huikisi ki …sab theek hai na ..

 

Pinky: Mene subha callkiya tha …uski mami ne uthaya …she said geet ko dekhne koi larka aaraha hai so she is taking an off

 

Pari: Impossible geet iss kam k liye leave nahi legi ..

 

Pinky: mene bhi yeh hi kaha …but aunty said k koi special aaraha hai tu tyaari bhi special honi chahiye ..

 

Adi and pari shared a confused looked and then looked away as if both feeling the same question butnot wanting to voice it out …because MSK & GEET …how can that be …!! Yet they knew it is …and it has always been ..!!

 

Maan walked away listening to the news ..partially in shock …partially angry …wondering if that’s what fernandes got to know …of course rohan is always shadowing geet he may have heard something and informed fernandes because of which he lectured her …but how can she …!! Then a voice from the back of his mind mocked him …why can’t she !! and that when his phone buzzed with an incoming call from rohan ..

 

Sir fernandes asked me to update you on geet ma’am’s whereabouts

 

Not necessary now …I got to know ronit …

 

And he disconnected the call without even listening to ronit …

 

**^^**

 

Maan walked in KM earlier in the evening completely frustrated ..the whole day was a crap …he was still contemplating calling geet but he just couldn’t press the dial button …

 

Lost in his thought she was walking past the corridor when he heard the melodious sound …and his heart picked a beat …his steps took him to the source in the lawn where he stood behind a pillar …seeing geet running around blind folded trying to catch prem and aniee while they were running away …her giggle that heart filled laughter when she caught prem in her embrace …after almost 18 hours he breathed normally …he felt his heart beat in his ear …and the smile that spread across his face just by seeing her from afar …the day just got amazing …he stood the read miring the trio …his eyes fixated on the angel filling his house ..his life…with the warmth of her love, affection and innocence …her mere presence is enough to fill him with life …hope and happiness..

 

While he was standing there lost… unconscious to his surrounding…time and the entire world… dadi maa came from behind ..

 

Subha jaise din start hua tha …humien laga nahi tha ke aapke face pe yeh smile hum aaj dekhenge ..

 

Maan snapped out of his trance and turned to see the teasing expression on his grandmother face…embarrassed he looked away ..

 

Dadi maa aap …wohh…mujhe kya hua tha …mien tu bilkul theek hoon

 

Really maan bete …tabhi aap raat se subha tk gym mien thay aur geet ka mood theek hone mien subha se shaam hugayi ..

 

Geet ko kya hua ??

 

Yeh aap unse kyun nahi puchte ..

 

Maan looked away…while dadi maa shook her head

 

Maan agar zara si fiqar aap jata denge na geet ko tu aapka maan kam nahi par jayega …uss bachi kaaur kitna imtehaan lenge aap …

 

Maan glanced at geet once and left from there avoiding the question as always just that now he doesn’t have any words to deny that claim of the world …

 

**^^**

 

Geet came to the kitchen after a while and saw nakul preparing the black coffee ..

 

Nakul …wohh yeh kis kliye

 

Wohh maan sir aagaye na tu unke liye ..

 

Geet (st): itni jaldi kaise aagaye ?

 

Kuch kaha aapne ..?

 

Nahi aap lekar jaiye…mien juice le jaati hoon prem aur aniee k liye ..

 

**^^**

 

Prem: Geet aunty please thori deir roko na ..

 

Geet: Prem bacha mien aur nahi ruk sakti dekho 6 bajne wale hain ..aur apko homework mere saath karna tha hum ne kar liya aur game bhi khela …ab mujhe jaane do ..

 

Prem: No… no …no …no…aap diner kar k hi jaogi ..

 

Dadi: Prem stop being stubborn …gandi baat bete …jaane do geet ko ache se ..

 

He turned away frowning while geet stood saddened …

 

Aniee: Geet is badmash ki black mailing mien bilkul nhi aana …dinner k baad bhi iska reaction yeh hi huga tumhaare jaane par …

 

Geet went and hugged prem …

 

Geet: prem mujhe janatu hai beta ..mien humesha yahan nahi reh sakti na..please ap jaldi se hans do aur mujhe jaane do

 

Par kyun… (prem turned and hugged her tight) aap reh jaona please geet aunty ..

 

Aniee stood there seeing geet clearly overwhelmed yet hiding away from prem ..

 

Prem bacha ..dekho aap jante ho na aap aise mood off karoge tu geet aunty bhi sad hujayengi …aap chahte ho mien sad hujaon

 

Prem shook his head and parted ..

 

Nahi …aap jao ..par promise karo aap kal aaoge mujh se milne

 

Geet smiled ..

 

Pakka …kal zaror aajaongi.



PRECAP: Geet confronts maan 

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 4 years ago
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 Awesome pt

 Dadi observe that he showing him self normal but he's bit disturb so she try to know but he very smartly cover him self but his calmness went in air not finding Geet in hr cabin 

 His secretary on toe and rahul too on his hit list of anger 

 Ferendes words not letting Maan in peace he want to know exactly what happened that he warned him fr he listen pinky talk and he was upset   

 Came home early and seeing Geet their he have smile on his face Daadi saw that but before she question him he left ignoring hr question dadi knows both Geet and Maan disturbed 

 Hope Geet get hr answers soon 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thank you so much for so many updates..


Amazing...


Conversation  between Maan and Dadima and also the one  between daadima and Geet are simply awesome and heart touching..


Hope Geet will be able to discuss the questions and confusions in her mind with someone..more than having questions , not able to discuss them with anyone else adds up to the frustration...


Hope Maan with atleast take a step forward now..


Waiting for Geet and Maan confrontation..will it be only about security or will geet talk about his concern/love towards her...


Eagerly waiting for the next ..


You gave 3 updates  after you are back..stilll I know I know i am being greedy 😳 but cant help in asking you one more quick update...cant wait for their  confrontation 


Finally,  you are awesome with your writing 😊 ..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Dadi observe them she knows something bothering them 

Lol her mami Kiya reason Diya hai choti ka 

So geet spend time in km 

While maan bajng band to his staff

Finally he saw her 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 48

Dynamic update.

sad seeing both in pain.

can understand dadima's concern for Maan. 

dadi knows Maan so well. 

well Geet taking the day off is reasonable.

of cos Maan is restless that Geet is not at work.

MSK is such a terror at the office. 

at least he spoke to Fernandes.

Maan overhears the talks in the offices.

great that Geet went to KM. dadi and Geet share a lovely bond. 

liked his reaction when he saw Geet there. nice that dadi comments on this.

as expected Geet is shocked that Maan is home so early. 

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Posted: 4 years ago

incredible precap! finally Geet confronts Maan.

update soon